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15-12-2008, 09:54 AM
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Thats a fair point, it was just a quick example as in the sentence you followed on with 'whistling' and then 'wind' and I was merely trying to condense it.
Edit: I meant to say "the dust flew in the wind" but copied and pasted the sentence and forgot to alter it. : |
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