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|  04-04-2010, 08:32 PM | #101 | |||
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			Good to see the Brotherhood riding into battle, valiant as ever.
		 
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|  04-04-2010, 09:02 PM | #102 | |||
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			Chapter 8.2 Andy threw a post in all capital letters at Princess, who deftly deleted the post. He fired one of his many alternative accounts at her, which she deflected, but she deflected it towards Vicky who wasn’t expecting it. She took it in the face (dirty bitch) and fell to the ground once more, landing on top of an unconscious David. Remy charged towards Princess, but he became distracted by the vision of Sia, stepping out of TiBB Towers dressed in all white. Remy started running towards Sia, and lifted her up off her feet and hugged her tightly. “Ma cherie!” He exclaimed, before being moved to the Admin board by Sia. Remy was suddenly on the top floor of TiBB Towers, and swore angrily as he realised he had been moderated. He was trapped inside the Towers and could no longer help his fellow Brotherhood brethren. Angry, he began to attack those on the top floor of the Towers – Shaun, Stu, Magic, Kizwiz, Rory, 30stone and Red Moon. Sia hurried into the battle, and sent a low flying lock at Nathan’s legs. It was enough to trap his lower half behind bars; but he was still able to swipe at anyone who came close. She fired another lock at his top half, but Nathan batted the cage away with his fist; causing the cage to smash into Princess’ head. The blow was enough to send her careering off the side of the bridge, and into the sea. Sia howled with rage and charged at Nathan, launching herself at him at the last possible moment and knocked him over. She scrambled away from the angry giant, and fired a lock at his back, finally incapacitating him. Nathan tensed his shoulders and began to thrash around as much as he could, and was visibly weakening the bars of his cage. Sia knew she would have to take Nathan out once and for all. She strengthened the lock; and then began to move Nathan with her mod powers. Sia lifted Nathan, trapped in two cages, over the side of the bridge. She braced herself, she didn’t want to be a killer, but she had to do it. “I’m sorry Nathan!” Sia cried, as she dropped him into the sea. He would sink and drown before he broke out of his cages. Sia sighed a sigh of relief, and turned around, ready to battle once more; but she too was sent over the edge by Andyman. Sia screamed as she fell into the water. She thrashed around in the water for a few moments, trying to gather her bearings, and then felt a powerful grip around her waist. She let out a scream underwater – wasting precious air – as she realised Nathan had a hold on her, and was going to cause her to drown. Sia tried to escape, but his grip was truly iron, and she closed her eyes and thought of Remy as she breathed her last. Remy had gotten into a scrap with 30stone; the two hard men (no, not like that) of TiBB finally taking each other on in an inevitable showdown (it wasn’t really inevitable at all, but for the sake of this story with no real plotline, let’s say it is.) They brawled, smashing lots of stupidly placed items that can be smashed, in the process of their fight. Meanwhile, Red Moon and Rory huddled over Kizzy, Shaun, Stu and Magic. “We have to help Ben get Remy out of here, or we’ll all die. If he even figures out how to get to the helipad, we’re screwed. There are two choppers up there. Each has room to take six people, but that includes a pilot and co-pilot. Only moderators know how to fly choppers, so we need four of us to make it off the island. There’s Mark, James, Princess, Darenn, Vicky and Sia outside; plus the seven of us up here... ****.” Roy cursed. “Maybe we should just leave now and let them all fight over who’s leaving, I mean, there’s six of us here, two moderators included, maybe we should just bail out now while we still can?” Magic suggested, because he’s banned it means I can make him the token heartless bastard of the group with no backlash. “Are you out of your mind?!” Shaun screeched in the tone that only a pissy pregnant woman can achieve. Weird, as he’s male. “I’m not leaving Darenn! Not again!” “It’s not that bad a suggestion, Shu.” Rory tried to calm Shaun down. “I mean, they’ll be fine, they’re all moderators, they’re skilled at what they do and they knew the risks of accepting the job.” “Why the hell aren’t you out there then, Rory?! Why is my Darenn out there!?” Shaun was crying. “Hey look, a distraction!” Rory played that old chestnut, and Shaun fell for it beautifully. Rory began to run for the hidden doorway which led to the stairs to the helipad. “Aw **** it.” Roy muttered. He grabbed Kizwiz by the hand and the two ran after Rory; followed quickly by Magic. “Please Shaun... help me to the chopper...” Stu’s voice was very faint now. Shaun’s own worry about Darenn subsided; Stu’s life was very much in his hands. “Alright, let’s go.” Shaun lifted Stu up onto his feet, and helped Stu towards the stairs. The two staggered up the steps, and were soon onto the helipad, where the chopper was ready for takeoff. Red Moon was piloting, Rory was the co-pilot, just so you can picture this scene really well. Good. Shaun helped Stu into the helicopter, and then stood beside it, staring hopefully at the door. “Come on Shaun! Get in! We have to go now!” Rory yelled at his friend. “Darenn can