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Every week i am going to paste the recent weeks episodes, in case you missed any! Have fun reading and remember to come on Monday to read the next episdode
____________________ Supernoodles house Fom pulls away from his kiss with Supernoodles Fom: I have to go, This shouldn’t be happening, not after what happened last time! Supernoodles: Please don’t! Fom: If she finds out, I am Dead! So I’m out Fom Leaves. Supernoodles sits down and cries Outside in the square Fom is sitting on the bench alone. Ninastar is walking back home from the vic to her house. She spots Fom on the bench and sits next to him. Ninastar: Bad day? Fom: Huh, oh, Ninastar Ninastar: What’s wrong? Fom: Uh, Nothing, like you said, just a bad day Ninastar: Come on. Lets go home, we need to write a guest list, Maybe we can add the bump to the wedding Fom: What? Ninastar: Fom, you’re going to be a daddy. I’m Pregnant! Foms angry face turns to a shocked one, as he looks at Ninastar Supernoodles house Supernoodles is still crying, as she looks down at a pregnancy test, it reads positive ____________________ Episode 1- Annies house Annie gets up and opens the curtains. It is a sunny day in the square, and today the Vic is holding a birthday party for the owner, Mark. Annie walks out into the kitchen and puts some toast in the toaster. She picks up a paper and reads the “women seeking men” section Annie: MUM!!! The queen vic Christina, Daughter of the owner, is putting up banners. She is quite a smart 21 year old girl, who is disliked by her brother and dad Christina: Have you done the balloons Sam? Sam: No, and I do not plan to either, if you want balloons, you can do them yourself Christina: Well, if you are going to be like that, then do not bother! This is our dads birthday I am trying to organise and you have not helped one little bit! Sam: He wouldn’t do all of this for us Christina: Well, at least he tries! You haven’t done anything all morning. Sam: Well I have been busy! Christina: Busy doing what? Flirting with your new Girlfriend? Sam: Hannah is not my new girlfriend. Just a friend I go to college with! And even if I am seeing her, at least I can find somebody! Sam walks out of the door in a huff, Christina puts her hands on her hips and sighs Annies house BigSister- Yes Dear? Annie: What is this? Annie flashes the newspaper at her BigSister: What, is your mother not allowed to find a nice man now that she has hit 50? Annie: I never said you were not allowed, but with an advertisement like that, he is going to have a shock when you do meet someone! BigSister: What do you mean? Annie reads from her mums advertisement Annie: “A young and sassy mid 30s girl, slim and tall, who likes long nights in and holidays away” BigSister: So? Annie: Mum! You are in your 50’s, you are not sassy, you are short and stumpy and you hate holidays abroad! BigSister: Well, I may have tweaked a few things, but he is not going to care when he gets here! Annie: When who gets here? With that the doorbell rings Annie: You haven’t! _______________________________ Episode 2- Fom and Ninastars house Ninastar: How about Nelly for a girl and Daniel for a boy? Fom: Look Babe, we do not even know if it is a girl or a boy yet Ninastar: Well it is nice to make plans! Do you think we should have the wedding before or after the baby? I think aft… Fom: look, I have to go a minute, I will be back soon Fom Leaves The Queen Vic Christina: Is everything ready? Princess: Yes, the banners are up, and I have laid out all of the food. Christina: Oh Food! Where is Nickyy with that cake she was supposed to be making? Gregalz: Well she has closed the café for today, so either she is not making it, or she is too busy to open the café because she is making it Christina: Well I do hope it is the second one, we need that cake or else the whole thing is ruined! Nickyy enters, holding a poorly made cake. Nickyy is in her late 30‘s. She is the owner of the Café “Nickyys”. Nickyy: Never fear, I am Here! Christina: Thank god! Or may I say, Oh my god! What the Hell is that! Nickyy: A Cake, I spent hours on the decoration! Christina: If you think I am paying for that, then you are wrong! Sam could make a better cake than that and he is 14! Nickyy: What on earth do you mean? I spent hours making this beauty, so you are paying for it nonetheless! Gregalz: It’ll have to do, Mark is coming! Christina: Someone, Lights! the lights are turned off and everything is pitch black, the door to the bar opens, and there is a huge thud Mark: Aghh! Christina: Dad? The lights are turned back on. Mark is lying on the floor, and a pile of books have been knocked over and are sprawled beside him Christina: Dad! Mark: I Think I have broken something, Who the hell turned the lights off! Christina: It was supposed to be a surprise party for you! Mark: Well Surprise Surprise Christina! Annie and BigSisters house BigSister: Annie, go