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Old 23-10-2020, 02:59 PM #401
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.....yeah, I would imagine that it’s always really fun to write the villain and to camp up that villain as well into real evil territory...it’s always said by actors/actresses playing those characters as well......she is great fun to read even though she’s appalling...
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.....yeah, I would imagine that it’s always really fun to write the villain and to camp up that villain as well into real evil territory...it’s always said by actors/actresses playing those characters as well......she is great fun to read even though she’s appalling...
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Not done a new chapter (yet at least) but finished the Western Continent map!


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...Roisin may have contained Varla but for how long with Varla persistently baiting her...Roisin isn’t always in control of her impulses and emotions...
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...this is gorgeous, so well done.....I was actually hoping that you’d do another one, Scarlett...because it really does help to be able to understand their world more ...the maps bring more 3 dimension...
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I think I'll still add a few more touches to it

Now I have to do one for Farenai xD
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...Keegan and Roisin.....I love how all potential bitterness is absent...I’m not liking ‘labs’ though...that sounds sinister...
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...Keegan and Roisin.....I love how all potential bitterness is absent...I’m not liking ‘labs’ though...that sounds sinister...
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Indeed! Roisin felt sorry for Keegan more than anything else when she learned of him. She knows what was stolen from him

The labs are basically the control centre for the whole of Sanctuary o:
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Also, made this for fun: Sanctuary OS, the operating system used at Sanctuary Labs!


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......they would be amazing screensavers...
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Haha xD It's good to be back in Ishtall
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After the current book, I plan two more books, to wrap up The Crystalla Series. I do have plans for a sequel series to follow, however, before I get around to that, I will be going back and redoing both Wynd Academy and Luna Legacy to fit in more with the style and quality of the majority of the series.
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