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Likes cars that go boom
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Another brilliant poem ammi, just lovely
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thanks kizzy
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Quand il pleut, il pleut
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..I didn't intend to post this..but now it seems appropriate as it will probably be the last time I post in this thread.....
To Benjamin...with love With each footstep left behind a greater one is taken And all the souls laid in theirs beds will never be forsaken Laughter shared and memories stirred will never wander far They’ll dance to your direction and ignite your northern star Some paths are rough and cobbled and you may loose your stride But the beckoning roads are smooth and your dreams will help you glide Over waters and through mountains, your rhythm won’t miss a beat You will know that you’ve arrived when you stand upon your street Take a pause along the way and keep the treasures that you find A journey rushed too quickly is a journey which is blind Discover connections everywhere and tie them to your heart Branches of your journey will bind them tightly when you part Let dreams become your compass, turning pages of desire Giving answers to all questions, leaving nothing to require With each wondrous chapter allow your footprints to unfold Don’t lay the suitcase down until the final stone has rolled When the road to nowhere leads you to your journeys end Your body may be weary but your spirit will transcend And when you look into those eyes and gaze at what you see You’ll know your road has led you to where you’re meant to be
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Oh Ammi, Ammi, Ammi,
That poem is pure honey. When it comes to words, to prose, Your always on the money So please don't be a stranger to this delightful thread on here Your poems draw me to this thread so full of love and cheer |
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Quand il pleut, il pleut
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![]() ..I'll try to think of one for you
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I Love Niamh’s Brick
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![]() I will respond to your email today, sorry about the delay.
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User banned
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Likes cars that go boom
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I wrote a poem on here last night...can't find it now twas pure gold haha
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R.I.P Kerry x
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Our Vicky
Let us all show a bit of respect for Our Vicky She’s about to show that winning isn’t so tricky Was there ever such a lady so lovely or bold? Who would work her lovely legs just to hand us that gold Such amazing grace in which she pushes her pedal Just won’t fail to bring home that glorious gold medal Have that victory dance ready at 4pm meantime We can bask in her beauty and all cheer her sublime This green eyed beauty has captured glory in Beijing As stunning as Hepburn, inspiring as Luther King As fearless as Boudicca and bold as Godiva Leaves startled white faces on every other rider A lion heart golden girl, our own lady of steel Victorious Vicky the warrior of the wheel Valiant athletes competing could never prevent Our own Vicky from winning her Olympic event By Ammi. Victoria Pendleton's number one fan.
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There once was a woman named Fred,
What a stupid name for a woman.
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This poem is called Religion.
I slapped Jesus in his stupid face and when he turned to cry I kicked his bum. |
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I’m sure that I will always be
A lonely number like root three The three is all that’s good and right, Why must my three keep out of sight Beneath the vicious square root sign, I wish instead I were a nine For nine could thwart this evil trick, with just some quick arithmetic I know I’ll never see the sun, as 1.7321 Such is my reality, a sad irrationality When hark! What is this I see, Another square root of a three As quietly co-waltzing by, Together now we multiply To form a number we prefer, Rejoicing as an integer We break free from our mortal bonds With the wave of magic wands Our square root signs become unglued Your love for me has been renewed -Kumar Patel
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For Rememberance Day 2012
Mesopotamia Rudyard Kipling 1917 They shall not return to us, the resolute, the young, The eager and whole-hearted whom we gave: But the men who left them thriftily to die in their own dung, Shall they come with years and honour to the grave? They shall not return to us; the strong men coldly slain In sight of help denied from day to day: But the men who edged their agonies and chid them in their pain, Are they too strong and wise to put away? Our dead shall not return to us while Day and Night divide– Never while the bars of sunset hold. But the idle-minded overlings who quibbled while they died, Shall they thrust for high employments as of old? Shall we only threaten and be angry for an hour: When the storm is ended shall we find How softly but how swiftly they have sidled back to power By the favour and contrivance of their kind? Even while they soothe us, while they promise large amends, Even while they make a show of fear, Do they call upon their debtors, and take counsel with their friends, To conform and re-establish each career? Their lives cannot repay us–their death could not undo– The shame that they have laid upon our race. But the slothfulness that wasted and the arrogance that slew, Shell we leave it unabated in its place?