out the back, he is here! Annie: Who is here! BigSister: The man who replied to my advert, his name is Darenn, Now Go! Annie: Aghh, you know what mum, you can handle this, I’m out! Annie runs up the stairs. BigSister goes and answers the door. Darenn stands there, he is wearing a pink vest top and leopard print trousers he is 35 years old, and very much Gay.. BigSister: Well, you are not what I expected dear! Darenn: Well neither are you hunny! I am supposed to be meeting a guy? BigSister: A Guy? Supernoodles house Supernoodles and Fom are sitting on the sofa Supernoodles: I have something to tell you Fom: Don’t tell me you’re pregnant too! Supernoodles stares at Fom. It is clear to him now that she actually is pregnant Fom: I can’t do this! Fom walks out of the house Supernoodles: Fom! FOM! _________________________ Episode 3 In Annie and BigSisters house BigSister and Darenn are sitting at a table, drinking tea BigSister: Well, why did you answer my advertisement if you wanted to meet a bloke? Darenn: Well, I must of got the wrong number. One minutes i am expecting a kind and caring guy to sweep me off my feet, and now i have got you BigSister: What is wrong with me? Darenn: You are a woman? BigSister: And? Darenn: Well i'm gay! BigSister: Are you? Darenn: Oh my. The Queen Vic Christina: The ambulance should be here shortly dad Mark: Well thank god! it's about time. You kids, always causig me trouble! Christina: Dad, we were trying to give you a party for your 50th! Mark: Yes, and look what you made of it! Christina: I was just trying to make you happy Dad Mark: Well i will not be happy until my Boy is here, Where is Sam!? Gregalz: Gone to meet his new girlfriend, Or Friend as he says Mark: Girlfriend! At his age! He is only 15! I want him here at once, who knows what he could be doing with this girl?! Christina: Dad, don't worry, we need to take care of you at the moment. Mark: Christina, Go away, you are no help to anybody around here, I wouldn't really notice if you ran away to Africa Christina: Well maybe i should, At least i would get some thanks for organising a party there! Mark: Fine go, they can have your troublesome ways! Christina: FINE! Christina bursts into tears and runs out of the queen vic, Firewire runs after her. Firewire is a very masculine 32 year old. He likes money but will do anything to help somebody. He is single and lives on his own Firewire: Christina! Christina: Leave me alone Firewire! Christina carries on running, Firewire still running after her Firewire: He didn't mean it mate, he was just joking Christina turns around Christina: Yes he did! He hates me! Firewire: Don't be stupid! You are his daughter! why would he hate you? Christina: That is the thing.. I am not his daughter, just his step-daughter, and now Mum has died, he doesn't care about me anymore! All he cares about is Sam.. his "Blood" son! Christina Breaks down in the middle of the road, Firewire comes and picks her up Firewire: Lets go back to mine, you look like you could do with a cup of tea. Come on, we can talk about it later In Annie and BigSisters house Annie has come downstairs, she is at the table in fits of laughter Annie: This is the funniest thing EVER! BigSister: No it is not Annie, it is just a misunderstanding Darenn: A very big one! Do you have any hotels or B&B's around here? You see i come from Liverpool, and it is nearly Dark now. BigSister: Well there is a B&B over the road? Darenn: Oh very well, i will be off then Annie: Mum! You cannot let him go over to the B&B! Do you know how much Princess charges to people she does not know! BigSister: Well, where else can he go? Annie: He can stay here for the night! The back of a Cab It is now midnight, Fom is sitting in the back of a Cab Callum: Where do you want me to take you then mate? Fom: To the airport please Callum: Very well, where are you going then? Fom: Anywhere, away from here Fom looks up at Supernoodles house, and then at his own house. Ninastar is looking out of the window Fom- (Whispering) I'm sorry The Cab drives off into the distance ____________________ Episode 4 Firewires House Firewire and Christina are sat on the sofa, he has his arm around her and she is crying into his chest Christina: Where did it all go wrong! Me and dad, we were best friends once upon a time! He loved me, like i loved him Firewire: Look hun, he is just angry and in pain. I am sure he will get over it soon? Christina: When will Soon come? He has been like this for the past few months, ever since Mum died! He used to call me his daughter, now he tells everyone i am his step-daughter Firewire: But you are... Christina: I know i am! But i still cannot help it! As much as i want to be his daughter, i am not! I hate myslef, my life and everybody! Firewire: Don't say that! Christina: Like Dad said, i am no use to anyone around here Firewire: Don't be stupid, you are nice and pretty and you are the kindest person i have ever