handle himself no problem, get in!” “I don’t want to leave him!” Shaun screamed. “We have to go now Sun! We can’t wait for him!” Rory confused the story with the plot of LOST when they’re leaving the island on the helicopter, and Sun’s all like NO MY HUSBAND IS COMING RLY SOON YOU GUISE and they’re all like **** WOMAN and then it takes off and Jin appears and it’s all really sad because the freighter blows up and Sun’s like NOOOOOOOooOOoOoooooOOOOO... anyway, Shaun got into the helicopter. It took off, with no sign of Darenn bursting out of the stairwell. Remy and Ben were still fighting as the group left the top room of the Towers; and Remy noticed them leaving. He tried to dash towards the stairs, but Ben dump tackled Remy, who hit his head against the table on his way down, knocking him out instantly. Ben lifted Remy up, and hurried as fast as he could down the stairs, back to the battle outside, Remy in tow. James, Mark and Darenn were in a stand off against Andyman and Andy. In between the two groups, lay the unconscious bodies of Vicky and David. James eventually made the first move, charging at the two Andys but was knocked to the ground by the sheer fat content of Andyman’s new signature which he uploaded that second. Andy darted forward and grabbed James, holding him by the neck and took him hostage. “Give Us another Moderator and We will Stop making Multiple Accounts.” Andy demanded. “Never!” Mark shouted. “Fine. We’ll play this your way.” Andyman shrugged nonchalantly. “Break his neck, Andy.” He motioned to James, who struggled fiercely. Andy complied. “James! No!” Mark started to run forwards, but stopped himself. “You bastards! You won’t get away with this!” Ben burst outside with Remy on his shoulders, and ran to Mark and Darenn’s side. “Remy!” Andyman shouted, horrified. Mark glared at Andyman, then turned to Ben. “Ben, kill Remy. They killed James.” Mark commanded. “Sorry Mark, but I’m not going to.” Ben shrugged his shoulders, and he walked over to beside Andyman and Andy. He dumped Remy at their feet. “Everyone upstairs ran to the helipad. They’re probably long gone by now. We’ve got nothing to fight for now. I’m going back to the Brotherhood.” Mark looked furious. Ben had clearly forgotten that Princess, Stu and Niamh had come to the island via a second helicopter that was still there. He knew there was no hope for him and Darenn to both make it to the helicopter; the Brotherhood would follow them and they wouldn’t stand a chance of flying away before they caught up with them. He knew that this was his fault; and the only way he could try and make up for it would be to cause a distraction to allow Darenn and Vicky to escape. But he needed Vicky to wake up first, and he needed to tell them his plan. He considered using the mod board, but Ben could read it and might tell the Brotherhood. He had to take a chance... Mark sent the message. Darenn read the new thread in the mod board, and instantly was horrified. Mark couldn’t be serious. He turned to look at the admin of TiBB; cutting an imposing figure as he stared down the surviving members of the Brotherhood. He knew that all they were waiting for was Vicky to come around; but they had to hope she would manage to get away from the Brotherhood if she did wake up. Darenn and Mark edged closer to the unconscious bodies in the middle. “Why don’t we fight this like men, Andyman? You and me, away from here, let Darenn and Vicky go.” Mark tried to reason with him. “Oh, yeah sure.” Andyman smiled at him, and the two walked away from the others, into the forest. “Oh.” Andy looked surprised. “Yeah.” Darenn agreed. “I was kinda expecting them to get into an epic fight there. Can I take Vicky and head into the tower?” “Y’know What, go for it. My beef was With Mark and James anyway. You let me go once before, so I’m Returning the Favour. See you in another Life, brother.” Andy ripped off Desmond from LOST. Darenn picked Vicky up, and hobbled into the TiBB Towers, closing the door behind him. At least Mark’s plan was going to go ahead, even if it had unfolded in a weird way. He hurried up the stairs as fast as he could, eventually making it through the doors into the top floor of the Tower. He glanced out the window, and saw the tiny figure of Mark in the middle of a circle consisting of Andyman, Andy, 30stone, Remy and David (the latter of whom had recovered). Darenn wondered what Mark was saying to them, what his last words were going to be, but he knew he had no time for that. Darenn dragged Vicky up the stairs and made it to the helicopter. He buckled Vicky into the co-pilot’s seat, and he rushed round to the pilot’s seat. He started the engines, and said a prayer for Mark. He had never been a religious person, but he truly hoped that if there was an afterlife, Mark wouldn’t be treated too badly in it. The helicopter took off, and headed in the direction of somewhere better than here. Somewhere free. End of Chapter 8 | |||
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|  04-04-2010, 09:06 PM | #103 | ||
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			can i be in it please
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|  04-04-2010, 09:11 PM | #104 | |||
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			:O Not Princess and Sia too, Greg kill off some BH members And pmslmao at Vicky talking it in the face 
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|  04-04-2010, 09:28 PM | #105 | ||
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			Rofl, great story Greg.
