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07-06-2009, 01:57 PM
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Part 3 -
Davina: Hello People and Welcome Back! Right, we have 5 people left, lets make that 4? The Video starts and shows Brona, smiling and waving at the screen. The song "Happy Days" comes on Brona: Hiya. i'm Brona She smiles Brona: As you can see, i'm quite short and sweet, but good things come in small packages, eh? I'm Irish and proud! You should never under-estimat the irish. You know what I mean! people say I am Sweet, but that is up to you to decide that one! Cuts to her audition Brona: I am a loveable person, and love to talk and chat to people. I hate bitchyness, and I hate smoking, with a passion! I hate fake people, they annoy me. But yeah, i'm just me! Cuts to Bronaa standing and jumping around The Video stops and Brona steps out of the car in jeans and a jumper. The audience go mad as she smiles and waves to everybody. She laughs and takes her time going in, shouting and cheering to the audience. She is rushed up the stairs by security and smiles as she enters the house Brona: Eek. That was exciting! She walks into the house Brona: Hiya Guys! Wow, there are loads of you! SiaSiaSia: Aww Wow! You're so small and sweet! They all introduce themselves and everyone talks together Shaun: So Guys, Do we all Have jobs here? Lauren: I am a hairdresser! Hannah.: Oh my god Same! Andy: I am a mechanic Davina: Aww, it all seems peaceful again. Shall we se what impact the next housemate will make? The Video Starts and Lili appears, smiling. The song "Piece of Me" comes on Lili: Hi, I am Linda. The Camera Cuts to her folding her arms Lili: i am probably one of the older housemates this year, but that does not mean i cannot be as entertaining. I speak my mind, so don't cross me Cut to Linda smoking Lili: i am not a girly girl and like to have a laugh with the Lads and hang out at the pub. I never really get Grumpy unless i run out of these things! Linda holds up her Fag Lili: I hate people who think they are perfect, if I meet anyone like that, i will tell them how it is! The Video stops and Linda gets out of the car. She looks very Casual and waves at the audience. There are a mixture of cheers and Boo's but Linda carries on walking otherwise. She puts her thumbs up at the camera's and smiles, before moving on. She shouts to the audience as she walks up the stairs and walks swiftly into the Big Brother house She walks down the steps cheering, before entering the house Lili: Hey Mates They all introduce themselves to her. Lili starts talking to Andy alone Lili: God, I hope we can have a few Beers. So, do you drink? Andy: Yeah, anything. You know what i mean Lili: Ahh that's alright then Andy: Yeah! Lili: You see i quite like to hang out with the Lads, so we should get along! Andy: Thats alright then, everyone seems to be Gelling well? Lili: Haha. I heard someone saying that there was an argument? Andy: Oh Yeah, between the two blondes, with the boobs. I'd rather not know. Lili: Haha. I know right, lets not get involved! Brona and Annie walk up Brona: Hiya Guys, you two both seem quite nice, so we are going to talk to you! Lili: How you doing Ladies? God I need a Fag. Annie: Same! Haha. God, I think we have to smoke outside? Davina: Aww. Andy and Lili seem to be getting on! 3 more left, who should we put in now? The Video Begins. A Young Man dressed fashionably is standing there with a serious look on his face. He smiles. "Ruby" starts to play as his details appear on the screen Fom: Alright? I'm Fom Camera Cuts to Fom singing into a microphone. It then Cuts to his audition Fom: You know, i'm just an ordinary guy, like, i sing a bit, but there is nothing special about me. I think the Big Brother house would benefit from someone like me. I am not an "in your Face" kind of Lad, but i do like to have a laugh Big Brother: Tom, Will You sing for us? Fom: Errr, No. Camera Cuts back to Fom striking poses Fom: I think i can win, yeah, I mean, i'm a likeable Guy! Why Not? The Video Stops and Tom Steps out of the Car Wearing a T-shirt and some Jeans. His Reception is pretty Good and a lot of the girls scream for him. He Strikes a few Poses, before walking up the stairs and into the doors Fom: Phew. That was good He walks into the house