[Lewis.]

Loved that episdoe!

[Ninastar]

Originally posted by Lewis
Loved that episdoe!

[LemonJam]

ROFL @ Kathreya opening my bar!

Mark is SO the best character in there.

[lily.]

Originally posted by Mrluvaluva
Lili is dead. I was quite enjoying being in a love triangle.....

You dirty, rotten, cheating baaaaaastard!




(haha.. at least you were cheating on me with someone I actually like.. :P)

[Shaun]

It seems I have a taste for death now. But you can be sure that these will be the last for a while

TiBBOaks - Episode 6
Opening Sequence:

"Strange and Beautiful" by Aqualung players over the scenes. The first scene is of Fom's warehouse. He has put what appears to be a body wrapped up in a carpet into the back of one of his vans, and he drives off. It is still the same evening from the murder. The next scene is at Mrluvaluva's. He looks at a clock and is sat at a dining table, the food going cold. We then see the sky outside, where the moon is full. The time fast forwards until the sun rises, and it's a clear-sky day. We are still outside, and the camera falls upon a family arguing outside the bakery.

Scene One - the bakery. A man is shouting at his two children to hurry up to school.
Iceman: Will you hurry up! It's already 8:30!
Loukas: Can I have Ł5?
Iceman: For what?
Loukas: Uhh...lunch, bus fare.
Remy: Yeah, uhh, I need money for the field trip on Friday.
Iceman: Fine, fine. Here.
He hands them the money and they run off to the bus stop. A woman steps outside from the bakery and turns an open sign on the door.
Ash: Have a nice day, honey.
She kisses Iceman and heads off to her car.

Scene Two - Nickyy is knocking on Mrluvaluva's door. He opens, looking fraught with worry and as if he hasn't slept. He lets her in.
Nickyy: I hope you don't mind me saying, but you look awful!
Mrluvaluva: It's lili. I haven't seen her since yesterday.
Nickyy: Oh! Have you phoned her?
Mrluvaluva: Of course I have!
Nickyy: Alright...I was just asking.
Mrluvaluva: Sorry, I'm just...really worried.
Nickyy hugs him and we see him smiling.

Scene Three - Fom arrives back from his dirty work and, as it is Sunday, is at the front door to his house. A girl stands behind him and she shouts.
Gemmer-x: Hey!
Fom: What?
Gemmer-x: Look, I know about yesterday.
Fom: You do?
He looks worried.
Gemmer-x: Yeah...I'm really sorry she turned you down like that, but I don't think she's ready.
Fom: I don't think this is any of your business.
Gemmer-x: No I know, it's just-
He goes inside and slams the door.

Scene Four - Muse's house. Hugo has invited MarkSpears over with Conzors. They are playing video games and eating pizza.
Hugo: Oh wait, I'll go and get some BBQ sauce.
MarkSpears: Get us a drink too.
Conzors: Please.
Hugo goes to the kitchen. MarkSpears is playing some form of fighting game with Conzors when he feels a hand on his knee.
MarkSpears: What are you doing?
Conzors suddenly leans in and tries to kiss him. MarkSpears pulls back in disgust.
MarkSpears: What the hell!
Conzors: Oh ****...I'm sorry. Please don't tell anyone!
MarkSpears: Are you gay?
Conzors: No! **** off!
MarkSpears looks at him suspiciously.

Scene Five - an unknown bedroom. We see Ross and Lauren in bed, cuddling, when a room-mate walks in on them. They pull the covers up to hide their half-nakedness.
Christina: Oh!
Lauren: You?
Christina: Yeah, I'm Ross' flatmate...
Lauren: Why didn't you say!?
Ross: I didn't know you knew each other...
Lauren: She slept with Sam!...
Christina: What a small world.
She walks out and shuts the door after grabbing a textbook on Ross' desk. She smiles to herself and picks up her phone.
Christina: Guess what I just saw!

Scene Six - Annie's dormitory. She is in the living area with Mark, working on some coursework. Princess puts down the phone and is open-mouthed in shock.
Annie: What?
Princess: Oh...nothing.
Mark: Don't look like nothing!
Princess: I'll tell you later!
Annie: Why him? Why not me?
Princess: Oh crap...
She runs out the door. Annie shouts after her.

Scene Seven - Hugo returns from the kitchen with a jug of lemonade and some bottles of sauces. He sees a bit of tension in the room.
Hugo: Here...
MarkSpears: Thanks. Uhh, I have to go actually.
Hugo: But you've only been here 15 minutes?
MarkSpears: I know, it's my mum, she's being really shitty with me. I'm sorry. I'll see you in school tomorrow.
He walks out and Conzors looks worried.

