[Vanessa]

Originally Posted by The Slim Reaper

I hope this is only a first draft.

I just think he's endearing

[Kate!]

Originally Posted by Lewismacfarlane

Im sorry but im leaving

Ok. That's settled then.

I'll replace Lewis by the return of Livia then.

If that's okay by Livia of course?

[Vanessa]

I was close to leaving as well last week. Not because I'm not enjoying it, but pressures from work. On a Sunday I always have a really busy day and I was in tears afterwards.

[Beso]

Where do we post our poems, I'm almost ready to post my final draft

[Kate!]

Originally Posted by parmnion

Where do we post our poems, I'm almost ready to post my final draft

In this thread please Parm.

[Vanessa]

I'm still on the tube. There are delays today

[Kate!]

Originally Posted by Vanessa

I'm still on the tube. There are delays today

If people are struggling I'll consider extending the deadline.

[Kate!]

Originally Posted by parmnion

Where do we post our poems, I'm almost ready to post my final draft

You've not said who you're writing about have you?

[Beso]

Originally Posted by Kate!

You've not said who you're writing about have you?

Cherie, if she's ok with it

[Kate!]

Oh hang on apologies...you picked Cherie x

[Beso]

Ok....I was hoping not to be first.

To cherie.


Cherie, will you listen to the simple verse of mine,
It's anything from being good but perhaps youl like it fine.
As you know when I rest I, often write a verse, and the blunders that I make are anything but scarce.

I however try my best like all the poets do.
But the critics, bonnie lass are anything but few.
Thier tongues keep dancing mad like wild daffodils, you find them in chat and games, you find them on tibb towers hill.

I often wonder cherie, about the folks amongst this place.
Their words taste sweet as honey in the presence of your face .
If they tell me that my poems good, then nothing could be sweeter, apart from you putting 50ps daily in tibbs meter.

They say it's the same for everyone, every post is criticized, but awaken up the poet,Cherie, and they will be surprised.
The names that I am hinting, it's better not to mention.
The one thing I will say cherie, is they all deserve a pension.

[Kate!]

Originally Posted by parmnion

Ok....I was hoping not to be first.

To cherie.


Cherie, will you listen to the simple verse of mine,
It's anything from being good but perhaps youl like it fine.
As you know when I rest I, often write a verse, and the blunders that I make are anything but scarce.

I however try my best like all the poets do.
But the critics, bonnie lass are anything but few.
Thier tongues keep dancing mad like wild daffodils, you find them in chat and games, you find them on tibb towers hill.

I often wonder cherie, about the folks amongst this place.
Their words taste sweet as honey in the presence of your face .
If they tell me that my poems good, then nothing could be sweeter, apart from you putting 50ps daily in tibbs meter.

They say it's the same for everyone, every post is criticized, but awaken up the poet, my dear, and they will be surprised.
The names that I am hinting, it's better not to mention.
The one thing I will say cherie, is they all deserve a pension.

Love it .... genius

[Vanessa]

Originally Posted by parmnion

Ok....I was hoping not to be first.

To cherie.


Cherie, will you listen to the simple verse of mine,
It's anything from being good but perhaps youl like it fine.
As you know when I rest I, often write a verse, and the blunders that I make are anything but scarce.

I however try my best like all the poets do.
But the critics, bonnie lass are anything but few.
Thier tongues keep dancing mad like wild daffodils, you find them in chat and games, you find them on tibb towers hill.

I often wonder cherie, about the folks amongst this place.
Their words taste sweet as honey in the presence of your face .
If they tell me that my poems good, then nothing could be sweeter, apart from you putting 50ps daily in tibbs meter.

They say it's the same for everyone, every post is criticized, but awaken up the poet, my dear, and they will be surprised.
The names that I am hinting, it's better not to mention.
The one thing I will say cherie, is they all deserve a pension.

Love this!

[Cherie]

Originally Posted by parmnion

Ok....I was hoping not to be first.