Fom: Hello! Everyone introduces themselves. Fom joins Annie, Lili, Andy, Brona and Sia Fom: This is so exciting right! Annie: Yeah, i know. That crowd are mad. Haha SiaSiaSia: I got a kind of mixed reception? Andy: Yeah, Same! Lili: So what do you do then Fom? Fom: Ermm, I work at a supermarket. Yeah, I know, Lame! Brona: Fom, May i say, You are incredibly Good looking. You have stunning eyes! Fom: Aww Thanks, Same to you! Brona: And your sweet! Fom: I wonder why we have all of these crates? Lili: Hmm, Maybe we have to build our furniture? Davina: See that? The housemates are grouping! You have Andy, Lili, Brona, Annie and Fom looking quite like a group. Lauren, Christina, Shaun, Damon and Markwaldorf are gelling well and Sam, Hannah, Sia and Harry are looking like they are in a group? Hmmm. Lets get another in! The video starts to show Nicky running towards the camera smiling nicky.: Hiya there chums! My name is nicky! She pulls a wide grin nicky.: Fancy a chat? Cuts to audition nicky.: I am a very likeable girl! People like me and the way I am. I am the chattiest person you will ever meet Big brother! She Screams nicky.: God, i need a drink Big Brother: Would you like a Drink Nicky? nicky.: I was being sarcastic..... Screams Cuts to nicky in a room listening to music and dancing nicky.: I'm Lively. fun and you will never meet anyone like me. Chiao She winks and runs off The Video stops as Nicky steps out of the car, dressed in a long black dress. The audience cheer her and she waves at the cameras. She looks very Bubbly as she walks up the steps, waving one last time before entering the house She walks down the stairs and into the house nicky.: Hi Guys! i'm nicky! They All introduce themselves and Go back into their groups. Nicky walks over to Sam, Harry, Sia and hannah nicky.: Hiya Guys! Wow, everyone is in little groups Hannah.: Yep, we are the best. come sit down! nicky.: Haha. Okay! So anything dramatic really happened yet? Hannah.: A Little. Lauren called my boobs "Nearly as Fake as Hers", so i had a go at her. But I apologised and told her that we should start a new leaf nicky.: Oh Okay Hannah.: But I Didn't mean it, it just means I will hopefuly get one less nomination nicky.: Lovely. Right I am going to talk to some more people SiaSiaSia: Okay, Bye Nicky Nicky walks off and over to Lauren and the group she is talking to nicky.: Oh my God, so she goes over and talks to Lauren! Two faced Bitch Davina: Ouch! Hannah seems quite bitchy? Anyway, last but not least.. Ben! The Video starts up and shows a very muscley man lifting weights. The music "Sex on Fire" Is playing 30stone: Heya Ladies, i'm Ben 30stone Winks Camera Cuts to his audition 30stone: I'm the kind of guy that likes to excersice. Yaknow. I go to the gym every day. God, i hope there is a Gym in the house! The ladis Love me and my good looks, but, you can't blame them! Big Brother: Or can you Ben? 30stone: Err, What? Camera Cuts to 30stone jogging around in circles 30stone: Keeping fit is my thing. I think that the housemates will like having me in the house., I am laid back and like a laugh now and again! 30stone picks up a pint glass full of beer 30stone: There better Be plenty of this stuff too The Video stops and the car pulls up. Ben gets out, wearing a short sleeved top. He is wearing dark Jeans and has his hair spiked up. The woman are cheering but the men are booing. He Walks up to the camera and rips his shirt off, revealing a six pack. He throws his shirt into the audience and cheers. He shakes lots of people hands as he walks along the entrance and runs up the stairs and straight through the doors into the house, still topless Ben walks down the steps and into the house. Everyone turns around and welcomes him 30stone: Hiya Guys! He Looks at Hannah 30stone: Well Hello He Winks at her and they hug Hannah.: Hiya Babe, I'm Hannah 30stone:nice to meet you Hannah, I'm Ben 30stone:Hiya Darling Lili: Alright mate, i'm Lili 30stone:Lili, are you alright my love The rest of the housemates introduce themselves ________________________ That should be part 1, 2 and 3! Part 4 will be posted soon! |
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I am the yapping media critic from the Daily Mail on the outside decrying how awful this is and how this is an end to all civilisation.   
