[Ammi]

..don't drink that whiskey, Kevin..!!!.......poor Kevin...

[Cal.]

Suttons

Kevin's story is really good.

[LukeB]

Loving the storyline

[Jack.]

Originally Posted by Beyonsleigh

Suttons

Kevin's story is really good.

Thanks it will be a long running storyline

[mizzy25]

hmmm wonder who young dean is going to be then?

[Jack.]

Originally Posted by mizzy25

hmmm wonder who young dean is going to be then?

Well who do you think Dean is

[Ammi]

..I'm really enjoying this, Jack.....

[Jack.]

Originally Posted by Ammi

..I'm really enjoying this, Jack.....

Aww thanks Ammi I'm glad your enjoying it

[Jack.]

Next episode will be up tomorrow or Tuesday

[mizzy25]

oooh its getting exciting

[Jack.]

Any feedback would be good

[Jack.]

I'm currently working on a queer as folk style show. I'm just writing the one episode for now to see if anyone would be interested in reading it. It will most likely be up just sfter christmas in a separate thread

[Jack.]

Sorry about the lack of episodes lately. Hopefully will post one before 2014 is out

[mizzy25]

arghhhhhhh its like a duff duff moment on eastenders lol definitely has left me wanting more, well done.

[Jack.]

Originally Posted by mizzy25

arghhhhhhh its like a duff duff moment on eastenders lol definitely has left me wanting more, well done.

I'll let you in on a little secret episode 14 will be a must read episode. It's going to be truely shocking and you won't expect what happens

[mizzy25]

I keep trying to message u but it freezes almost every time. yes im loving it and my jaw has dropped twice on reading the last ep lol the bit when the lads r in the back room and alfie catches them, him saying he found it hot... nice touch something different lol then when nicki after almost dying, tha nasty dean tells her she has 48 hours to pay up, haway come on u almost had her killed, evil, evil man. brilliant I love it lol

[Jack.]

Originally Posted by mizzy25

I keep trying to message u but it freezes almost every time. yes im loving it and my jaw has dropped twice on reading the last ep lol the bit when the lads r in the back room and alfie catches them, him saying he found it hot... nice touch something different lol then when nicki after almost dying, tha nasty dean tells her she has 48 hours to pay up, haway come on u almost had her killed, evil, evil man. brilliant I love it lol

There is another big secret that Dean has which will be revealed sometime this year. Won't tell you went but there will be hints of the secret in some episodes. Actually one hint as already been dropped in a previous epsiode

[Ammi]

..wow this is really heavy stuff, Jack...great writing and storylines, really gritty soap stuff, well done.....

[Jack.]

Originally Posted by Ammi

..wow this is really heavy stuff, Jack...great writing and storylines, really gritty soap stuff, well done.....

Aww thanks Ammi

[Jack.]

Been storylining for the next few months. Got some really good storylines that I will readers will enjoy but I've also got a few storylines that will shock you.

[Jack.]

Episode 9 should be up within the next 24 hours

[Jack.]

Episode 10 has been rewritten as I've scrapped a storyline. Episode will be up shortly.

[Jack.]

Episode 11 up soon

[Jack.]

New episode tomorrow

[mizzy25]

saw u had posted and thought he hasn't pm'ed me lol look forward to it x