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Old 15-12-2013, 10:29 PM #1
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Default Dead Talented (TiBB Story): EPISODE 3.1 UP!

" Imagine the Xfactor, Britains got talent and eurovision all combined to make TiBBs best show ever." Shaun said with a polite and professional smile.
"We love this idea!" Marc said, sitting at the head of the table of some creative users that have created games. Some faces included Ben, Jarrod, and zee, TiBB millionaires that have created super successful gameshows. Shaun went back to his seat, which was at the other head of the table.

"I feel like a first of January launch would be the best" Shaun continued.

"I.. I wish mollie was here to discuss this game with us too." One of the faces said.
All of the table looked at an empty swivel chair, that had been untouched since her departure.

Cuda strolled in the meeting room and sat on his chair. Cuda wasn't a millionaire like the others, he had not run a game yet and his failed attempts left him skint.
"Sorry I'm late" he said
The table looked at Cuda angrily.
"What did I miss?"

Shaun gave Cuda his papers that showed his plan.
"It's my new talent show..." Shaun said.
"It's called dead talented"

Cuda nodded with approval.


Part 2 coming In a little bit..

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I'd pay cash money to see Shaun's 'polite and professional smile'.
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..put your money away, Livia..it just ain't gonna happen..but I think you knew that when you offered to open your purse because you are a JEW..and very tight with the old money coins....




..but I love you anyway.....
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..put your money away, Livia..it just ain't gonna happen..but I think you knew that when you offered to open your purse because you are a JEW..and very tight with the old money coins....




..but I love you anyway.....
I wasn't going to open my purse. I was going to bounce you a cheque.
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Default Dead Talented: Episode 2

Marc patted Shaun on the back.
"I'm sorry that the launch didn't happen when you wanted it to." Marc said, politely.
"How. How.. HOW COULD ALL THE FILES DISAPPEARED!?" Shaun yelled, upset all the effort was for nothing.


Marc felt guilty. A few weeks ago whilst Shaun was on holiday to France during New Year's Eve, Marc wanted to start task one of The Mole 8, when he noticed Shaun's computer. He was going to post a funny status on Shaun's Facebook when Shaun mistakenly left his account online on his work computer, where he would write his tasks and brainstorm for ideas.

Marc giggled whilst he sipped his ice cold Diet Pepsi.
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Marc had tears streaming from his eyes from laughing and nudged the can of cola. It tippled over like a skittle, and cola was now pouring out the can. The sticky liquid dripped onto the computer, and sparks began to erupt from the computer. Marc started to panic.

"OMIGODOMIGODOMIGODOMIGOD"

Marc began to sound like a Scouse teenage girl, which was unusual for a grown Scottish man.
Marc was running around the room panicking until foot accidentally met computer. Like the can, it toppled over and sparks turned into fire.

Marc was crying now, the doors were locked from the outside for some reason and he'd used the fire extinguisher for some office chair stunt a few weeks ago. Marc was trapped inside. He struggled for air, and he grabbed his coat, which was on his desk. He threw it over the fire.

The fire struggled. Marc struggled. Unfortunately the fire came back to life but it was nowhere near as powerful it was before.

Marc blacked out.

Firefighters rushed to the scene, and because of Marc's coat, the fire was weak, and the fire was quickly put out.

After Marc recovered, he rushed to the TiBB chat and games office. Things were replaced. Every thing was spotless, and Shaun was sitting at his computer.

"YOU STUPID ****ING MACHINE, WHERE THE HELL ARE MY FILES!?"
Shaun yelled.

He shook his mouse vigorously and threw it on the desk.

"HEY MARC.. " Shaun said aggressively.

Marc looked guilty and chirped up. "Mate, I'm really sorry.."

"For what?" Shaun asked.

He knew nothing.

"Oh.. Nothing.." Marc said, very relieved.

"This is a secret I'm going to keep for him, and can't let him find out." Marc thought.

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Coming soon:
Josy and James come into the story!
A death happens
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Default Dead Talented: Episode 2.2

"So... how was France?" Asked Marc.

"Ooh, great, this guy showed me his huge tasty baguette and I was eating it all night.." Shaun said softly.

Marc looked horrified.

"What? What's wrong? Are you sad you didn't get any? Don't worry, I still have some." Shaun said. He rummaged through his bag and his hand emerged with half of a baguette. "The bread over there is lovely. The baker was really kind as well."

Marc was relieved again. "OHHH. I thought you were talking about.." He said.

Shaun looked confused until He suddenly realised what he meant "OH?.. I always knew you were dirty minded, Marc. "

"I did that as well" Shaun whispered.

"Huh?" Marc asked, looking puzzled.

"Oh nothing ." Shaun said, embarrassed.

Marc suddenly got a text.

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Marc didn't realise Shaun had walked over and was looking over his shoulder.

"OOOH, Who's JJ? " Shaun yelled.

Marc jumped a bit.

"It's Josy and James. Now Josy has become and admin, James and her share a huge skyscraper across the road." Marc told Shaun.
"I've gotta go, Shaun, see you later."

"See ya."

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Sneak peeks of tonight's episode..
"I've finished writing it! I can launch it!"
"It's a no from me.."
"I HATE YOU, WHY ARE YOU EVEN ON THIS FORUM?!"
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"Shaun.. Shaun?" Marc yelled, stepping inside Shaun's apartment.

"I'm in the bath!" Shaun yelled.
"Wait on the sofa for me!"

A few minutes later a dry and dressed Shaun came out of the bathroom.

"What?" Shaun asked.

"Oh, I was just seeing how Dead Talented is going." Zee said kindly.

"I've finished writing it! I can launch it!" Shaun said, excitedly.

"When!?" Zee asked, joining into the excitement.

"Next week. I've got the TiBB maintenance to create the stage. It's nearly finished."
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