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I've now got chapters 6 & 7 written up as well, and I'm getting ready to write chapter 8 (and maybe chapter 9).
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…if your chapters are up then I’ll read them next week while I’m away, Josiah….no rush though, only if they’re ready……
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…if your chapters are up then I’ll read them next week while I’m away, Josiah….no rush though, only if they’re ready……
I just made Chapters 5, 6, 7 available to read.

Chapter 5: https://sites.google.com/view/tibbpl...lake-chapter-5
Chapter 6: https://sites.google.com/view/tibbpl...lake-chapter-6
Chapter 7: https://sites.google.com/view/tibbpl...lake-chapter-7
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I really hope you've enjoyed the story so far Ammi.
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I really hope you've enjoyed the story so far Ammi.
…oooooooo, I’ll snuggle down to catch up with these chapters soon, Josiah…and absolutely, it’s a very intriguing mystery ….I love a ‘secrets’ story….…
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…chapter 5…


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…aghhhhhh no, Em…!!….what will they tell the police, will they tell them about the texts, I know it’s risky but maybe the police technology would be able to very quickly track where the texts are coming from to a valid location…
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… chapter 6….

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….hmmmmmm, so I’m thinking …are the deaths/dead bodies of the two generations linked…the secrets of the parents…?…I thought that they were all eating/microwaving food that was 5 years old/left over from Willa’s cousin’s stay…then I realised that it was the microwave that had been left there, not the food……duh me…..
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…chapter 7…

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…ok so, Felicity’s husband was stabbed to death also….there is definitely a connection to the present day killings…this is the secret(s) of the parent generation, surely….Hold on to your pants, it’s gonna be a bumpy ride…!!!!!……you have some great phrasings, Josiah….
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The first book is now finished! I can't wait to post the rest of the chapters when the time comes, and of course, no rush either.
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