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Old 30-10-2020, 05:21 PM #451
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I'll hopefully get it done by then it's nice being able to add more details to the old chapters, because, due to the way I wrote the shifting perspectives back then, there wasn't any time to breathe
...I think that your characters have grown and developed so much as well and they deserve that detail...I love that you have this incredible creative talent to focus on, Scarlett...we all so much need focuses for our emotional energies in times like these, especially...and your writing is always such a joy to read.....
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...I think that your characters have grown and developed so much as well and they deserve that detail...I love that you have this incredible creative talent to focus on, Scarlett...we all so much need focuses for our emotional energies in times like these, especially...and your writing is always such a joy to read.....
Indeed, now their personalities are fully formed, they deserve a better introduction
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Introducing the prologue of Wynd Academy Retold! https://t.co/031lvh1q7h?amp=1



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....ooooo, really exciting prologue....that’s excellent, Scarlett.....
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Thank you! The first person perspective in the first one seemed quite awkward, so I shifted to third person, doing so meant I could add a ton more detail!
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I'll write some more of both today!
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...ughhhhh, we wanted so much to cheer Celeste in how she out manoeuvred Varla...but we know how brutal and evil, a frustrated Varla can be, which takes away any cheering...that poor trooper......she’s hateful...
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Dex is a right old romantic
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Indeed, though it seems Treleva may have something of a conscience
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...just because I keep losing the link and searching to find the page it’s on...I’ll pop this here and keep carrying it forward each page...oooooops......

https://www.inkitt.com/stories/scifi/609861
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..how weird would it be if in destroying Varla, Roisin destroyed herself also because they were the same person...Roisin being the good and Varla being the evil of the same heartbeat....
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Perhaps, or they could have been wrong
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She was killed of with the intent of her being brought back as a Crystalla
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