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Old 19-01-2014, 05:18 PM #1
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About tens year ago in my teens, good think I still got that floppy disk

Here the plot of the book or it's more of prologue really

NIGHTMARE OF THE REAL WORLD

The pain was getting worse, he couldn't move, he wanted to, but pain in his body was so power full, he made him fall to the ground, his breaths were coming in small caps, pain was slowly easing, final he could stand he walks to kitchen and get his medicine and shallows it down with class of water.

Mark is only in his thirty and he got cancer, his got family to look after. When he lost his job he thought that was the worse think that could have happened to but now he knows all the pain that happened then was just a little as cut on the finger, now he knows what pain really is, he couldn’t believe all those people that suffer all this pain, he didn’t understand why people live like this, it was getting to much for him, he been taking pills for two months now, his family have no idea at all, he wants to end is life, but he had second thoughts, on that night he decide what to do.


Here are the other stories ,

The Power
Based in a Prison, this place was like hell on earth as the Police force is so Evil, that they may not even be Human.

Dogs
Family move to country side, they get number of dogs, they teach the dogs, to hunt and Kill any Animals but When one of dogs are killed by another Hunter.

The dogs won't kill again until the owner starts attack him soon the dogs turns on there owner and the family.

squirrels
its the year 2020, the UK have been in one of the longest Heatwaves, , 400 people have been killed, 10000 of birds have been found dead, also effected by heat are squirrels as the heat is bring them new life, Deadly new life!

(Someone stole my idea) http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=q7U2aVUAqPI
lol (in my story squirrels were the size of a Cat!)

Now I can't think of anything,

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..did you write any of these stories, Moviefan..?..
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I did first chapter for NIGHTMARE OF THE REAL WORLD

But life got in the way lol
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TIBB has a couple of people who claim to be writers. They might be able to give you some pretend tips.
 
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I have written a book (unpublished as yet) and am working on my second. The method I find easiest is first to flesh out your characters. Make a list and give their descriptions, good and bad characteristics etc.,
Then I write a quite detailed synopsis, telling what is to happen at the start, middle and end and any other major happenings along the way.
Only when all this is done do I start to write.
I'm not saying your way is wrong, everyone has their own style after all, but maybe trying another way will be better.
Hope this helps and good luck with your book.
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The abobe message was meant for Fom.
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