[Harry!]

Originally posted by LewisLeona
[i]Nothing can be revealed yet Harry or Jaybitches. This time i am planning it carefully and making sure i am under control of everything! but hopefuly you will at some point!

Oh I see. I better be good if you are planing things carefuly then lol.

[jaybitches]

If you are strugling with series two, you should get people to help you and that with story lines an that
Diffrent writers lol

[Lewis.]

[i]Nope Jay, not struggling at all!

[Lewis.]

Launch Date Revealed

[i]The Launch date for the new series of Tibbenders is Tuesday 19th May! The Episode will be quite simple, to get us ito the story!

[jaybitches]

How fun... lol

[Lewis.]

*Spoiler*

[Sticks]

You were after hints

Looking at the writing style, you were using the format for a play or possibly a screen play

i.e

Character 1: the cat sat on the mat
Character 2: The quick brown fox jumps over the lazy dog
Character 3: Lol
Character 1: What is so funny about a cat sitting on a mat?
Character 2: Pack my box with five dozen liquor jugs
Character 1 and Character 3 "Huh?"

Great for putting on a play, but made it harder for me at least to read and follow. Now I know I am not Mr perfection, but I would like to think I use a more correct style and format for story telling.

Sorry about the lesson in written English, but for me I was not able to follow TiBBenders partly due to the format used. Of course if style has moved on, as the English language evolves and I am anachronistic, let me know.

[Lewis.]

Originally posted by Sticks
You were after hints

Looking at the writing style, you were using the format for a play or possibly a screen play

i.e

Great for putting on a play, but made it harder for me at least to read and follow. Now I know I am not Mr perfection, but I would like to think I use a more correct style and format for story telling.

Sorry about the lesson in written English, but for me I was not able to follow TiBBenders partly due to the format used. Of course if style has moved on, as the English language evolves and I am anachronistic, let me know.

I understand where you are coming from Sticks, but basically i believe that for people who sometimes cannot really be bothered to read, a script style is a lot easier. I Love reading books with a script style layout, such as "An Inspector calls" Because i can really focus on the story and i know who is speaking and when

[Lewis.]

Less than a week and just written episode two!

[JOSHUAH!]

I do prefer the script style BTW Lewis.


Can't wait!

[Lewis.]

Thanks Joshuah!

And the script style is so much easier to write :P

[Braden]

well this is exciting
i never got chance to read the first one

[King Gizzard]

Rickayyy!!!