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Jack. · 17-11-2015, 05:23 PM

Episode 20

"Camera Pans to Nicola's body on the floor of the shed"

The episode starts with the police checking the surrounding areas of the house looking if they can find anymore bodies. One of the officers checks the shed "Sir I've found a body,I've found a body of a woman that matches to our descriptions" The officer says as the other officers rushes to him before phoning for an ambulance. Samara is walking towards Kathy as she sees the police officers rushing towards the back of the house. "More drama going on across there again I see" Samara says as she walks into Kathy's. The pair of them get a cup of tea before standing by the front door watching what's going on across the road. "I tell you something, This street never has a quiet day there's always some sort of drama going on." Kathy Says before walking back in the house.

Meanwhile at Robbies flat. Robbie and Kyle are having a cup of tea. "I know I'm gunna be noise now but why did you get kicked out by Candy?" Robbie asks as he puts the tv on. Kyle tells him that he has been having an affair with Candy's sister and has got her pregnant. Robbie is surprised at Kyle has just told him. "So I've only seen you around the avenue a few times, Are you new to the area?" Kyle asks. Robbie tells him that he had to move to the avenue after getting hate crime against him for being gay. "God, there's some sad people in the world, I bet most of the ones there were giving you hate, have tried dick once or twice themselves, When ive been pissed a few times I'm not gunna lie I've ended up in a guys bed, I don't class myself as one sexuality, I say I have an open sexuality really" Kyle says.

Meanwhile at the Smiths. Sara and Paul are getting ready to go to Dani's murder trial. "That Seth Dee better get life for taking our girls life away from her so young" Sara says to Paul as he's putting his shirt on. Knowing that it wasn't Seth Dee that had killed his daughter it was him and Brad. "Are you ready? Remember we still need to pick your mum up from the train station before we go to the court" Paul says to Sara as she's picks a packet of tissues up. Just as they are about to head out of the door the phone rings "Hello Mrs Smith today's trial won't be going ahead today as Mr Dee was attacked by his fellow cellmates and is in a critical condition in hospital" A police officer says before Sara puts the phone down, See looks at Paul before telling him what the police officer had just told her on the phone. Paul takes his shoes off and heads upstairs to get changed when he gets into the bedroom he gets his phone and texts Brad to meet him in the cafe in 20 minutes.

Meanwhile at the hospital. Nicola is being treated by the doctors and nurses, Darren is standing outside the hospital room. "Mr topping I've got an update about your sisters condition, Your sister has broken many bones in her body and has a bleed on the brain, so we've had to put her into a coma to see if the bleeding stops or not, the next few days are crucial" The doctor tells Darren. He looks at the doctor before walking away from the hospital window. As he's working back towards his ward in the hospital he hears a voice he recognises, he walks around the corner "Hello son" Says Brian, Darren and Nicolas father! "What the hell are you doing here, How did you know I was here?" Darren asks as he's not seen his father in 16 years, Brain tells him that hear about it on the news and he found out from a few friends he use to work with in the police that him and Nicola were in this hospital. Darren slowly walks to his bed before getting his phone. "Look at this woman she's dead all because of you, If you hadn't of slept with the woman from the hairdressers mum would have still been living a happy life in Cornwall but no she's dead" Says Darren as he asks the nurses to get Brian to leave him alone.

Back at Robbies flat. Robbie is about to go out to get some shopping when Candy knocks on the door. "So is it true that Kyle is living with you now?" Candy says as she walks into the flat, Robbie tells her that he's only stay for a few days, Candy looks at him before going to the car to get bin bags of clothes. "These are all Kyle's clothes telling him to stay away from my house otherwise I'll call the police" Candy says as she walks out the door. Robbie walks into Kyle's room were Kyle is on the bed sleeping, "Kyle wake up, Candy has just been hear mouthing off about you" Robbie shouts as he tries waking Kyle up. As Kyle wakes up and is about to talk to Robbie he sees his phone ringing "Kyle it's your dad, I've just been on the phone to Camille what have you done, sleeping with Candy's sister and its nice of you to tell me that I'm going to be a granddad!" Keith says as he has a go at Kyle down the phone, Kyle arranges to meet him in the pub to take about it over a drink. Robbie looks at Kyle "Your dad doesn't sound too happy with you does he haha" Robbie says as he goes to get a beer out of the fridge.

