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Old 15-02-2021, 07:13 AM #776
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...who is the golden haired lady in white...you really keep and hold our attention, Scarlett...
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...will Roisin fade, was she always doomed with the Crystal powers...they were a curse, rather than a gift and her fate had always been sealed...
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Old 16-02-2021, 12:30 PM #781
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...gosh, the Luna’s are all gathering together as if some silent horn sounding had summoned them all, almost..’they gazed into the middle of the city where the old Academy stood, now encased in nanomachines...’....that so jumps from the page and evokes a vision, Scarlett...the ruin and devastation that were once such familiar sights ...getting so close to the end of their journey and yet so far still to go...and will their very lives lay in ruin and death when their journey ends....

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Indeed! I also picked the Acropolis as the picture for this chapter, as I always imagined the old Academy standing like it does
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Indeed! I also picked the Acropolis as the picture for this chapter, as I always imagined the old Academy standing like it does
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...I always imagine and visualise it as that as well, Scarlett...because it’s so symbolic of a long lost world but also still conjures lives that would almost feel touchable still if you reached out...lost souls reaching and screaming out...?.....
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...I always imagine and visualise it as that as well, Scarlett...because it’s so symbolic of a long lost world but also still conjures lives that would almost feel touchable still if you reached out...lost souls reaching and screaming out...?.....
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Indeed, and also, the Acropolis imagery is very closely linked with the Pantheon of Gods, which is close to what Lumina Academy was
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...I love this chapter.....you just balance things so perfectly, Scarlett, which is why it’s so east to feel the visual as well...you just keep the friendships and the more ‘everyday’/human type touch so much in the story...them all being preoccupied in different things as they approach the city when we know that their real thought preoccupation is the huge anticipation and fear they must be feeling and whether any of them even, will survive and feeling a doom that there will be many personal losses etc..but their course is fixed and that has to be...‘I mean, it doesn’t have to be the end’...but we know that they feel it most definitely will be ....great writing in how you evoke the actual feelings that they are having...and the sombreness of it all...
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...I’ll catch up more a bit later.....
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Indeed, rather than think about what is ahead of them, they distract each other with thoughts of what might be
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...excuse me, did we just lose Aran.?...sad:...wow at those two chapters, Scarlett...the build up was immense and the Battle of Crystalla felt so much longer, which is exactly perfect for such a crucial and important chapter that it’s all built to...I love your writing......you know that I love the friendship bonds but that last chapter was tremendous......
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...I did think that you were going to take Syl from us as well, Scarlett.......don’t make Roisin angry, you wouldn’t like her when she’s angry......
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...excuse me, did we just lose Aran.?...sad:...wow at those two chapters, Scarlett...the build up was immense and the Battle of Crystalla felt so much longer, which is exactly perfect for such a crucial and important chapter that it’s all built to...I love your writing......you know that I love the friendship bonds but that last chapter was tremendous......
It was indeed a much longer chapter than usual, over 1500 words Felt right for it to last so long though
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...I did think that you were going to take Syl from us as well, Scarlett.......don’t make Roisin angry, you wouldn’t like her when she’s angry......
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I did actually consider it, but I like his character too much, and we already lost a good amount last chapter
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...in A Strange New World, Scarlett..?....again it’s that association to our world now that you do so well...securing a brighter future for those who had fallen...and that really attaches so much to those many lives that have been sadly lost to COVID...and that’s such an awful thing and such terrible losses to face, but will ironically lead to the vaccines etc...and a brighter future and world we hope is there for us again..it really is a battle now also...and so much loss to still face before the world can be brighter and we can feel that true light....


...and hmmmm, New Horizon..?...it’s lovely to see Roisin take up her new role...but did I miss something are/were Mizu and Roisin siblings...?...
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...Captain Elf and the Sundance Kid......it’s so lovely to feel the rebuilding and imagine how they’re all feeling right now...that they can be in that new age of building their futures...the Crystalla of Fate is very intriguing...
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