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Old 15-01-2021, 07:28 AM #726
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...I’m so on the drag this morning, Scarlett...but I’ll catch up with your rewrite of Harvest and the new chapter either later today or tomorrow morning......I’m glad that you rewrote some if it wasn’t feeling right to you and not telling how you wanted it to...(...it always fits perfectly for me but you’re obviously the hand that will guide it to perfection..)....
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...the changes with Harvest....


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....wow, the changes really do work, Scarlett...it really is conveying ‘evil’, pure evil because all emotion is stripped away and that’s what it has to be, for Roisin...the complete opposite of her....?...the power of the crystals will be hers through the power of her emotions and their battle will be against a complete lack of any mercy whatsoever...?...’Tartarus’ is a spectacular name...
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....hmmm, so I’m confused...it’s obviously not real but what meaning, though...is Jasmine an indication of the future and that those three survive...
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....wow, the changes really do work, Scarlett...it really is conveying ‘evil’, pure evil because all emotion is stripped away and that’s what it has to be, for Roisin...the complete opposite of her....?...the power of the crystals will be hers through the power of her emotions and their battle will be against a complete lack of any mercy whatsoever...?...’Tartarus’ is a spectacular name...
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Indeed, Tartarus is the Greek name for a deep underground demonic dungeon! I love the name
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....hmmm, so I’m confused...it’s obviously not real but what meaning, though...is Jasmine an indication of the future and that those three survive...
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Or is it a means of keeping them surpressed
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...oh I didn’t think of that.../...so sinister and yeah, that would be the perfect way to control...
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...oh, you were right, then ...they are being controlled ...jeez it’s as if you were writing it, Scarlett..so it’s the dream controlling crystal and it’s not controlling Ruby, though, I hope that she can somehow get through to their memories.../lead them to the memory crystal...?...
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...oh, you were right, then ...they are being controlled ...jeez it’s as if you were writing it, Scarlett..so it’s the dream controlling crystal and it’s not controlling Ruby, though, I hope that she can somehow get through to their memories.../lead them to the memory crystal...?...
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Indeed, its as if they control reality itself
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Nope, its a poster using a stock image

I believe this is what your were thinking of xD
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...this is actually really fascinating because Ruby is obviously concerned and fears that Roisin will prefer her dream daughter of Jasmine and will want to stay within that dream to spend her time with Jasmine...but I do think that Roisin’s love for Jasmine and her need for her in her life, will be what will break the dream and break the control over Roisin atm...but it creates great interest...
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...this is actually really fascinating because Ruby is obviously concerned and fears that Roisin will prefer her dream daughter of Jasmine and will want to stay within that dream to spend her time with Jasmine...but I do think that Roisin’s love for Jasmine and her need for her in her life, will be what will break the dream and break the control over Roisin atm...but it creates great interest...
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Indeed, she needs the time to heal, but at the same time, she can't rest yet
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...OMG, Yay...not only that the dream spell was broken but also, that Roisin’s love for Ruby as her daughter was the thing that broke it ...Ruby was ‘the dream’ that Roisin most wanted to be real and obviously it was real......I love that chapter......
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Indeed! Now it's time for Keegan to be freed!
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