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06-04-2009, 04:54 PM
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Previews of the wedding up in a minute! |
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06-04-2009, 06:44 PM
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06-04-2009, 06:50 PM
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BTW Lewis in the title it says 27/3/0909.
Just to let you know. |
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07-04-2009, 05:40 PM
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New Episode tonight as Tibbenders gets back to routine! Should be a funny one tonight. It is the lead up to the wedding :P
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07-04-2009, 05:43 PM
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Episode 24 -
Christina and Firewires house It is the day before the wedding and Firewire has just woken up. He sits up on the bed and lets out a yawn. CHristina Jumps up in a hurry Christina: OH MY GOD! What time is it? Firewire: Err.. Let me see. He Looks at his watch on the bedside cabinet Firewire: It is 11am hun CHristina: NOOOO! SHe jumps out of bed in a fluster, and puts a jumper and jeans on Firewire: What's the rush? Christina: Just Look at the list on the table! Firewire picks up a peice of paper with writing all over it, he reads it 9am - Collect Flowers 10am - Take dress back and get a new one 12am - Pick Up firewires Suit from the dry cleaners 12:30am - Meeting with Vicar 1pm - Go to the vic to get everything ready for my Hen night 4pm - Go to Gregalz house to see what he has planned for Firewires Stag night 5pm - Go back home and get changed for Hen night 7pm - Go to the vic for hen night Firewire: Whats so bad about that? Christina: THE LIST STARTS AT 9am AND IT IS NOW 11am! Firewire: Oh, I see? With that christina runs out of the room in a hurry, snatching the list as she goes. Firewire Picks up his phone and rings his brother Damon Firewire: Hello... No.. You cannot let her come.. SHE CAN't!.. I know.. eah.. Yeahh.. If she comes, i am in deep trouble. I Love Christina more than anything, KORNETTO CANNOT COME! Firewire Puts the phone down and sighs Fom and ninastars house Fom is Lying in bed looking at his phone. ninastar is in the kitchen, picking out clothes for Christina's Hen Night ninastar: Which looks best? She holds out two dresses Fom: Both. You Look beautiful in anything hun Ninastar Smiles Ninastar: Aww thanks Love! She Jumps on Fom, who drops his phone Ninastar: Anyway, who are you texting? Fom: No-one They both reach for the phone, bu Ninastar grabs it first. Fom tries to get it off of her ninastar: What is so private that your girlfriend cannot see? Fom: Nothing! Just Give it back! Ninastar looks at the screen and reads what Fom was texting to Pinkmich Heya Sexy. Cannot wait to come over tonight and see you. We can do what we did the other night, Nice and slow. Ninatar is out, so there will be no problems with me staying for a while. I Love you, and always will. I Love your hair, Eyes, Face, Skin and our Sex  We Make a great couple, and always will. Love You, Fom xNinastar: What is that? Fom: Nothing! Just give it back! Ninastar: WHAT IS THAT! Fom: Babe! Ninastar starts hitting Fom, Crying in the proccess Ninastar: NOT GAIN FOM! NOT AGAIN! She Looks at the phone again, and looks through Fom's Messages, reading all of the texts he had sent to Pinkmich Fom: BAbe! Look, I can stop.. Please! Ninastar Slaps Fom right around the face. Tears are rolling from her eyes Ninastar: It is over! Ninastar runs out of the door and into the square. Fom picks up his phone, goes to what he was writing to PinkMich, and presses send The Square Ninastar is running through the square crying. She runs out at Lili who is standing on a pavement. She accidentally knocks Lili onto the road. Christina, Driving Fast through the square, Suddenly comes zooming up the road Lili: AGHHH Ninastar: Huh! Christina Screams as she runs over Lili's Foot Gregalz's house Gregalz is With Damon in his house, planning Firewires Stag Due Damon: So then, All we need is a Stripper! Gregalz: Don't be Silly. Firewire Would hate that! Damon: Who Cares, I want one He Laughs as he picks up the phone book Gregalz: You will never find one in there... Damon pics up his phone and dails a number Gregalz: Maybe not Gregalz sighs and blows up another Balloon The Square Christina jumps out of her car. Lili is lying in the road screaming Christina: Oh my god i am so Sorry! Lili: GET AWAY YOU MAD COW! Christina: Oh no. Lili: CALL AN AMBULANCE! NOW! OH GOD! I am going to DIE! Christina Runs to her car and dials 999. Some of the People in the vic come out Bigsister: Lili.. What happened? Lili: That Mad Cow Tried to Kill Me! Christina: WHAT! Lili: She tried to murderer little old me! Scheming Bitch! Christina: Don't be Ridiculous! Lili: Quickly Someone, Call the police! WE have a murderer on the loose! Christina gets into her car and drives off Lili: Hit and Run! Another few years in Jail For you Dear! Darenn(Now Satisfation): Oh Hunny, Never mind. Where did she clip you? Lili: CLIP ME! CLIP ME! She Didn't Clip me! She HIT ME! The Scheming cow tried to Kill me! It would have been easier just to put my head under the wheel and Drive off. Horrible Little Girl! Satisfaction Sighs Fom and Ninastars house Fom opens the door and in walks Pinkmich. She is a sexy and Sassy Girl, who is dressed in very revealing clothes PinkMich: Hello Fom, How are you? He Grabs her By the Bum and leads her in Another Episode Tomorrow! Please Leave Feedback
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07-04-2009, 05:52 PM
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 I laughed so much at that bit. Great stuff Lewis! |
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07-04-2009, 06:04 PM
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Thanks. I Loved writing that! Lili is my favourite character and has some great lines coming up
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07-04-2009, 08:18 PM
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[i]Now YOU can get involved! YOU can decide the outcome of Christina and Firewires Wedding! TWO Weddings have been written! One Good Wedding, where they get married, and one, where things don't go so smoothly, and marraige is the last thing on their mind! Only YOU can determine the answer! Vote in the poll Below and Decide Whether the wedding should be A Happy moments in Tibbenders history, or not
http://www.polldaddy.com/p/1522478/ |
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07-04-2009, 08:20 PM
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can't nobody hold us down
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LOL! brilliant.
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07-04-2009, 08:21 PM
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I Love how i am So OTT With Tibbenders. Lool. This wedding is going to be great!
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07-04-2009, 08:32 PM
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Lol Quality Episode Lewis.
Glad to see your obviously feeling happier 
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07-04-2009, 08:32 PM
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A Lot Happier Thanks
 Have you Voted?
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07-04-2009, 08:34 PM
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07-04-2009, 08:37 PM
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Lool ^
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07-04-2009, 08:38 PM
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 And Firewire why would you hate a stripper? 
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07-04-2009, 08:39 PM
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07-04-2009, 08:39 PM
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07-04-2009, 08:51 PM
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Phone TiBBcom. (Pisstake of Ofcom) |
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07-04-2009, 08:52 PM
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The Blokes are going to get a shock if you are gay and ordering the stripper
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07-04-2009, 09:19 PM
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lol aha lewis has ideas now.
And Firewire a stripper is just a bit of fun.. get a roly poly stripper, ugly and fat women. Lovely. |
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07-04-2009, 09:35 PM
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Kornetto and Markwaldorf make an entrance on the wedding
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hehehe. this is fun
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