At the cafe. Brad is sat waiting for Paul to meet him, When Jack Thompson walks in, "Alright Brad mate, How's you haven't seen you from town in a while, You not sniffing anymore?" Jack says to Brad, He looks at Jack before getting up from his seat, he looks around before telling Jack to follow him to the toilets. Just as Brad is walking in the toilets Paul walks into the cafe, Brad doesn't notice him, Paul sees Jack quickly following Brad into the toilets. He knows that Brad is up to something, Paul gets a coffee and puts it on his table before going into the toilet to see what Brad is doing, As Paul walks into the toilets, Jack and Brad are coming out of one of the cubicles. "What the hell are you doing in there with this little chav" Paul says to Brad, Jack looks at Paul before head butting him "Don't call me no chav, Do you know who I am" Jack says as he walks out of the toilets. Brad helps Paul up and takes him to his seat. "What the hell are you doing talking to Jack Thompson like that, You do know it's his dad that's on the run for killing Pamela topping don't you" Says Brad, As Paul starts to regret what he's just done.

Jack. · 12-01-2016, 12:11 AM

Can't be bothered writing this anymore i'm going to just leave it with 20 episodes for now..

Jack. · 21-01-2016, 10:44 PM

Episode 21

Episode starts with Jack coming from the chippy. He sees Brad walking across the road from the pub "Brad tell that **** that mouthed me the other day better watch his back" Jack shouts to Brad. He walks over towards Brad, Getting something out of his pocket as he walks to him, "So you interested in any stuff or not?" Jack asks Brad as the walk towards brads flat, As they are walking towards the flat, Paul is walking towards the shop when he sees the pair of them walking towards Brads flat, Paul goes into the shop, As he gets to the till he sees Alfie "Hiya just these please, Alfie a what do you know about Jack Thompson?" Paul asks as Alfie puts his shopping into a bag, Alfie gets his phone and shows him a picture of Jack and Paul tells him that's who he's going on about "You don't want to mess with Jack or his dad, They're dangerous" Alfie says as Paul gets his bags before heading towards brads flat.

Meanwhile at the Patterson's. Kevin and Sara are lying on the sofa watching tv, "Are you sure that Suzy won't be back?" Sara says as she kisses Kevin, Kevin smiles at her before telling her that Suzy has got to stay with her mum for the weekend. "Ok then, I'll go get us another drink from the kitchen" Sara says as she goes to the kitchen, she gets her phone out of her bag seeing that there's a message from her sister holly "Hey sis it's only me, Got two bits of exciting news, big news number one I'm moving to the avenue, big news number two is that Meg has given birth, she's had a baby boy and called him Kian!" The text reads. Sara puts the phone down and gets herself and Kevin a drink, "Just had some great news my sister holly is moving to the avenue and her daughter has just given birth to a little baby boy!" Sara says to Kevin as she sits back down.

Back at brads flat, Brad and Jack sat on the sofa, Just as they are about to get down to business Brad hears a knock on the door, he's gets up and sees that it's Paul at the door, "Paul what are you doing here?" Brad asks as he opens the door, Paul walks straight in and sees Jack sat on the sofa, "What is going on here then?" Paul asks Jack gives him a dirty look before going into the kitchen with his phone, Paul asks Brad how long it's been going on between them two,"It's not what you think, I'm not sleeping with him" Brad says as Paul goes into the bedroom and looks at the bed "So who's underwear are these? Because for one you don't wear that style and they are a size large and your only a medium" Paul says as he heads into the kitchen, Just as he is about to open the door Brad stops him and tells him the truth "Ok I'll tell you the truth there was a singles night at the pub the other night and I started talking to Kyle Edwards, We sat drinking for most of the night, when the pub closed I told him to come back for a few drinks but then we got chatting and I was shocked when he told me he was bi, One thing lead to another and we ended up sleeping together, It was a big mistake I'm so sorry Paul, I do love you"