met.. Happy? Christina sits up and Kisses Him, he pushes her away. Christina stands up, and runs out into the square. She lies down on the bench, sobbing. She closes her eyes Annie and BigSisters house It is morning and Darenn is lying on the sofa reading the "Womans own" magazine, Annie walks in Darenn: Oh, good morning dear, nice sleep? Annie: Yes thanks, how about you? I know the sofa is a bit hard Darenn: Oh lovely thankyou dear. Where is your mother? BigSister walks in BigSister: I'm here. Good morning, is everyone okay? Darenn: Yes thankyou, you know dear, you have the prettiest eyes i have ever seen! BigSister: Oh, why thankyou! Annie, i need to have a word, in the Kitchen. Annie: Oh, okay? Ninastars house Ninastar wakes up, Fom still hasn't come back. She picks up her phone and tries ringing him again. It just goes straight to answer phone NinaStar: Hmmm Billy, Princess and Shauns house Billy is the son of Princess and Shaun. Billy is 22, and has his way with the ladies. Shaun is 45, and likes a drink now and again in the vic. He owns the bookies, and likes a gamble. Princess is 42 years old and works at the queen vic. All three of them are sitting around the table eating breakfast. They are discussing the prospect of Billy renting out a flat of his own Shaun: Well, you better start thinking about it soon son, before me and your mum start to get wrinkly, we have lives too you know Billy: I know, but i cannot afford anywh... Princess: Don't give me any of that rubbish Billy, You are 22 and already earning a fortune doing all of your investing in that new supermarket Billy: Yeah, well there is such a thing as saving you know Princess: Yes and Me and your father want to sell up here and go on our romantic holiday to Venice for a month! Don't we dear Shaun ![]() Princess lets off a huge grin as Shaun rolls his eyes Annie and BigSisters house Annie and BigSister are in the kitchen Annie: What! BigSister: What, i was only trying to help! Annie: So you let him stay for another week in MY Room! No Way! BigSister: What, it is only a week! The poor man cannot get home! Annie: Isn't that against the law? I am only 19, and i am going to share my room with a 35 year old bloke BigSister: He is Gay dear, it is not like he is going to try and make a move. Unless he likes both sexes, what do they call those people? Mixed or something? Annie: Bi-sexual Mum! And anyway, who knows what he is! He might be a phsyco for all you know! BigSister: Don't be stupid! He is lovely! Annie: Agghrr! Annie walks out of the kitchen and up to her room The square Christina wakes up. She is lying on the bench still. She gets up and walks back over to the vic, she walks inside, and locks all of the doors. She walks behind the bar and pours a glass of Vodka, which she downs. She starts to cry hysterically Back in the square Ninastar comes out of her house. Callum is getting out of his cab, he spots Ninastar Callum: NinaStar, how are you dear? Ninastar: Well, not good actually. Fom did not come back last night. I am really worried Callum: What do you mean? I drove Fom to the airport last night, said he was getting away from here, i just thought it was a joke NinaStar: The airport? Supernoodles house The phone rings. Supernoodles picks it up. It is Fom Fom: Get out of there now.. It is you i want! Supernoodles: What? Fom: Come down to the airport, i will be waiting! If you are not there by 2 o clock, i will get on the plane alone, and me and you will be over. But if you want to spend the rest of your life with me, then come to the airport by 2, Understood? Supernoodles:What do you mean. I don't underst... Fom: I Love you Fom hangs up Supernoodles: Fom.. FOM! Supernoodles looks at the clock, it is half past 11. She opens the kitchen draw, and pulls out a passport ____________________ Episode 5 Princess, Billy and Shauns house Princess comes into the kitchen to find Billy looking at the house ads in the newspaper Princess: Morning love, Looking at houses? Billy: Yeah, to rent. They have a few nice ones down in the new block of flats where Supernoodles has moved? Princess: Oh really? Sounds nice! How much? Billy: Only £125 a week, with free broadbrand Princess: Deal, you should go for it! Billy: What are you going to do with the house when you go off to Venice? Princess: What do you mean? We are only going for a couple of weeks Billy: I know, but I have something that may change your mind, a competition Princess: Competition for what? Billy: To win a free apartment on the edge of the river. You get all of your bills paid for free and you get free groceries for a year Princess: Yes dear, but what are the chances of me winning that? Billy: You have every chance! Only people who live in Walford are allowed to enter, and they are doing the grand prize draw in the vic! Princess: Oh my god! Where do you enter!!! Supernoodles House Supernoodles is packing a bag. she still has tears rolling down her eyes. She