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16-03-2009, 07:34 PM
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can't nobody hold us down
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Ah okay
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16-03-2009, 07:34 PM
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Back next Monday
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22-03-2009, 01:41 PM
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I have decided to post the new episode early! Tibbenders is back on rota tomorrow night after a week off because i was ill
 But here it is.. Back again! Tibbenders!Enjoy Guys! Another episode tomorrow night Hospital It is the next morning. 30stone is ready to go back home, he is sitting in the waiting room ready to be discharged The B&B The Kestle Family are all in the B&B sitting in the living area. Nicky and Markspears own the B&B. Markspears is a 43 year old male, who is a bit on the larger side, but has all the love in the world. Nickyy Is 39. She is Blonde and Beautiful and is quite a Rude lady. They both own the Cafe aswell Sia: So how much will that be? Nickyy: For one night, that is 35 pounds please, and more if i were charging for he inconvinience of having all of these kids here! Andy: 35 Pounds! Nickyy: Yes, in cash.. Now please Markspears: Don't be Silly Nickyy! You know what guys, it is on the house Sia: Oh thanks so much! Nickyy: Hello! We are not a charity! nobody gets anywhere in life like that Markspears! So yeah, 35 pounds please. Cmon, hurry up! Markspears: Leave the poor family alone! Sia: Look Don't worry, I will pay up Markspears: No you wont! You will stay until you need to, on the house! Nickyy: MArkus! What the hell a.. Markspears: Don't be so NAsty, YOu would expect sympathy! Dezzy: Can we go now Nanny? Sia: Yes Love, c'mon we are off! She turns to Markspears Sia: Thanks for all of your help love Markspears: Anything for you my dear Nicky Gives a fake cough Sia: And you, Ya Slapper! Nickyy: OI! Sia and the family run out of the door! Nicky Running after her Firewires flat Firewire and Christina are lying in bed together. It is about 10am and they both look quite Happy Christina: I will have to go and get scans done i suppose? Firewire: Yeah! You will Wont you! Christina: Oh my God! I am SO EXCITED! She Grins happily and waves her hands about. Firewire grabs one of her hands and puts it on his thigh Firewire: You know we are going to have to tell your Dad Christina: Look, He is not my dad anymore, now mum is dead he has nothing to do with me! He was just my stepdad, and now he is nothing Firewire: Well, what about telling other people? Christina: I suppose i will have to tell Nickyy and Princess, They are my best friends? And after the 12 week scan, we can let everybody else know! Firewire: And the wedding? Christina: What do you mean? Firewire: Well, I kind of booked a date? It was supposed to be a surprise, but we can hold it off until after the baby is born if you would like? Christina: YOu BOOKED A DATE! Oh my God! When! Firewire: Well, It was supposed to be Next Sunday? Chrsitina: Oh MY GOD! I Love you! Chrsitina Jumps on Firewire and gives him a huge hug Christina: Wait? NEXT SUNDAY! Firewire: Well yeah, It was supposed to be a surprise? Christina: Oh god! I better get out and fine a dress! And make up.. And flowers! Oh god! I cannot get everything ready in a week! Firewire: Everything is already ready babe, i have sorted it all out! All you need to do is find a dress! Christina: I don't deserve you babe. She Gives him a long kiss, then jumps out of the bed to have a shower. He Lies bac, putting his arms behind his head The Cafe Nicky unlocks the door and walks in with Markspears behind her Nicky: I cannot believe that woman! Markspears: What! Nicky: Talking to me like that! God! She has made an enemy of me! Markspears: Babe, she had no money and you were demanding it from her! Nicky: Well, I am not going to let people get away with paying! We are not in the recession because of nobody, it is people giving out freebies, like you! Markspears: Nicky Just Leave it honey nicky: No! I am going round there tonight to get the money! Markspears: Round where Nicky! Her house has been burnt down and now she has to go to the community center! She has no family around here! Nicky: Well i will go over to the community center then! Markspears: Nicky, You are a spiteful cow and i wish i had never married you! Nickyy Gives Markspears a Slap around the face Markspears: Fine. It's Over Markspears Walks out of the cafe door The Queen Vic The Vic is nearly Empty. Annie is behind the bar and Billy is at the bar. Princess and Shaun are sitting at a table in the corner, where they always sit. Gregalz and Bigsister are chatting on the Sofa and Darenn is in the toilet. Jdizzel