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07-06-2009, 03:15 PM
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Part 4. Final part
- Davina: Welcome Back to Big Brother. Right! We Have our 16 housemates! Ben, nicky, Brona, Lili, Fom, Damon, Markus, Lauren, Hannah, Annie, Brona, Christina, Sam, Andy, Harry and Shaun! Pheew! And they are a lively bunch right guys! The audience all cheer Davina: Okay, as you may know, none of these people are yet housemates! they will have to do tasks to earn their housemate status! On monday evening, the people who have not yet earnt housemate status, will be booted! Anyway, lets hand you over to Big Brother! Brona: So Yeah, I wonder why there is no furniture? nicky.: Maybe the boxes are our furniture. You know what Big Brother can be like? DamonJ: I wonder where the bedroom is? Shaun: i think this is all of us, shouldn't the garden be open in a bit? Big Brother: This is Big Brother. Please could one person come to the diary room Everyone runs to the door Harry.: I'm not going! Christina: Wait guys, Maybe it is an eviction? Sam!: Eurgh, Move out of the way! Sam walks through the door and into the diary room Big Brother: Hello Sam Sam!: Hiya Big Brother Big Brother explains to Sam that none of them are housemates and he must choose one person to shave their eyebrows and draw glasses and a moustache on, to make them both housemates Sam!: No Way! Really? Big Brother: Yes Sam Sam!: **** man. That is one hard task! When should I do it? Big Brother: Sam, you have 4 minutes from the time you walk out of the diary room, to complete your task Sam!: Okay Big Brother Big Brother: Sam, please take the clippers and the pen. Your time starts... Now Sam runs out of the diary room and into the house. Everybody stares at him Sam!: Guys.. Shut up and be quite! Listen everybody! MarkWaldorf: Oh God, a task! Sam!: Right.. none of us are housemates yet! We all have to earn our housemate status! Harry.: WHAT! Some people groan Sam!: I have to shave somebodies eyebrows off, and draw glasses and a moustache on their face with permanent marker, and we wil both be housemates! Cmon, I only have 4 minutes! Who is going to do it? Annie: Huh! No chance! Lauren: I will! Shaun: I Will do it! Shaun, Lauren, Andy, Lili, 30stone, Sia and nicky all volunteer. Sia Sits in the seat before anybody else SiaSiaSia: Cmon Sammy Boy. Shave me hunny! Sam!: You sure? SiaSiaSia: Yes! just do it! He shaves one eyebrow off SiaSiaSia: And the other! Sam shaves the other one off and opens the pen lid SiaSiaSia: Now my face He draws Glasses and a moustache on Sia's face. Everybody is silent as Sia gets up and looks into the Mirror SiaSiaSia: Oh My God She screams Sam!: Are we housemates? Everybody starts muttering about Sia nicky.: They will grow back Sia, don't worry Love! Big Brother: This is Big Brother. Sam and Sia, congratulations! You have completed the task and are now official housemates! Everybody Cheers and Sam and Sia hug Sam!: Well done Hunny! SiaSiaSia: You too! Davina: Well Well Well! Sam and Sia are the first two housemates! Remember, on Sunday evening at least one housemate wil be evicted, if they do not earn houemate status in the next few days! See you on Sunday.. Goodnight! _________________________________ Next Highlights show should be posted in the next few hours Please comment! |
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07-06-2009, 04:33 PM
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07-06-2009, 04:39 PM
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I will make a nicer front post with the Housemate Status and everything
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07-06-2009, 04:43 PM
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I love it
 Why is Nicky - nicky though 
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07-06-2009, 04:43 PM
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Thanks Ninastar and Sam!
And I will have to change that :P |
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07-06-2009, 05:03 PM
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This is quality lewis just read all 4.