Meanwhile at the pub. Carole and Carly are getting the pub ready for the singles night, "Wonder how many singles we'll get in tonight" Says Carole as Carly is putting banners up, "A few of the girls are coming but not sure how many men we have coming tonight!" Says Carly as she goes into the back to get more decorations. As Carly walks in the back, Carole goes outside to clean the windows when she sees Paul coming from Brad's flat, She sees Brad grab him and go to kiss him, She is shocked at what she is seeing, She hears Carly shouting so she goes back into the pub. "Carole where's the rest of the stuff for tonight? I put it all on the sofa in the back and now it's gone" Carly says.

Meanwhile at the hospital. Dean is sat at Nicola's bedside. "We can't have you coming out of this coma and tell everyone what happened between us" Dean says as he gets the pillow to put over Nicola's face but just as he's about to do it one of the nurses come in to tell him that visiting time is over and he has to leave. Dean leaves the room just before as Darren comes from the loo. "You've just missed your brother he just left he said he would be back tomorrow" the nurse says to Darren, he's confused by what the nurse is going on about. "I think you've gotten me confused with someone else I only have have Nicola I don't have anymore siblings" Darren says to nurse as he looks out the window to see if he can see anyone.

Jack. · 09-06-2016, 08:54 PM

So basically I'm going on holiday tomorrow and will have no wifi for a week so this will give me time to write a load of new episodes. If any of you lot want a certain actor in this just say and I'll find a role for them

Jack. · 09-06-2016, 08:56 PM

The episode starts with Lee and Jack having breakfast, "Dad I've been thinking over the last few weeks that I want to look for my mum" Jack says to Lee. He looks at Jack as he puts his bowl in the sink, he gets a cigarette before sitting back at the table "Why after 23 years do you want to look for her now? Lee asks as he lights up his cigarette. Jack tells him that he feels like he needs to meet her before his son is born. "Ok son I'll find you her address but I'll have to warn you she might not want to speak to you" Lee says to Jack as Dean walks into the kitchen and puts a gun on the table, "So what are you lads talking about in here then" Dean says as Lee walks out to go find the address, "Just telling my dad that I want to meet my mum before Poppy has my son" Jack tells Dean. This brings back the memory to Dean that Gary is on the same avenue as him and he still doesn't know that Dean is his son.

Meanwhile on the avenue. Sara and Kevin are lying in bed when they hear the door go downstairs. "Kevin are you home" Shouts Suzy from the bottom of the stairs just as she's about to go into the living room she sees a pair of heels at the top of the stairs. She runs up to the bedroom and is shocked to see Sara in bed with Kevin, " Get out of my house now you ****ing slut" Suzy says as she grabs a near naked Sara out of the bed before slapping her in the face and screaming in her face. Sara grabs her clothes and runs down the stairs. Kevin waits until he hears the door slam before getting out of bed. Just as Suzy is about to go downstairs Kevin grabs her by her hair and punches her in the face "You stupid bitch, what have you just done, Don't you get it I don't love you, I've never loved you" Kevin says as he leaves Suzy at the top of the stairs. He puts his shoes on before grabbing the car keys.

