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09-02-2009, 09:08 PM
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[spoil]In an unexpected twist to Tibbenders, Sam!, Shaun and Billy will be involved in one of the first HUGE storylines to tibbenders. More details on the storyline will be released soon, but one thin is for sure, Life will never be the same for one of them
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09-02-2009, 09:49 PM
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09-02-2009, 09:58 PM
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10-02-2009, 01:42 AM
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Its good, Could be much better with me
 Also i like the firewire christina bit, does he get more than a kiss then or what?? |
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10-02-2009, 01:46 AM
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Will this be made into a youtube thingy?... If not then why not?.. If why not coz of why not then why not of the why not to the why not???
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10-02-2009, 01:52 AM
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 Lovley Lewis.. i have a request. Scince Ben is so desperate to be in tibbenders why dont you give him and Andy a gay love affair... you know it'd be great 
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10-02-2009, 01:56 AM
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No lewis! never, i want to have a sean slater the village nutter type roll!! lol andy can steal firewire from christina and she can go all depressive until he comes back to her
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10-02-2009, 01:57 AM
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10-02-2009, 02:05 AM
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Nah christina you have to stay in it i want to see the romance blossom.
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10-02-2009, 02:16 AM
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Ben can own a gym and wear tight shorts and has a tash... And is a huge dale n stu fan (bb9) and wants to meet them to give them his full Membership.... for his gym.
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10-02-2009, 02:16 AM
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LOL ahaa
firewire we need the kis of life over here!!! |
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10-02-2009, 02:17 AM
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what the **** lol. |
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10-02-2009, 02:18 AM
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10-02-2009, 04:27 PM
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Remember, tonight at 7pm!
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10-02-2009, 04:48 PM
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OMG. I love that line -
"Don't tell me your pregnant too!" It's really good Lewis. Darrenn i'm hearing a italian accent lmao. |
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10-02-2009, 04:58 PM
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I think you are in Tonights Episode! x |
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10-02-2009, 05:48 PM
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YAY I'm from Liverpool
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10-02-2009, 06:20 PM
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After all of the warm comments i got yesterday, i have decided to post episode 4 an hour early. Please give your feedback and ENJOY!
Firewires House Firewire and Christina are sat on the sofa, he has his arm around her and she is crying into his chest Christina: Where did it all go wrong! Me and dad, we were best friends once upon a time! He loved me, like i loved him Firewire: Look hun, he is just angry and in pain. I am sure he will get over it soon? Christina: When will Soon come? He has been like this for the past few months, ever since Mum died! He used to call me his daughter, now he tells everyone i am his step-daughter Firewire: But you are... Christina: I know i am! But i still cannot help it! As much as i want to be his daughter, i am not! I hate myslef, my life and everybody! Firewire: Don't say that! Christina: Like Dad said, i am no use to anyone around here Firewire: Don't be stupid, you are nice and pretty and you are the kindest person i have ever met.. Happy? Christina sits up and Kisses Him, he pushes her away. Christina stands up, and runs out into the square. She lies down on the bench, sobbing. She closes her eyes Annie and BigSisters house It is morning and Darenn is lying on the sofa reading the "Womans own" magazine, Annie walks in Darenn: Oh, good morning dear, nice sleep? Annie: Yes thanks, how about you? I know the sofa is a bit hard Darenn: Oh lovely thankyou dear. Where is your mother? BigSister walks in BigSister: I'm here. Good morning, is everyone okay? Darenn: Yes thankyou, you know dear, you have the prettiest eyes i have ever seen! BigSister: Oh, why thankyou! Annie, i need to have a word, in the Kitchen. Annie: Oh, okay? Ninastars house Ninastar wakes up, Fom still hasn't come back. She picks up her phone and tries ringing him again. It just goes straight to answer phone NinaStar: Hmmm Billy, Princess and Shauns house Billy is the son of Princess and Shaun. Billy is 22, and has his way with the ladies. Shaun is 45, and likes a drink now and again in the vic. He owns the bookies, and likes a gamble. Princess is 42 years old and works at the queen vic. All three of them are sitting around the table eating breakfast. They are discussing the prospect of Billy renting out a flat of his own Shaun: Well, you better start thinking about it soon son, before me and your mum start to get wrinkly, we have lives too you know Billy: I know, but i cannot afford anywh... Princess: Don't give me any of that rubbish Billy, You are 22 and already earning a fortune doing all of your investing in that new supermarket Billy: Yeah, well there is such a thing as saving you know Princess: Yes and Me and your father want to sell up here and go on our romantic holiday to Venice for a month! Don't we dear Shaun  Sarcastically) Whatever you want my dearPrincess lets off a huge grin as Shaun rolls his eyes Annie and BigSisters house Annie and BigSister are in the kitchen Annie: What! BigSister: What, i was only trying to help! Annie: So you let him stay for another week in MY Room! No Way! BigSister: What, it is only a week! The poor man cannot get home! Annie: Isn't that against the law? I am only 19, and i am going to share my room with a 35 year old bloke BigSister: He is Gay dear, it is not like he is going to try and make a move. Unless he likes both sexes, what do they call those people? Mixed or something? Annie: Bi-sexual Mum! And anyway, who knows what he is! He might be a phsyco for all you know! BigSister: Don't be stupid! He is lovely! Annie: Agghrr! Annie walks out of the kitchen and up to her room The square Christina wakes up. She is lying on the bench still. She gets up and walks back over to the vic, she walks inside, and locks all of the doors. She walks behind the bar and pours a glass of Vodka, which she downs. She starts to cry hysterically Back in the square Ninastar comes out of her house. Callum is getting out of his cab, he spots Ninastar Callum: NinaStar, how are you dear? Ninastar: Well, not good actually. Fom did not come back last night. I am really worried Callum: What do you mean? I drove Fom to the airport last night, said he was getting away from here, i just thought it was a joke NinaStar: The airport? Supernoodles house The phone rings. Supernoodles picks it up. It is Fom Fom: Get out of there now.. It is you i want! Supernoodles: What? Fom: Come down to the airport, i will be waiting! If you are not there by 2 o clock, i will get on the plane alone, and me and you will be over. But if you want to spend the rest of your life with me, then come to the airport by 2, Understood? Supernoodles:What do you mean. I don't underst... Fom: I Love you Fom hangs up Supernoodles: Fom.. FOM! Supernoodles looks at the clock, it is half past 11. She opens the kitchen draw, and pulls out a passport ___________________________ So there you go! Come join me on Thursday at 7pm for episode 5! To keep you going you can have a few snippets from Thursdays episode! [spoil]Christina: Why don't you get your Stupid little face and hit it against a brick wall[/spoil] [spoil]Sam: Well, if he slept round BigSisters house last night, No wonder he has turned gay[/spoil] |
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10-02-2009, 06:40 PM
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That was good. I like the spoilers and my character haha
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