Is good just wanted to read more lol. |
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07-06-2009, 05:22 PM
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Lol. I have nearly finished HL show 1! Will post that and then start HL show 2. Will probably finish that tomorrow, post that tomorrow. Write HL show 3, (Tonights show) And Post that tomorrow evening, then I wil be up to date
Do you prefer this to Tibbenders? I prefer writing this :P
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07-06-2009, 07:08 PM
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Highlights show 1 -
10:36 in the Big Brother house. All 16 Housemates have entered the house and found out that none of them are housemates yet, and that they would have to earn their housemate status. Sam has just passed his task along with Sia, and both are now housemates. All of the housemates are in the living room. Sam, Sia and Hannah are talking Sam!: So then Sia, how you feeling babe SiaSiaSia: Ugly Hannah and Sam Laugh Sam!: Don't Be stupid love, you are stunning Hannah Sniggers Sam!: What? Hannah.: Nothing babe, don't worry Sia Gives Hannah a Shocked Look SiaSiaSia: I need a Wee, where the hell is the toilet? Sam!: Ooh, I don't know Sam shouts to Annie from across the room Sam!: Annie.. you got any idea where the toilet is babe? Annie: In the orange door! Why? Annie and Brona walk over together SiaSiaSia: Oh nothing, I need a wee, that's all Sia gets up and goes into the toilet 11:23 in the Big Brother house. Hannah has come to the diary room Big Brother: Hello Hannah Hannah.: Hiya Big Brother Big Brother: Hannah, how has your first hour in the Big Brother house been? Hannah.: Meh, not bad Big Brother: How are you finding your non-housemates, Hannah? Hannah.: Sam is Lovely, he really is. Sia is not bad, but she keeps trying to get in with Sam. Nobody else is really bothering to try to speak to me. I have already had am argument with Lauren, Stupid Bitch, She runs around thinking she is perfect, well she isn't. Now she is Turning everyone against me, so yeah, I hate her. i only said sorry because I was worried she would nominate me. I am going to nominate her though. Eurgh Big Brother: Hannah, what do you think of the "non Housemate" Twist? Hannah.: Big Brother I *****ing hate it. It is a stupid twist. I worked hard to get here, I even had a boob job like.. 2 months before, so that you would notice me. Do you know how much I had to pay for that, and now you are saying I could go on Sunday. How dare you! I hope I get housemate Status soon! Big Brother: Are you happy that Sam and Sia are housemates? Hannah.: For Sam, yeah, but Sia is just going to try and seduce him, I know it. I bet she is out there right now giving him some. Anyway, she can ***** off, Sam is mine Big Brother: Hannah, do you love sam? Hannah.: What kind of question is that? No.. I Like him and I think he is funny, and Fit. Whether I love him is a different question? Lets just say, I would sleep with him! Anyway, GOD, This is boring in here Big Brother: Hannah, Would you like to Leave the Diary Room? Hannah.: Yeah, I suppose? Big Brother: Goodbye Hannah, you may now leave the diary room Hannah.: Bye Big Brother 12:01 in the Big Brother house. All of the housemates are in the living room The Garden gates come up. All of the housemates run to the Garden door Lili: Thank God, a smoking area! DamonJ: Oh wow, it is gloriously stunning! Lauren: Is that it? Where is the pool? Christina: It is Lovely! Can we Go in? The door unlocks and Christina runs out Christina: Oh wow, it is beautiful! Shaun: Look at that guys! He Points to the smoking area, a Big Red bus stop Fom: A Smoking area! Lili: Finally! Lili runs to the Smoking area, gets a Fag out of her pocket and Lights it Lili: God! This is brilliant. First Fag since about eight tonight! Lauren walks back into the house alone, Nicky and Annie follow her Nicky.: Are you alright Love? Lauren: Yeah, I'm alright. Just a bit Emotional The Phone Suddenly Rings. Annie Runs over to answer it. The Rest of the Non-housemates run into the living room in a rush Annie: Hello? Big Brother: Annie, Please be silent. Because you answered this phone call, you and one other Person will get to be a housemate. You wil have 15 minutes to decide on that housemate, do you understand Annie? Annie: Yes Big Brother: Annie, you are not permitted to discuss any of this information with your fellow Non-Housemates. Is this clear? Annie: Yes Big Brother: Your 15 minutes start now Annie Puts down the phone Harry.: What was that Annie? Shaun: What's Happening? Andy: Are you being evicted? Annie: Don't worry Guys, Never mind. It is nothing Lauren: Are you not allowed to tell? Hannah.: Well obviously not! Annie: Ermm. No. Just carry on talking guys! 12:17 in the Big Brother house. It has been 15 minutes since Annie recieved her phone call from Big Brother Sam!: I Love the Garden! Shaun: Oh it seems a bit small? Harry.: i know right shaun? Too small really Lauren: The credit crunch is in full force I suppose? Hannah.: What the hell is the credit crunch Some of the Non-housemates Snigger Christina: Oh, Well. The Credit crunch is basically when Some downturns econo.. Big Brother: This is big Brother. Earlier on Annie picked up the phone... Big Brother explains the task Big Brother: So Annie, Please can you say