At the smiths house. Paul is just getting up when he hears Sara coming through the door. "Where have you been all night, I was up most of the night waiting for you" Paul says as he puts the tv on, Sara tells him that she went out for drinks with Candy and fell asleep on her sofa. Paul turns around and looks at her, he knows that she's lying as Candy is out of the country. "Oh that's funny I'm sure that I seen candy post pictures of her in Paris" Paul says as he goes into the kitchen to make himself a cup of tea, Sara is worrying trying to think of a story to tell Paul, Just as she is about to make a story up she sees Kevin drive past and park in the shop car park. "I'm just nipping to the shop we need toilet roll" Sara says as she quickly gets her coat on and runs to the shop. She sees Kevin sitting in his car smoking his cigarette. She walks over to the car just as he's about to open a bottle of vodka, "Bloody hell Kev your starting early aren't you! Is suzy going to say anything?" Sara says as she gets into the car. Kevin grins at Sara before telling her that Suzy won't say anything and that he's sorted it.

Meanwhile Dean is sitting in his car near the hospital looking at a photo of Gary, he gets a pen and paper and starts writing a letter to Gary to tell him that he's his son. Just as he's writing the letter to Gary, he sees Darren get in his car and drive off. Dean quickly gets out of his car and goes into the hospital. As he approaches Nicola's room he sees that the room is empty, "Can you tell me where Nicola has gone" Dean asks the nurse, Who looks at him strangely "Nicola was rushed down to have surgery this morning, she's still down there now" The nurse says before walking off not giving Dean a chance to ask her anymore questions.

Back at the Patterson's. Suzy is sat at the top of the stairs crying, worried what Kevin might do next to her. She slowly gets up off the floor. She hears the phone ring, "Hello Suzy love it's Mike, Kev's brother just wondering if he was about need to speak to him about a few things" Says Mike. Suzy tells him that he's not there but will be back home later. Suzy is determined to get the family back to normal again. She picks up the phone and rings Brad telling him that she is going to do a family meal tonight. Just as she puts the phone down. Kevin walks through the door. "Oh you're still here,Why haven't you left yet?" Kevin asks Suzy as he stumbles into the kitchen. She looks at him before running past him and heading towards the front door stands for a minute to think what he should do next he decides to let Suzy go out of the door.

Meanwhile Dean is sat in his car outside Gary's. He waits for him to leave the house before posting the letter through the letterbox. As Dean is walking back to his car he sees Darren walking up the road. He quickly runs to his car before speeding off. Darren gets his phone out of his pocket and quickly rings the police. Sara is walking past when she sees that Darren is looking very strange. She crosses the road to make sure he's ok. She asks him if he's ok. "No Sara I've just seen Dean but as soon as he seen me he jumped in his car and raced off, he went that quick I didn't even have a chance to get his reg number" Darren says. Sara grabs his hand and tells him that she going to take him to the cafe to get a drink and to calm down.

Meanwhile Jack is in the club when he sees a couple of girls looking his way, so he walks over towards them and starts chatting to them. "So can I buy you girls a drink?" Jack asks. They say yes to the offer. Jack tells them that he'll bring them over. He has a plan of what he's going to do. Before going back to the table with the drinks he drops a pill into one of the girls drinks. As he gives the girls the drinks he sits next to the girl who he's just dropped a pill in her glass. The other girls get up and start chatting to some other guys. "So what's your name?" Jack asks the girl. She tells him that her name is Ava. Jack looks at his phone before asking Ava if she wants to come back to his. She says ok. As they walk outside and get in the taxi Ava says that she's not feeling too good, as the taxi drops them off at Jack's flat Ava is struggling to walk. As they get into the flat she asks Jack if she's ok to have a lie down on the sofa. Jack goes into the kitchen to get a beer and when he returns into the living room where he sees Ava asleep on the sofa, he sits next to her and slowly puts his hand up her skirt.

Jack. · 09-06-2016, 08:56 PM

Welp I wrote that episode months ago and must have forgotten to post it

Jack. · 22-03-2017, 03:06 AM

I'll be starting to write some new ones of these soon

Fetch The Bolt Cutters · 10-12-2014, 05:45 PM

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Originally Posted by Marv.

As the door opens Paul sees Bradley stood in front of him fully naked. He just freezes and looks at Brad. "Take a picture it'll last longer" Brad says as he gets a towel before leaving the bathroom.