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				Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: Newcastle upon Tyne 
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			This evening I was trying out something I have my protagonist doing in an episode one I have been drafting, which resulted in some re-drafting. Nothing major, exotic or illegal, just a very minor detail  about an action coupled with dialogue, but I tend to be a perfectionist on some things.
 Sometimes I will also say dialogue out loud, to see if it is natural or forced.
 
 Anyone else do that to make sure of realism?
 
 Still not sure when I will be publishing as other things have been happening in the real world
 
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