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03-06-2009, 08:17 PM
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 Loved it; I shuddered at the thought of the Punishment Room ahhh! Keep 'em coming!!
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03-06-2009, 08:41 PM
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i lovee this so much
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03-06-2009, 11:21 PM
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Loveeeeeee
Lol at the punishment room,brilliant! |
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04-06-2009, 04:49 AM
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lmao at 'I don't want spiders on me, no way.'.
 It's brilliant Shaun ! |
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08-06-2009, 04:21 AM
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Highlights Show #4 - Tuesday (Monday's events) Today, the two Lauras and Conors must nominate for the first time. They will be called throughout the day to the Diary Room by Big Brother, before results are revealed at 7pm to coincide with Big Brother's Little Brother. 9:59am - the Housemates are about to be awoken. As the clock strikes 10, there are suddenly loud, shrill screams throughout the House. Several Housemates jump out of their beds. Linda: ****ing hell! Jen: Oh my God! Make them stop! Rémy: Why must they scream? It is like hearing Lady GaGa sing. Ross: Oi! Don't diss the GaGa! Big Brother: This is Big Brother. The results for this week's task will be announced tonight at 6pm. The scene cuts to the garden-bedroom AMA: Aaaaah good, final day of disco-dancing. Laura [P]: Aw, are you not a fan? Annie: Haha. Well you two passed your task didn't you? Laura [S]: They said they'd get back to us. We peeled them all though. And it didn't feel like 12 hours. Hannah: We can only do our best. Laura [S]: Yeah... 11:35am. Greg and Shaun are in the bathroom. Greg: Who do you think they'll nominate today? Shaun: Oh, is it today? Greg: Yeah... Shaun: Hmm. I'm getting bad vibes from Conor. Wait does this count as nomination talk? Greg: I dunno. We're not saying who we'd nominate, so I guess not. WATERS walks in. WATERS: I just know I'll be up. Greg: You read our minds, we were just discussing that. WATERS: Yeah, Conor'll definitely choose me. We don't have anything in common, and there was the whole Laura thing. Shaun: He's very sensitive. WATERS: Just a bit! Suddenly, water falls from the ceiling and splashes Shaun. Shaun: Great, impromptu wet t-shirt competition. Fantastic. Well get a good look boys. He shakes his chest at the others, before Greg goes to mop up the water. 12:04pm. Hannah, WATERS and Lauren have been skating for 4 minutes. Rémy and Ama are cheering them on. AMA: Rollercoaster...of love... Rémy: Oh don't, they'll make us dance again! Hannah: My legs are tired... Lauren: Mine too! But at least we're getting a workout. Hannah: You could do with it, babe. Rémy: So nasty! Somebody trip her up! Lauren: I might... The Crystals' "Da Doo Ron Ron" begins playing, and Rémy, Ross, Ama and Jen rush to the jukebox to begin dancing. Rémy: I told you they'd make us dance! 12:39pm. Conor, Hannah and Ross are in the garden. Conor: I just want today to be over. Ross: You don't seem to be enjoying yourself much in here. Conor: No I know, I just don't like this week's task or the twist...I wish I'd been one of the later Housemates. Hannah: Well just get today over with, and then the rest of the week's going to fly by. Conor: Even so, the people we nominate will hate us. Ross: **** it, it's part of the game. Big Brother: This is Big Brother. Could Conor come to the Diary Room. Conor: Ohhhhh! He, sulking, obeys. Big Brother: Conor. Please state the name of the first Housemate you wish to nominate. Conor: Oh I really don't want to do this. But uh... I guess the first person who I'll put up is Paul. Big Brother: Please state your reason for this nomination. Conor: Well the other day, he was making these inappropriate comments towards Laura. And she was clearly uncomfortable, but he wouldn't stop, and I just thought he came off really creepy. So yeah. Big Brother: Conor, please state the name of the second person you wish to nominate, and give reason for this nomination. Conor: Well this is trickier because there's a bunch of people I haven't talked to much and they have equal reasons...but I'll nominate Shaun. The other day he was really bitchy about the whole sugar situation, and said something pretty mean to Annie when she stepped in. I dunno. He just seems like the kind of guy I won't get close to in the House. 