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Old 07-01-2017, 06:04 PM #7
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Your character descriptions serve a point so they're fine. I'm talking more about how you described how Rachel cleaned up stuff, it was a little excessive at times.

A minor criticism however.
Okie Dokie. Thanks again I really appreciate your comments because I don't think I've won, and the prize is feedback from a publishing house in London.

TiBB can be just as good for these types of things though
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