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|  04-04-2010, 09:30 PM | #106 | |||
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			Epilogue Mark was now on his knees, in the middle of the Brotherhood circle. They were all bating furiously. Mark had to make the ultimate sacrifice: he was doomed to be the Brotherhood’s personal sex slave on an island in the middle of nowhere with no means of escape. He knew he deserved an eternity of hell, but he hadn’t realised it would be this bad. But the Brotherhood insisted that it wasn’t gay or anything, they were just doing their duty and punishing Mark for being a twit. Apparently. Shaun, as he was the first member to make it off the island, returned to the real world (ILoveDC, this doesn’t concern you) and was, according to the terms of the game, given a mod position. Except all of the admins were either dead or incapacitated, so he couldn’t actually be granted his position. And the board soon became a target for spammers, multiple accounts and arguments with no real control over who said what. All of the regular members prior to Mark’s sick game began to pine for the days of overbearing moderating and ridiculous locks; because at least something got done back then – now it was all rubbish. Stu survived his ordeal and returned to TiBB with a renewed sense of sarcasm. But, as a tribute to the fallen members of the moderating team, he led a charge of anti-swearing on TiBB, and due to the lack of control on the site, started to command a sizable group of keyboard terrorists who unofficially ran the site. Magic was still banned. Gutted. Red Moon, despite being something of a hero in the story, stayed away from the site; the troubles of real life getting him down. The same went for Kizwiz, who has a family to look after anyways. Rory was the one to discover that Darenn and Vicky made it off the island; and soon reunited Darenn with Shaun. Shaun gave birth to a beautiful baby girl, who was named MrGaryy – Darenn’s dreams were realised. MrGaryy grew up to be absolutely fabulous and incredible fierce, I would not mess with her. Vicky was the godmother to MrGaryy, and in later life became MrGaryy’s manager when she went on to become Gary Faguilera – a burlesque dancer in a nightclub. Gary Faguilera’s dance troupe consisted of Gary, Enid and Twilite Twitté; an older woman who reminded Gary’s parents of a child star they knew long ago... But she couldn’t possibly be the same person... Twilight Twitty died on the island, didn’t she? They always wondered, but she would never tell. xoxo Twilight Twitty's marketing team Twilight Twitty: Resurrection out in stores on Monday! The End. Last edited by Z; 04-04-2010 at 09:32 PM. | |||
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|  04-04-2010, 09:33 PM | #107 | |||
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			*If there was a standing ovation smiley I'd use it* Lmfao at the first two lines of the epilogue, it's the sort of thing you could actually imagine (not that you'd want too) 
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|  04-04-2010, 09:38 PM | #108 | ||
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			Rofl brilliant ending Greg.
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|  04-04-2010, 09:41 PM | #109 | |||
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			:'( beautiful 
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|  05-04-2010, 02:13 AM | #110 | |||
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			OMG that was amazing <3 Zee your a really talented writer.
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|  21-12-2010, 07:22 PM | #111 | |||
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|  21-12-2010, 07:50 PM | #112 | |||
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|  29-12-2010, 03:24 AM | #114 | |||
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			A TiBB writing project I actually completed    | |||
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|  29-12-2010, 04:12 PM | #115 | |||
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			A TiBB writing project anyone actually completed    
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|  29-12-2010, 05:03 PM | #116 | |||
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			-completed one-
		 
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|  29-12-2010, 05:46 PM | #117 | |||
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|  29-12-2010, 05:47 PM | #118 | |||
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|  04-07-2013, 08:00 AM | #119 | |||
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| Z |  Might start a sequel to this. I started a sequel to this ages ago but it never got off the ground but I think it would work better now because there are so many new members   | |||
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|  05-07-2013, 01:18 AM | #120 | |||
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			I request to be the killer.    
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|  05-07-2013, 01:24 AM | #121 | |||
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			I request to be the wailing banshee because that's what part ban always gives me in his stupid stories....
		 
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|  05-07-2013, 01:30 AM | #122 | |||
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			I like to keep my writing as real as possible.    
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|  05-07-2013, 01:31 AM | #123 | |||
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|  05-07-2013, 01:38 AM | #124 | |||
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|  05-07-2013, 10:16 PM | #125 | |||
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