To cherie.


Cherie, will you listen to the simple verse of mine,
It's anything from being good but perhaps youl like it fine.
As you know when I rest I, often write a verse, and the blunders that I make are anything but scarce.

I however try my best like all the poets do.
But the critics, bonnie lass are anything but few.
Thier tongues keep dancing mad like wild daffodils, you find them in chat and games, you find them on tibb towers hill.

I often wonder cherie, about the folks amongst this place.
Their words taste sweet as honey in the presence of your face .
If they tell me that my poems good, then nothing could be sweeter, apart from you putting 50ps daily in tibbs meter.

They say it's the same for everyone, every post is criticized, but awaken up the poet, my dear, and they will be surprised.
The names that I am hinting, it's better not to mention.
The one thing I will say cherie, is they all deserve a pension.

Love that line
Thank you Wordsworth

[Cherie]

Originally Posted by Lewismacfarlane

It's to much for me all this

Aw Lewis it is good to take a break

[Kate!]

Originally Posted by Cherie

Aw Lewis it is good to take a break

I think he got overwhelmed by the pace of the game and the challenging tasks. Bless.

We love you Lewis.

[Kate!]

Task deadline extended to 5pm tomorrow evening.

Where are Jake Alf and Rusti? Xx

[Strictly Jake]

A poem dedicated to Kate

Kate is my favourite member to the other members I mean no offense

But through the good times and bad times for me Kate has been there and a lot it has meant

She is always first to say yes to take part in my many games

And I always smile as I add to my original post her name

I know the difficulties she has faced in parts of her life

Stuff that has caused her quite a lot of strife

But she always makes me happy when she is around

And I honestly do think she is absolutely sound

To Kate who brings so much joy to the forum

And to the tasks because we all adore them

I like so many members on here

But this poem is for Kate and to ever lose her off this forum would be a really big fear.

So this is dedicated to Kate

Because damn she is, Great!

[Vanessa]

Originally Posted by Strictly Jake

A poem dedicated to Kate

Kate is my favourite member to the other members I mean no offense

But through the good times and bad times for me Kate has been there and a lot it has meant

She is always first to say yes to take part in my many games

And I always smile as I add to my original post her name

I know the difficulties she has faced in parts of her life

Stuff that has caused her quite a lot of strife

But she always makes me happy when she is around

And I honestly do think she is absolutely sound

To Kate who brings so much joy to the forum

And to the tasks because we all adore them

I like so many members on here

But this poem is for Kate and to ever lose her off this forum would be a really big fear.

So this is dedicated to Kate

Because damn she is, Great!

Awww I love this!

[Vanessa]

I've written mine, but I'm so self conscious.

[rusticgal]

Sorry been at work all day….

I will pick….I will dedicate my poem to Jet

[Cherie]

Originally Posted by Strictly Jake

A poem dedicated to Kate

Kate is my favourite member to the other members I mean no offense

But through the good times and bad times for me Kate has been there and a lot it has meant

She is always first to say yes to take part in my many games

And I always smile as I add to my original post her name

I know the difficulties she has faced in parts of her life

Stuff that has caused her quite a lot of strife

But she always makes me happy when she is around

And I honestly do think she is absolutely sound

To Kate who brings so much joy to the forum

And to the tasks because we all adore them

I like so many members on here

But this poem is for Kate and to ever lose her off this forum would be a really big fear.

So this is dedicated to Kate

Because damn she is, Great!

Lovely Jake

[Vanessa]

I'm going to sleep on it. Will check it and post it tomorrow.

[Kate!]

Jake. Awwww. I love that sooo much. You are a such a sweetheart. Task over....winner!

Only joking.

Vanessa love, we'd love to see yours really soon.

By the way players can edit their poems up until the deadline rather than repost it. X judges please reserve any official comments till then

[Kate!]

Originally Posted by rusticgal

Sorry been at work all day….

I will pick….I will dedicate my poem to Jet

Good stuff Rusti