1:41pm - Greg, Jen, Linda and Laura [P] are in the living room talking about food. Linda: I could kill for a chinese. Laura [P]: Oh my God, don't get me started. Jen: I really want a pizza...with pepperoni, loads of cheese... Greg: I hate you both! Linda: Oh yes Jen, and some sauce for dipping the crusts in... Laura [P]: Yeah! And anchovies! Jen: Ew no! Greg: Laura that's just wrong! Laura [P]: Oh... Linda: Haha, you killed it. Annie and Shaun walk in from the garden. Shaun: Tea anyone? Annie: Oh yes please. No sugar! Shaun: I wouldn't dream of it! Linda: Conjure a pizza if you can. Laura [P]: No anchovies though. Annie: I love anchovies! 2:03pm - Laura [P] is in the Diary Room, and has just been instructed to nominate. Laura [P]: Right, well my first nomination is going to be for Paul - he's made a few Housemates uncomfortable with the whole flirting thing, and seems to rub up people the wrong way. So that's why I'll nominate him. I don't think he'll be surprised. Big Brother: Thank you, Laura. Now the name of your second nominee and reasons? Laura [P]: This one's trickier, but I'm going to pick Hannah. She seems to complain about the task quite a lot and I hate negativity. I've also noticed that she's a little...flirtatious with a lot of the boys. I think it's probably harmless, but obviously if some of the guys are a bit fickle, they'll fall for it. I don't know. It's probably nothing but it's just a hunch that I get. She walks out of the Diary Room and re-joins the group on the sofas. Jen: Feel better now? Laura [P]: A bit. 3:34pm. Paul, Rémy and Annie are in the outside bedroom, talking about the nominations. WATERS: Who do you think will be up? Annie: I reckon me, Shaun and you. Rémy: Shaun? Annie: Yeah he had that row with Conor didn't he? Over tea? WATERS: Must have missed that then. Rémy: I think that Ross may be up, because he was naked? WATERS: That'll probably please those 3 rather than make them nominate him. Rémy: Is Conor gay? Annie: Isn't it obvious? Cut to Laura [S] in the Diary Room. She has just been instructed to nominate. Laura [S]: First of all, I'll nominate Paul. I hate the way he touched me on launch night and he just creeps me out. Secondly, I'm nominating Jen. I think she's jealous of me or something, but every time I say something to Rémy or Ross she jumps straight in and does the same thing. So I'm nominating Paul and Jen. Big Brother: Thank you, Laura, you may now leave the Diary Room. 7pm. Big Brother has gathered the Housemates. Greg: What do you think will happen? Linda: Task results? AMA: Yeah, we better pass! Big Brother: This is Big Brother. Housemates, this week you have been running the Big Brother Diner. Lauren: WOO! Annie: Ssssh! Big Brother: Laura and Laura. Your task was to peel 500 potatoes within 12 hours, using only one potato peeler between you, to Big Brother's satisfaction. Big Brother was willing to allow 50 potatoes not fully peeled. Lauras, you peeled 410 potatoes to Big Brother's satisfaction, therefore you failed your task. WATERS: That's bullshit! Laura [S]: ARGH! Laura [P]: I'm so sorry guys! Ross: Don't worry about it! Lauren: Yeah it's fine, it's just to wind us up. Big Brother: Greg, it was your task to monitor the dirty floor in the bathroom. Greg, you have passed your task. Greg: Thank God for that! Linda: Bravo, moppet! Big Brother: Hannah, Paul and Lauren. Your task involved skating around with trays in the garden. Housemates passed this task. Conor: Yay! We only need to pass one more! Hannah: Oh excellent! Big Brother: Rémy, Ross, Jen and Ama. For your task, you had to perform dance routines on call by the jukebox. Housemates, on two occasions both Ross and Ama failed to perform the correct routines, and therefore you have failed