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Quand il pleut, il pleut
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..one of my favouritesThe Unknown Soldier A few questions I have pondered If you have the time to spare We can muse on them together If lost secrets you will share May I ask if you were eager? Or reluctance did you show Too afraid to look behind you Or with yearning did you go? Did you leave a weeping mother? Heartbroken in her sorrow Or a promise from a sweetheart Of her love for each tomorrow Were your dreams full of achievements? Of the riches to be made Or downtrodden with misfortunes Left discouraged and dismayed Did you keep on looking forward? Marching proud towards your grave Or turn back to all who loved you And their melancholy wave Was your heart filled with foreboding? As the gunshot roared around Were your mother’s arms around you? As your body met with ground With names crouched beneath the trenches From the enemy concealed Lost within the bloody battle They shall never be revealed As you rest below the shadows With those who knew your story We’ll illuminate your darkness And celebrate your glory
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my emotions know no bounds
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Quand il pleut, il pleut
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emu....
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I Love Niamh’s Brick
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Connoisseur Of Clouds
As one life begins its path one journey comes to an end, too abrupt and sudden for moments passing, the candles barely have time to flicker. From boy, to musician and now connoisseur of clouds, the water wept comes from saddened smiles, of those memories that are summoned at this time. Some say too soon, others know it was the moment, all agree that the heart will miss so deeply as they were touched by the harmony scattered on our paths.
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Quand il pleut, il pleut
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When the sun is at its brightest but outside the skies are grey
When the words have choked inside you for there’s nothing left to say When fear is armed and at the front line preparing to advance When your chosen song is playing but your feet refuse to dance When the orchestra is playing but comes crushing through your ears When the world around is waltzing but you’re crippled in your fear When life’s beggar stretches out his hand, there’s nothing left to give When death grows more intriguing than the prison where you live When you’re looking for tomorrow but it’s nowhere to be found When you’re stuck within this moment and your arms and legs are bound When you bathe in pools of tears and they incinerate your skin When this game of life you’re playing is the one you’ll never win When you’re seeking words of promise in the solace of the song but the symphony won’t reach you on the tower you sit upon When the prisoner inside you pleads for mercy to be shown but the pleadings are unheeded as his flesh falls from the bone When the wilderness consumes you and you lay your head to rest And you sink into the wasteland as you terminate your quest When the hostess of depression hands an invite to her lair And your helpless desolation makes her certain to ensnare
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I Love Niamh’s Brick
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Ariel just reminded me of the tribal poem. Figured I should post it in here.
Lanakila
We are the warriors of the tribe that will take you down, like sharks in the ocean we will rule the waters; like the eagle in the air we will own the skies. Like the snakes on the land we will belong to the earth and like the dragons of our ancestors we will breathe with fire, We fight our victory to the island, we are Lanakila.
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Quand il pleut, il pleut
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for those who've fallen
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me and friend wrote this about 15 years ago when we worked together in a daytime restaurant called deli france we called it a rap but it like a poem. its about the food and the staff and has only recently been found we thought we,d lost it.
the delifrance staff rap come on in, walk this way, smoking upstairs, dont delay. Weve no scones or teacakes too, but if you want a baguette were the people for you. We can serve you coffee, we can serve you tea, grand cappacinos alright by me. Pepperoni pizzas nice and hot, baked on the premises hit the spot. Have a hot chocolate, cream and flake, treat yourself and have a cake. Weve peach tarts, strawberry too, cinnamon whirls too good to be true. Soup and a roll nice and tasty, if you dont want that try a spinach pastry. Our baker Denise aims to please, if you like her food then give her a squeeze. Anna, a boss nice and mummsy, she loves Nick even thought hes clumsy. Traceys obssessed with getting thinner we cant persuade her to eat any dinner. Carole she giggles all dy long, with her smile you cant go wrong. Julie,s the actress, lovely soul, she,s @ home in any role. Trish she wears a nice bright cardie she makes us laugh like Laurel and Hardy. Rachel is a nice young lass, she will serve you through till last. Little Lisa nice and polite, then theres kevin gives us a fright, he says hes the best worker in the place? Maybe he means in outer space! Louise is extra fast, order from her and its there in a blast. Weve got Holly, shes just so jolly thats shes off her trolley. Adele is little and very sweet, unless shes stressed now theres a treat. Then theres Kate and Emma too, theyre happy to serve you through and through. Look to the East, look to the West, by anyones standards Delifrance is the best! |
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.....I love that Mizzy..I was trying to kind of get the rhythm of the rap in my head..did you ever perform it for the customers..?..I've got to do a rap for Red Nose Day infront of millions of children..it's not too bad though because children are kind of easy to enertain and think most things are funny....your work colleagues at Deli France all sound like a great bunch of people...it must have been good times...
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