Walks into the Vic, looking Flustered. She looks over at Shaun and walks over to him Jdizzel: You Mate, You are Scum! She Jumps on Shaun, hitting him Princess: Oi! Billy! HELP! Billy Runs over to Jdizzel and pulls her off Billy: What the hell do you think you are doing! Jdizzel: I Hate you Shaun! I hate you! She starts crying and runs out of the vic, Gregalz chases after her Bigsister: Well, What was that all about? Darenn Walks out of the toilets Darenn: I heard someone scream? Bigsister: Yeah, It was Jdizzel, She tried to Kill Shaun! Darenn: Oh my Word! Annie: Mother! She did not try to kill him! Don't be Silly! Are you okay shaun? Annie walks over to shaun and kneels down beside him The Square Gregalz is running after Jdizzel Greg: What was that all about! Jdizzel: I Loved him! I really Did! Greg: Who! Who did you Love! Jdizzel: Shaun Jdizzel cries again. Greg looks at her, shocked A car, pulled in at a motorway Magic is stiitin alone in the car, he is holding a phone up to his ear David: Hello? Magic: Dad,.. David: WHERE THE HELL ARE YOU MAGIC! Magic: I'm out Dad! I cannot do this anymore! I cannot kill my own mum! David: You have to.. You.. Oh my god! The police are here... Who told the... Magic: I'm Sorry Dad. Magic drops the phone, and cries |
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22-03-2009, 01:43 PM
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Where have I dissapeared to lol.
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22-03-2009, 01:44 PM
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[b]Guys, Starting from Next Episode there will be name changes. Lool
Markus=Markspears Dezzy=Muse Shaun=Picto Jdizzel=Leezjid |
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22-03-2009, 01:44 PM
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22-03-2009, 02:09 PM
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Guys, Getting a brand new advertising banner and some "Video Adverts" For "The Wedding".. Keep your eye out for them!
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22-03-2009, 02:16 PM
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Quality as per usual lewis.
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22-03-2009, 02:18 PM
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Thanks Ben
I know you are a huge supporter of Tibbenders!  I am excited about making the advertisement video for.. The wedding! |
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22-03-2009, 02:19 PM
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Christina will be loving this.
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22-03-2009, 02:20 PM
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TiBBenders facing axe after rival show, TiBBOaks a big hit with viewers.
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22-03-2009, 02:20 PM
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The theme music for the video is amazing!
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22-03-2009, 02:21 PM
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 And Btw.. I love your banner 
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22-03-2009, 02:22 PM
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Thanks.
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22-03-2009, 02:33 PM
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retro physical
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Darenn is in the toilet.
doing what lmfao! |
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22-03-2009, 05:44 PM
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Loool Christina. The wedding is going to be HUGE! i am making advertisements and everything! Lool x
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22-03-2009, 06:28 PM
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Brand new advert! For the wedding!
 Made by the marvelous Sam! Also! Gossip Zone has come! View My Video |
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22-03-2009, 06:32 PM
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22-03-2009, 07:05 PM
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To commemorate Tibbenders first wedding, Here is the Advert for the wedding of Christina and Firewire, with the catchy slogan used for the wedding "What could go wrong?" Well, What could go wrong is what i hear you ask? You will have to wait and see! The wedding will be aired on Sunday the 29th Of March! Everyone, is invited
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22-03-2009, 07:39 PM
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Thanks
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23-03-2009, 06:17 PM
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Another Episode tonight! x It introduces a new family to the sqaure!
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