has her passport ready and is about to go out of the door, when someone walks in instead! It is MichaelO, Supernoodles husband! MichaelO is a 24 year old well built male Michael0: And where do you think you're going? Supernoodles: Ermm, Nowhere. How was the holiday? She glances at the clock, it is now 1 o clock Michael0: Right then, do i get a cup of tea from my beautiful girlfriend or do i have to do it myself? Supernodles: Look babe, i really have to go.. we need milk Supernoodles puts the bag down and runs out of the door, with just her passport in her pocket Michael0: Oh, Bye Annie and BigSisters house BigSister: Darenn, we have decided that you can stay here for a few weeks if you want? Darenn: What! Really? Annie: No.. Darenn: Oh, never mind BigSister: No, Annie was just joking, of course you can! Darenn: Oh thankyou! You are a Hero! Now, where is the local pub? We need to celebrate! Annie Sighs The vic The pub is now open. Christina is at the bar serving, Firewire walks in and comes up to the bar Firewire: I think we need to talk Christina: No we don't. It was a mistake, nothing happened Firewire: I am not stupid. You clearly made a move on me last night and i want to know why? Christina: Look, just forget about it, like you said, look towards the future, not the past! Firewire walks away as Sam walks in with Hannah Sam: Well, look at you two lovers then Christina: Why don't you get your Stupid little face and hit it against a brick wall! Firewire: Leave it Christina Hannah: How dare you talk to Sammy boy like that! Christina: And You are! Hannah: I am Sams girlfriend, Hannah Hannah pulls a cheeky smile at Christina. She is a feisty 14 year old girl with a great fashion sense. BigSister and Darenn walk into the pub. Darenn is wearing a furry coat and pink skin-tight trousers BigSister: And here she is, the Queen Vic Darenn: Well, it is hardly the sexiest place in the world, But it will do! I am buying the first round, what do you want? BigSister: No, I oblige, the first round is on me! Darenn: Oh, okay then, if you must. I will have a Cocktail please, Now where is the Dj, we need to put on some decent music! Sam: What are you wearing mate, i though Paris Hilton had walked in for a minute! Darenn: For a guy like me that is a compliment Sam: Well, for a guy like me, it isn't Hannah and Sam laugh, Darenn walks off to get a table Sam: What a weirdo! Hannah: I know, Maybe he was looking for the Gay bar? They both start laughing again Sam: Well, if he slept round BigSisters house last night, No wonder he has turned gay They both start laughing again Christina: Anyway you two, you are not allowed in the Bar, so I suggest you leave now, or I will kick you out! Sam: Try it Hannah: Come on Sam, lets just go! Leave your lonely sister here Sam: oh, she isn’t my sister, just my step sister. Thank god we are not blood related, I couldn’t bear to have the same blood as her! Christina: Just get out! Sam: She is just jealous because my dad never abused me when I was younger! Christina: Just GET OUT! They both walk out, Laughing, as Princess walks in to find Shaun sitting at the bar Princess: Oh! Just the man I needed! Shaun: Hello My Darling, and your morning has been? Princess: Brilliant thankyou, I have entered a competition! Shaun: What competition? Princess points to a poster with the details of the Venice competition, up on the wall near the door Shaun: Oh my god Princess: I know! How exciting! It means we can live there! Not just go there!… Oh my god, That “Oh my god” Was a bad “Oh My god” wasn’t it Shaun: Oh no dear, whatever you want, anyway, I better be off to the bank! No time to talk at this current moment Princess: Oh, Bye then Christina: See you Shaun The Airport Supernoodles is in the airport looking for Fom. Ninastar is also in the airport, looking for Fom. Supernoodles goes into the waiting room, and finds Fom, With Ninastar !They are kissing Ninastar: I thought you had gone! Fom: I Love you so much, i will never do that again They are both crying. Fom sees Supernoodles, who is also Crying. He mimes to her with his mouth Fom: I'm Sorry The allotments Shaun enters the allotments. He walks up to a girl and kisses her passionately Shaun: Another week and we can be out of here. Just me and you babe, no Princess, no Billy. Just us The Girls face is shown, She is only 17 years old. She has a pretty face and looks nothing like the 45 year old Shaun. It is… JDIZZEL: Oh, I do love you Shaun! ____________________ Episode 6 The Allotments Shaun: Well I should hope you do love me! Two tickets to Venice on a plane is a lot, Not taking into account the cost of the house! JDIZZEL: Don’t ruin the mood Shaun, I am sick of discussing costs! As long as I am with you, I am happy Shaun: Well, these things need to be discussed! JDIZZEL: Oh Shaun, Just shut up and Kiss me! Supernoodle and Michael0s house Supernoodles walks in. She is crying hysterically. Michael0 is sitting on the sofa, he