[T*]

you’ve come a long way from making posters and claiming they’re official girl
she’s now a director!

[Alf]

Looks awful, but that's just my opinion, I'm sure girls and gays will relate to it, but as I'm neither, it just won't relate to me.

But well done for having a go and good luck.

[elliebrew]

Originally Posted by Alf

Looks awful, but that's just my opinion, I'm sure girls and gays will relate to it, but as I'm neither, it just won't relate to me.

But well done for having a go and good luck.

That's fair enough

As I say comedy is subjective

I personally loathe Big Bang Theory and Friends

[Mystic Mock]

Originally Posted by Alf

Looks awful, but that's just my opinion, I'm sure girls and gays will relate to it, but as I'm neither, it just won't relate to me.

But well done for having a go and good luck.

Have you never liked a show that's not had your demographic as it's target audience before? I know that I have.

Good luck with this anyway Elliebrew.

[Alf]

Originally Posted by Mystic Mock

Have you never liked a show that's not had your demographic as it's target audience before? I know that I have.

Good luck with this anyway Elliebrew.

What is my demographic? I didn't know I had one.

But to answer you.

From watching the trailer, I know I wouldn't get that humour, and that means I probably wouldn't laugh, which is problem when watching a comedy.

[elliebrew]

Originally Posted by Alf

What is my demographic? I didn't know I had one.

But to answer you.

From watching the trailer, I know I wouldn't get that humour, and that means I probably wouldn't laugh, which is problem when watching a comedy.

Humour is the subjective thing is the world

It is informed by your background, you taste in popular culture, your taste in people etc

What is your taste in comedy's might I ask

[Alf]

Originally Posted by elliebrew

Humour is the subjective thing is the world

It is informed by your background, you taste in popular culture, your taste in people etc

What is your taste in comedy's might I ask

For a so called writer, your grammar is quite awful. I'm beginning to doubt that you wrote this.

[Strictly Jake]

It has potential. It seems on an amateur level as Derry Girls is to be honest and I adore that. The lead girl seems pretty great, who is she?

[elliebrew]

Originally Posted by ShakeyJake10

It has potential. It seems on an amateur level as Derry Girls is to be honest and I adore that. The lead girl seems pretty great, who is she?

Her name is Claire Crossland

A brilliant upcoming actress in Liverpool

[Shaun]

Very good editing & well-put together

[elliebrew]

Originally Posted by Shaun

Very good editing & well-put together

Thank you Shaun x

[storybrooke]

I'd definitely watch this show, really enjoyed the trailer

[elliebrew]

Originally Posted by storybrooke

I'd definitely watch this show, really enjoyed the trailer

thank you darling xx

[Amy Jade]

Actually looks fun!

Keep us informed how it goes

[Ammi]

Originally Posted by elliebrew

Please check out, like and share the pitch trailer for a comedy series Ive written produced and directed

Youtube video

Hoping to use this in a pitch to television broadcasters

...there are some really great comedy character potentials in there, elliebrew...and the vid is so professionally put together as well..wow, well done.....I hope your pitch is successful and such good luck with it all.....definately characters worth investing in I think...

[Ammi]

...so much potential for TiBB reaction gifs as well....even in that few minutes of video...always a good sign...

[elliebrew]

Just seen this feedback Ammi

Thank so much xx

[pontyboi]

Looks really good well done on the production especially.

One question though did you get permission from Little Mix and Jess Glynn to use their music if not you could get in a lot of trouble regarding copyright.