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07-04-2009, 09:39 PM
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The Voting is so funny. You will not find out the results until after the wedding though
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08-04-2009, 06:30 PM
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08-04-2009, 06:31 PM
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08-04-2009, 06:37 PM
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08-04-2009, 06:44 PM
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08-04-2009, 06:58 PM
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08-04-2009, 07:00 PM
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 Haha, well prepare cos tommorow youre gonna get it  just kidding!
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08-04-2009, 07:04 PM
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Lool Guys! New Episode in a bit, Just finishing writing it. XD If not tonight then Two episodes tomorrow. Not sure whether i will have to go? Thanks For Feedbackk! i Miss having fededback, It has slowly decreased. Lool x
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08-04-2009, 07:08 PM
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08-04-2009, 07:22 PM
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Lewis i have been looking threw all 28 pages of this and i loves it
 When do i get to be in it haha |
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08-04-2009, 07:49 PM
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08-04-2009, 09:50 PM
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Thanks Guys! New Episode:
__________________ Flower Shop Christina is in the Flower Shop Christina: I am SOOOO Sorry Flowergirl: Don't worry, Three hours late is better than never. The Guys will load them into your car. Keys? Christina: Oh yeah! Christina hands over her keys. The Flower girl gives them to a man, Who picks up a basket of flowers and takes them out of the shop. Two Police Officers Come into the shop Police1: Ermm, Excuse me ma'am, Are you Christina? Christina: Ermm, Yes? Police1: Christina, We are going to have to take you to the station to answer a few questions about your Dangerous Driving, and hit and run Christina: WHAT! I do not have time for this! The Police Take Christina out to the Police Car and put her into the back of the car Christina: PLEASE! I have a wedding To arrange! Police2: Don't worry Love, WE only need to ask you a few questions at the station, Hopefully you won't have to stay long Lili's House Lili is sat on the sofa with her leg on the table. She has a bandage around her foot. A Police officer is sat on the opposite sofa Police: So, Just tell me what happened? Lili: Well.. I was innocently crossing the road, and This car comes up to me. God, I thought it was going to kill me! Probably would have if she didn't have second thoughts! Police: Second thoughts? Lili: Well, It was Obvious sahe only had 1 thing on her mind... MURDER! Police: Why would she want to murder you? Lili: Well, YOu know, Just one of them cases aint it dear! Old Lady walking across the road, Young girl comes and Kills her, Same old Same old. Yepp, She wanted to Kill me. And She Nearly Did i Tell you! Internal bleeding ain't rare these days! Fom and Ninastars house Fom and PinkMich are lying in bed together. Suddenly Ninastar walks into the room, Tears still Rolling down her face Ninastar: Is This her! Fom: Babe, I am Sorry! Ninastar: Look what happened with Supernoodles! Now HER! PinkMich: I have a name Thankyou very much! Ninastar: Yeah.. BITCH! Ninastar runs upto Pinkmich and starts ripping her hair. They start fighting Fom: STOP! STOP! STOP!!!!!! They Both Let Eachover Go, And Ninastar runs out of the house again Pinkmich: Well, I guess that was Ninastar, Your Girlfriend? Fom: Yeah, C'mon. I will pack and we can go! Me and Ninastar, Are no more! The Police Station It is 2pm, Christina is walking away from the police station. She Looks at her list Christina: My God, The wedding is ruined! Suddenly Firewire Pulls up in his car, Right next to Christina Christina: Hunny! Firewire: Babe! What did they say! Christina: I got a warning and a fine of 100 pounds. Firewire: Look what i got! Firewire Holds up his suit and Wedding Flowers. Christina Smiles Christina: Oh My! Thankyou So much! Firewire: And Nickyy has your new Dress! It is in her house. She wants you over there now so you can get ready for your hen night! Wanna lift? Christina Screams louder Christina: OH MY GOD I LOVE YOU!!! Firewire: Lift? Christina: Naa, I fancy a walk Firewire: Alright, See you tomorrow then babe. Have a good night! Christina: Babe.. No strippers! Firewire: Of Course not He Grins and drives away Gregalz house Gregalz and Damon are hanging up decorations of naked woman for Firewires Stag Due gregalz: Firewire is going to love this! Damon: I know, And i am going to love that stripper! PARTAAY! Damon Picks up his beer and takes a sip Foms Flat Fom and Pinkmich are both ready to go, with Fom's belongings Fom: C'mon, Lets get out of here. Pinkmich: I have phoned up and we have got a flat to rent! Fom: Really! Pinkmich: Yepp! The Deposit is nothing compared to the money i earn from my Lap Dancing! Fom: Maybe you can give me a secret Lapdance tonight then! He Kisses her Pinkmich: There is one problem though babe Pinkmich walks out of the flat and up one floor, Fom tailing behind. She opens the door to an empty Flat Fom: What is this? Pinkmich: Our new home! She Smiles, As Fom Looks shocked to be living one floor above Ninastar, with his new girlfriend ____________________ And By the way, Some storyline updates that are coming up! - The Court hearing for David and Magic is next week! - Sam! Will have a crucial part next week as a new family arrive, With 4 teenage kids, one, whom Sam! Likes very much - Satisfaction(Darenn) Will find love, But will it be with Bigsister? |
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09-04-2009, 06:02 AM
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Great episode Lewis.
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09-04-2009, 09:37 AM
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thanks
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09-04-2009, 12:41 PM
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Gatorade me, Bitch!
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haha.. I'm a right old troublemaker! Worse than Dot Cotton! LoL
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09-04-2009, 06:12 PM
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Lol hahaha thats so linda...
Bet your like it irl 
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09-04-2009, 06:26 PM
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Gatorade me, Bitch!
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I am! Oh, and I meant to confess, I lied about my age on here.. I'm really a silver-surfer. I have a blue rinse and a curly perm, and I'm pushing 60.
Only Lewis knew my secret and he's gone and busted me.. 
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09-04-2009, 06:28 PM
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LOL ahaha linda.
Ill be 18 soon, 
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09-04-2009, 06:29 PM
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Lili, Sorry.
Madonna, You have been written in for Next week, With a new family
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