this task. Ross: What! When was that? Rémy: Yay I can dance! Big Brother: Finally, Annie, Shaun, Conor and Linda were quizzed on their memory skills. They needed a total accumulative score of 30 out of 40 to pass. Annie, you got 8 out of 10 correct. Laura [P]: Go you! Annie: I'm too good. Big Brother: Shaun, you got a score of 8 out of 10 correct. Annie: We're too good! Shaun: Yeah, touch me. Big Brother: Conor, you got 4 out of 10 correct. Conor: I am SO sorry guys! Greg: Oh snap... Big Brother: Linda, you got 10 out of 10 correct, giving the group 30 out of 40. With 3 out of 5 tasks passed, Housemates will receive a luxury shoppi- Jen: WHEEEEEEEEEEEE! Ross: YES! Hannah: Thank ****! Big Brother: This is Big Brother. AMA: Eh? Conor: Ssssh! Big Brother: The following Housemates will face eviction this week, in no particular order. WATERS: Paul... Greg: Sssshit... Big Brother: SHAUN Linda: What!? Shaun: Aaah ****. Big Brother: and HANNAH AMA: Oh my god! WATERS: Where am I? Big Brother: and PAUL WATERS: Me and my big mouth... Greg: That'll be it... Big Brother: and JEN Lauren: OH MY GOD! Jen: Uh oh...! Big Brother: Hannah, Jen, Paul and Shaun - one of you will be evicted on Friday. Greg: I'm shocked... Laura [S]: I feel so bad... 9:20pm. Shaun, Linda, Hannah and Ross are in the Diary Room. They have been drinking for a while, with alcohol given to them for passing the task. Linda: Hello Big Brother! Hannah: We've come to say that me and Shaun won't be evicted on Friday! Shaun: Girls can't hold us down y'all! Linda: Amen and hallelujah sisters! Ross: Seriously though who would nominate you two? I can understand Paul... Shaun: They is jealous! Hannah: Of our tits! She falls off the chair and the others burst out laughing. Big Brother: Who do you think nominated you, Shaun and Hannah? Ross: I bet it was the blonde Laura! Shaun: Yeah! That bitch! Linda: I have better tits than you two. She hiccups suddenly. Hannah: My head hurts... The credits roll... |
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08-06-2009, 02:11 PM
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Awww but I like Hannah! Sorry guys
 And I hate whatever anchoives are lol,they're fish ain't they????Besides me being petty I LOVEEEEEE this
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08-06-2009, 03:31 PM
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Thanks Jen <3
and sorry for who I made them nominate, Laura, but Sia didn't reply to my u2u  so I drew random names out of a hat, LOL...well...no hat...a glass really...but still.Thanks for the comments :] edit: WATERS wasn't random :P |
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08-06-2009, 03:33 PM
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Haha how random! It is brilliant
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08-06-2009, 03:35 PM
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'Is Conor gay ?' lmao
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08-06-2009, 04:25 PM
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ZakJam <3~
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Suddenly, water falls from the ceiling and splashes Shaun.
Shaun: Great, impromptu wet t-shirt competition. Fantastic. Well get a good look boys. He shakes his chest at the others, before Greg goes to mop up the water. PAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA, SHAUN TO WIN NOW |
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08-06-2009, 08:12 PM
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 Good update, I like it! Tut tut Sia; be involved in your own creation!! She's like JJ Abrams; created something wonderful and then ignores it completely.
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08-06-2009, 08:21 PM
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Nice job Shaun! 
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08-06-2009, 08:32 PM
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08-06-2009, 08:33 PM
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Jen
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Like Cloverfield... God that movie bored me. |
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