Scene Eight - GhettoSuperstar is styling his hair in a mirror at Fom's house. Fom walks in, looking terrible.
GhettoSuperstar: You didn't come home last night. Been up to some business I assume?
Fom: Shut up.
GhettoSuperstar: Cranky... anyway, Gemmer-x came round earlier, said she wanted to talk?
Fom: I just bumped into her.
GhettoSuperstar: What was it about?
Fom: Never mind...
GhettoSuperstar: Look, I know what happened with Sia is really bad and all, but you need to get back out there. Plenty more fish in the sea and all that.
Fom: Going out every night won't get me a wife.
GhettoSuperstar: No, but it'll get you laid.
Fom: It's a Sunday!
GhettoSuperstar: Whatevs. I'm going round Brona's for a few pre-dancing drinks.
He walks out, and past the bins, where Gemmer-x is hiding. She runs inside before the door has time to shut.

Scene Nine - Ross has walked Lauren to the entrance of her housing building. He kisses her goodbye when someone walks out and right up to Lauren and slaps her.
Annie: You're seeing HIM?
Lauren: I can see who I want!
Annie: Even after what he did to me!
Lauren: That's got nothing to do with us now.
Ross: Look, Annie...
Annie: Don't talk to me! I don't want to talk to either of you right now! I'm going out.
She storms off, leaving the couple to look at each other with unease.

Scene Ten - it is now early evening, and Brona is drinking wine with GhettoSuperstar and Christina. Annie walks in and sighs with melodrama.
Brona: Someone could do with a spritzer.
Annie: Please.
Christina: What's up?
Annie: Lauren's been seeing Ross behind my back.
Christina: Oh...
GhettoSuperstar: He gets around a bit. You two and now Lauren.
Annie: Don't remind me.
Christina: Nor me.
Brona: You've both been out with him?
Christina: Not exactly...
Annie: He cheated on me with her.
Christina looks down awkwardly at her glass.
Brona: If I didn't know you both I'd be revelling in the drama!
GhettoSuperstar: I need a bit less drama right now.
Brona: I heard about Sia...how's Fom taken it?
Christina: Yeah, he must feel awful.
GhettoSuperstar: He does. He's not talking much at the moment, and was out all last night.
A taxi blows its horn outside.
Annie: Speaking of which, I think we'd better be off too!
They all make final adjustments to their appearances in the mirror before walking out the door.

Scene Eleven - a bus pulls to a stop in the town and Loukas steps off. He is home much later than usual, and is wearing a dark hoodie. He walks down an alleyway near the stop, and gives a handful of money notes to another man wearing a hoodie.
Loukas: Thanks.
He is handed a small bag of pills and walks off.

Scene Twelve - Fom has just stepped out of the shower and walks into the lounge, where he finds Gemmer-x sat down. He quickly puts on some clothes.
Fom: What the hell!
Gemmer-x: You didn't let me finish.
Fom: You've been waiting since I saw you earlier?
Gemmer-x: Yeah...look. I know Sia doesn't want you right now. But I do.
Fom: Excuse me?
Gemmer-x: She doesn't appreciate you like I do.
Fom: Stop it!
She is now on her feet and keeps trying to touch him. He retreats, shouting at her, until his hand falls upon a stone sculpture. He grabs it, and swings it without thinking. It hits her square in the temple, and she falls to the floor. He recoils in horror, dropping the now blood-stained sculpture. He hears a knock at the door.

Scene Thirteen - outside his house, Ben is stood. He shouts through the letterbox.
Ben: Fom? GhettoSuperstar? Have you seen Brona?
Fom opens the door slowly and lets Ben in. He suddenly realises this mistake and pushes Ben back out.
Ben: What the-? Is she in there? Oh my god, don't tell me you two are-
Fom: Just go!
Ben: No! Let me in!
He is considerably stronger than Fom and pushes the door down. He runs past Fom into the living area, and sees the body on the floor. He shouts, aghast, and Fom is at the doorway. He is holding a knife.

Closing sequence - the piano chords from Aqualung's "Good Times Gonna Come" play throughout. We see Loukas walking through some dark alleyways, staggering as he does. He slumps against a brick wall and we see his eyes are glazed over. We then cut to looking through Fom's window. Fom drops a knife as he looks down at what he has done. He rushes over to the window and folds the blinds. We then cut to someone stood outside the house, and she is devastated at what she has seen. She runs away, crying. She reaches the park gates and leans against some iron bars. We see her face. It is Sia.

[30stone]

Ohh great episode.

