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Old 19-10-2020, 05:20 AM #376
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...Roisin holds the force/power of many crystals plus she holds the force/power of her ancestry as well and that can’t be underestimated for her battle...
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...Dancing with ghosts.....so bittersweet though to look out over her childhood and those fire lit dances she had and see so much destruction over time, stripping her childhood away...
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...oh a new enemy now that the darkness is lifted, a great ending because it’s obviously more a continuation and I love how you do that, Scarlett......I so enjoyed this chapter of their journey and look forward to starting the next one...I’ll begin it in the next few days...Empress Varla Reins sounds interesting...(...not necessarily in a good way, eeek....)...so I look forward to getting to know her more...I love how badass Roisin is becoming in her confidence....
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...oh a new enemy now that the darkness is lifted, a great ending because it’s obviously more a continuation and I love how you do that, Scarlett......I so enjoyed this chapter of their journey and look forward to starting the next one...I’ll begin it in the next few days...Empress Varla Reins sounds interesting...(...not necessarily in a good way, eeek....)...so I look forward to getting to know her more...I love how badass Roisin is becoming in her confidence....
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Thank you I wanted to do a flip of the previous book's cover, and it turned out really well
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...wow, Varla is horrendous..brutal/cruel/relentless...this is a completely different opening vibe to any of the other books, I think...fixing that ‘enemy’ so firmly and completly at the beginning and no ‘middle ground of understanding’ to her at all... in contrast to her brutality...that meticulous attention to the details of ‘order in her life’...two complete opposite spectrums in her personality...great beginning, Scarlett.....
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...wow, Varla is horrendous..brutal/cruel/relentless...this is a completely different opening vibe to any of the other books, I think...fixing that ‘enemy’ so firmly and completly at the beginning and no ‘middle ground of understanding’ to her at all... in contrast to her brutality...that meticulous attention to the details of ‘order in her life’...two complete opposite spectrums in her personality...great beginning, Scarlett.....
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..Roisin and Varla really baiting and testing each other...Varla really does feel like her most threatening enemy so far...
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....Varla really is deliciously evil ...the ways she publicly executed Helios in such a brutal and callous way, I love the enemy you’re creating in her, Scarlett...
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...and your chapter cover graphics, Scarlett......really gorgeous...
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