the name of the person you wish to join you as a housemate? Annie: I'm Sorry guys, but I am going to have to go with the person I think is the one I have gotten on with the most, and I have been with her all evening.. that is Brona Brona Smiles and the rest of the housemates clap Brona: Thankyou Hunny! She gets up and Hugs Annie, before bursting into tears Annie: Dont Cry Hunny! Brona: I'm Sorry, I just feel I have really found a friend in you Annie: Aww. I feel exactly the same! Big BrotherThis is Big Brother, Annie and Brona, well done. You are now Housemates! The Bedroom will now open, but for housemates Only The Bedroom door unlocks and the gates go up revealing the bedroom. Annie, Brona, Sam and Sia all run in screaming Harry.: So where do we sleep then? MarkWaldorf: Out here I suppose? DamonJ: What, on the crates? 30stone: How Lame. God i need a Beer! Lili, Coming out for a fag? Lili: C'mon then Love. I need another one I think! Coming Andy? Andy: Yeah, Alright 1:55am. Andy, Lili, Ben, Brona, Annie and Fom are in the garden Annie: Guys, have you noticed that like the whole house has grouped up already? Brona: I know right! It is only day 1! Fom: Why? Who has grouped up? Annie: Well I mean like.. There is us 6.. you know, the laid back ones, none of use are bitchy. Then you have Sam, Sia and Hannah who are just stuck together like Glue, and you have Lauren, Damon, Markwaldorf, Nicky, Harry, shaun and christina! 30stone: Yeah, I see what you mean Lili: I think that Hannah likes Sam. Andy: Do you? Annie: Why's that then? Lili: I just have a feeling. I think Sam Likes Sia but Hannah likes Sam. I saw her giving Sia nasty looks earlier, especially when Sia and Sam became housemates together Fom: Wow, your good Lili, I see what you mean now! 2:34am. Sam and Hannah are in the toilets, talking together Sam!: If I tell you this, you cannot say? Hannah.: Go on! Sam!: I think I like Sia Hannah.: What do you mean? Sam!: You know, she is just so lovely, and my type of girl. i don't think I am in love with her, just falling. You know what I mean? Hannah.: Yeah, I suppose. Sam!: I will just get to know her more i think. I mean, i have only known her for a few hours? Hannah.: Can we talk later, i need a Pee? Sam!: okay. I am off to bed anyway. Night, Have a nice sleep! Hannah.: Night Babe Sam Leaves and Hannah pouts in the Bathroom mirror Hannah.: Choosing her over me? Silly Boy. I'll show him who he should be with Hannah Laughs to herself 4:35am. All of the housemates are in Bed. All of the Non-housemates are in bed apart from Damon, who is in the diary room Big Brother: Hello Damon DamonJ: Hai Big Brother Big Brother: How has your first evening been Damon? DamonJ: Okay I suppose. I have been quite quiet I think. I don't really want to stand out quite yet. I think when everybody is settled in, I will come out of my shell. For now, I will just observe people Big Brother: Is there anybody in the house that you are getting on with specifically? DamonJ: Markwaldorf. We are getting on, although he is talking to Shaun a lot. Lauren and Christina are close, even though they are hardly like eachover. She is all girly girly and plastic. Christina is really intelligent and puts personality before looks I think. Christina is such a sweetie Big Brother: Anybody you are not getting on with? DamonJ: Nope. I have heard about Hannah and seen her bitching about people, but I do it all the time, so it doesn't matter. When I get tired, I bitch! Luckily I haven't tonight, but i expect soon I will, when I get annoyed with people, I will End Credits Roll opinions Please guys! The next HL show will be tomorrow Evening
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07-06-2009, 07:12 PM
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By The way, it should be longer tomorrow! I only had The rest of the evening after they all entered to work on. Tomorrow there is a whole day of stuff
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07-06-2009, 07:43 PM
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Bumpage
Please Comment if you read!
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07-06-2009, 07:46 PM
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Oh that's great!
Tehehe! The audition was lol'able! It was totally me! HAHA! Xx and I was going to ask why I was nicky too xD Xx |
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07-06-2009, 07:48 PM
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The Video starts to show quite a toned guy, in an Everton shirt and jeans.
Well that has sealed it then, Andy's first out
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07-06-2009, 07:49 PM
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07-06-2009, 07:58 PM
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Thanks
It is really fun writing this. Much funner than TiBBenders
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08-06-2009, 12:43 PM
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I love it but how can I be in love with Sia after a couple of hours lool
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Meanwhile outside in the world of the press, the critics had decided to pan the entire series
Led by by none other than the arch critic of reality tv who writes for the Daily Mail... |
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