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Old 15-12-2008, 07:29 AM #39
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Sorry, but I just spotted this

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Originally posted by AndyJK
The dust flew into the wind whistling around the buildings of Holburn Junction. Succinct and to the point, and that's how you have to be when telling a story otherwise the reader is going to get bored quickly.
Dust would be blown along by the wind and would not be able to fly into the wind, unless it was magic dust, or they were really powerful nanobots.

I had

Quote:
The dust flew in the air
Which is a bit more scientifically accurate of what happens when dust meets wind

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