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It's lacroix darling
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I just finished writing chapter three. It's all very exciting to be writing this now because I have so many ideas for it and I'm slowly getting there and I have so much more to write and ugh yeah. I'm gonna stop rambling so here:
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I like it but there's one or two Americanised words? Or is that intended?
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Yay Niall...still really enjoying it....keep the chapters coming...it really is good
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Quand il pleut, il pleut
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1. .......
![]() 2. 'Fear choked everyone into mute obedience'... ![]() 3. ..when is the next chapter..?.. 4. ![]() ![]() ..Niall, I do have more to comment but I'm going to read it through again tomorrow when I'm less tired...I can say that's the best chapter yet though and I love it...maybe I can talk to you about it more after I've had another read if that's ok..?.... Last edited by Ammi; 06-02-2013 at 08:37 PM. |
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![]() The next chapter won't be for a while I don't think. I've got lots of exam work to do from school and it's all piling up so I have to get that out of the way. I'm gonna try and write some more over the February half term though! And that's fine! I don't mind at all Ammi. ![]()
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Just read this Niall.
Its amazing ![]() The whole thing has a Hunger Games vibe to it.
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It's lacroix darling
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Thanks Glenn.
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Fantastic chapter
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Remembering Kerry
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Really good in my opinion, from what I have read so far,I would buy it.
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It's lacroix darling
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It's been ages since I updated this, but I finally got around to finishing the fourth chapter. I was so swamped with exams and revision and school crap before that I never really had the chance. But now that I don't have any of that going on, I've got all the time in the world to write so I just finished it off today.
![]() It's probably kinda crappy but I'm just pleased that I've gotten somewhere and finally finished it. Hopefully I'll be able to write more often and actually get a lot more done with this. So without further adieu... Spoiler:
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That's really well written, as always. You're really talented, but more importantly than that, you're putting the effort in to follow a path you wish to follow. Lots of people have talent, but not everyone gets off their arses and writes chapters.
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Well it's the truth. I'm not really someone who anyone could call an arse licker. If I say something positive, it's because I genuinely mean it. Keep going. If you ever need a manager to negotiate you a good deal, then I'm your guy!
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I've been trying to write a lot lately but I just can't get started on it, I ****ing hate writing beginnings.
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..Niall, I'm going to read this later but I just KNOW it's going to be epic..I've been so excited about the next instalment and am so glad you've carried on with it...
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Quand il pleut, il pleut
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..yeah, they're not the easiest Dezzy..beginnings and endings are the hardest but please don't give up because I have a feeling that you would write so well, if you do get it started and it would be worth persevering...
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![]() Yeah. You always have been a great writer, Dezzy. Darkwood Isle proves that.
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