stands up Michael0: What's the matter Darl.. Supernoodles: Just Go away Michael: Babe, Talk to me Supernoodles: Just LEAVE ME ALONE! Michael0: Not until you tell me whats wro... Supernoodles: I SAID GET OUT!!! Supernoodles pushes Michael0 out of the door and slams it in his face The Back of Callums cab Ninastar: I do not know what on earth possesed you hunny! one minute you were fine, next yo... Fom: Just forget about it babe! I had a bad day and just wanted to get out of this place Ninastar: So you thought you would leave me and the baby behind did you? Callum: Baby? Who's having a baby Fom: Well you let that one go didn't you? Ninastar: Well, i am Pregnant Callum, but you cannot tell anyone! Me and Fom want to wait until after the 12 week scan Callum: oooh! A Baby! Fom, you deserve to walk home, Leaving your fiance and baby alone while you planned to travel the world to get away from here.. Ninastar: Callum, just leave it Fom: Callum, stop here! Ninastar: What do you mean? Fom: C'mon, we are walking Ninastar: We are nowhere near home? Fom: Just get out, i don't want to be in the company of nosey pants any longer. Ninastar: Fom! Callum: Well i am sorry for looking out for people! Fom: Well, we can look after ourselves thankyou very much Fom pulls Ninastar out of the Cab. They are just outside Walford Ninastar: I am so sorry Callum, How much will that be? Callum: No, No, On the house for you and the bump Ninastar: Oh, why thankyou Callum: You know where i am if you need me right? Fom: C'mon, we're off The cab pulls off Shaun, Princess and Billy’s house Shaun: I’m Home! Princess: Where the hell were you! Shaun: At the bank, like I said? Billy: It is obvious he was going out to see some fancy woman and get some on the side mum. Haha Princess: Don’t be so stupid Billy! And anyway, the bank was closed today, so, tell the truth! Where did you go? Shaun: Darling, I cannot tell you! It is going to be a surprise Princess: TELL ME! Shaun: I went to the travel agents to book some tickets to Venice! Happy? Princess: What! Give over! Shaun: I have! Princess: Oh my God! I Love you! Princess jumps on Shaun in excitement Firewires house The door knocks, Firewire opens it. It is Christina, she has been crying Christina: Like you said, we need to talk Firewire grabs Christina in his arms, and they hug passionately Firewire: I was Scared Christina: Yes, and I was in love Firewire: And now, so am I! Firewire moves in for a kiss. They Kiss passionately. Christina pulls Firewires top off, and they walk inside Supernoodle and Michael0s house Supernoodles is sitting with her back up against the door. Michael0 is outside the door, trying to convince her to let him in Supernoodles: Will you just go away Michael0! Michael0: not until you let me in and we talk about what is wrong! Supernoodles: If you do not go away, i will never speak to you again! Michael0: Well where the hell am i supposed to go!? Supernoodles: I dunno, the Vic or something. Just leave me alone! Michael0 walks down the flat steps and into the square looking angry. Fom and Ninastar see him Ninastar: Well, i wonder what was the matter with him? Fom: I dunno, look, i need to go and see someone about the wedding. But you can't come, it is going to be a surprise Ninastar: Promise? Fom: Promise.. Ninstar: Fair enough, i am going to go in and have a rest Fom: Okay Babe, I Love you Ninastar: Do you? Fom: Yes Ninastar: Fair enough, But I still have not forgiven you. I was so scared today! Fom: I Said I was sorry! I just wanted to go and see a friend for the weekend. Anyway, I am glad we walked back, our talk was nice. I Love you Ninastar: Whatever Ninastar walks in to her house. Fom makes his way over to Supernoodles. He starts to walk up the stairs to her flat and hears her crying. Fom knocks on the flat door, seconds before a Gunshot rings from Supernoodles Flat across the square. Silence ____________________ Wow! What an excting first week! I have a few spoilers for next week! [spoil]A New family arrives, with a big debt on their back[/spoil] [spoil]JDIZZEL: I think we have been found out[/spoil] Join me on Monday in the main thread Here For the next episode! Thanks for watching! Lewis x x x |
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Woo, rather good and entertaining!
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0oooh this is really good
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Haha im a right bastard, haha @ supernoodles when she keeps going Fom... FOM!!
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Bump for TheMichaelo who is unsure on which episode he has missed
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Lol this is so quality lewis. Like tension waiting to see what happens next, i really enjoy it you've outdone yourself!
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Omg! LOL - Ninastar is such an abusive wife LMAO.
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