[waterhog]

how to fix Labour from Dick Dastardlly and a bit of Muttley 09.05.15

i can see 2 errors
and i predict they are your saviour
failing to address will bring terrors
you won't change the flavour.
what do you represent
i will gladly expose
its like going to the "box office" and booking the wrong event
voting Labour is no longer the famous red rose.
2 key issues are my agenda
if you heed labour will u-turn
betraying your core voters you must admit and surrender
like your admittance on the immigration burn.
go back to helping the disadvantage
ridicule everything to do with being wealthy
your key voters is the everyday street sewage
why do you have to be rich to be healthy.
praise the N-H-S and dedicate
us normal folk don't have book and arrive
listen to me Labour i will educate
you help the low paid and you will thrive.
put extra tax on the rich
reduce the tax on who are paid minimal
just like the conseratives ?????? us like a ?????
this is key to making Labour winnable.
reduce your open door plan
the fine mess is still evidently
its a feeling that shows in any scan
don't be Dick Dastardley and just blame Muttley.
invest and help and support the low paid
limit our boarder
then in heaven Labour will be made
your votes will make Labour a hoarder.

( i feel after Labours devastating night they now really do have to listen. unlike before when people complained or wrote poems on issues that did concern me, maybe Labour did not pay much attention to them - this is the result of failing to listen. i feel Labour can turn round the party if they change 2 things and they are very simple and nearly every low paid worker is effected by both changes. they are 1. represent and fight for the less well off in society who have life so hard. if this means taxing the rich more to help those struggling . this also means investing in our fantastic N-H-S building homes for renting (council) and making anyone who has mega wealth pay there way. lastly my second point is immigration - fix up and sort out the problem you created when you was last in power. if you do these 2 things i think you will turn round your party. the question is ? does anyone disagree ? i am not going to do any more petitions as i admit defeat but what i will leave a link to is a bit of information about the most 2 important people i refer to in my poem - http://hanna-barbera.wikia.com/wiki/Muttley )