Though, i think id been done in, i was on "fom's List" i guess.

lol

[Shaun]

I'm afraid you chose the wrong time to knock on the door and because you thought Brona was cheating on you with Fom, he killed you

Will Fom get away with murder? Stay tuned...

[Ninastar]

Omg! That was amazing!! xxxxxx

[30stone]

Aw bugger.

I got theee knife.

[DamonJ]

WHERE WUZ I?!

[Mrluvaluva]

Fom is dead meat.

[Ross]

Fom oh my god.

I love episode 5 it's my favourite.

I love Lauren

I love the characters of Mark, Muse and DamonJ/MarkSpears/Hugo.
This is a good read; I love it.

[lily.]

Originally posted by Robin-Van-Perfect
Aw bugger.

I got theee knife.

haha.. I got theeee gun...

We're dead baybee! lol

[lily.]

Shaun, you need to introduce Jessica Fletcher now so she can solve the crimes.. haha

[30stone]

Originally posted by lili

haha.. I got theeee gun...

We're dead baybee! lol

Love in the afterlife.

[Loukas]

Oooo. I like it. . TiBBOaks is amazing.

[Hugo]

Love it!

LMFAO at MarkSpears and Conor!

[GhettoSuperstar]

Me, Brona, Christina and Annie on a night out! LAV IT! I'm hooked!

[lily.]

Originally posted by Robin-Van-Perfect

Love in the afterlife.

We should come back to haunt all the bad 'uns who are still alive. lol

[Shaun]

TiBBOaks exclusive - Someone wreaks their revenge on Fom soon, with fatal consequences. But who?

[Shaun]

TiBBOaks - Episode 7

Opening Sequence
"Bling (Confessions of a King)" by the Killers is playing. It is the same evening from the grisly murders of Ben (Robin-Van-Perfect) and Gemmer-x by Fom. Sia has witnessed the murder of Ben, and seen Gemma, her sister's body. We see her sat on a bench in the park, crying. She stops, and wipes her nose and tears. She sees a bus pull to a stop, and runs to jump on board. As the doors close, we shift scenes to Fom. He has put the two bodies into a car boot, and slams the door shut, in doing so we shift scene to Mrluvaluva leaving his house. He walks past a "Missing" poster for his wife, in the direction of the Lemon Emporium.

Scene One.

The night is windy yet relatively cool. Mrluvaluva comes to the doors of the Emporium and opens the door with his key. He walks in, the surroundings dark and eerie. He shudders now, feeling colder than outside.
Mrluvaluva: I need to take my mind off of things.
He pauses and chuckles to himself, at the thought he's going mad. He suddenly stops and his face regains composure, as he kneels down to pick up a folder. Inside, he finds a picture of a middle-aged man. He frowns, and looks up to see the doors of Fom's office open. He goes inside and looks around, worried he might come across someone. He sees the filing cabinet ajar, as if activity inside has been recent. He goes to the cabinet and finds the files inside scattered, and assumes someone must have grabbed the one in his hands in a hurry. He frowns again.

Scene Two.

The bus pulls to a stop in the town's busy nightclub district. Sia walks past the bouncer into "Foxy's", a disco-themed bar popular with the local university students. Inside, she finds Annie.
Sia: Hey, kinda urgent. Have you seen GhettoSuperstar?
Annie: Aren't you our librarian? Come and have a drink! I love Manhattans!
Sia: No, I'm in a hurry.
Annie: Spoilsport. Anyway, he's over there.
She points in his direction, before walking over to Christina. Sia marches up to him and grabs him.
Sia: We need to talk.

Scene Three.

Conzors is sat in his bedroom on an instant messaging site. A new window pops up from a username proclaiming "Mark (L)MsSpears."
MarkSpears: What the hell happened earlier?
Conzors: I don't want to talk about it.
MarkSpears: Well, I do. You tried to kiss me. I deserve an explanation.
Conzors: I'm sorry, I don't know what I was thinking.
MarkSpears: I don't care if you're gay, I just don't want you making moves on me.
Conzors: I'M NOT GAY!
MarkSpears: What you did was pretty gay.
Conzors: Piss off!
He slams his laptop shut and throws a book against the wall.

Scene Four.

Outside the nightclub, Sia is hyperventilating as GhettoSuperstar grabs her and asks what she wants.
Sia: It's...your brother. He's...he's...oh my god!
GhettoSuperstar: Suddenly you care about him? After how you ditched him?
Sia: Oh my god...is it my fault?
GhettoSuperstar: Is what your fault?
Sia: They're dead! Dead! My sister! Oh ****...oh no!
She collapses against GhettoSuperstar's chest and sobs loudly. Brona comes out to find where GhettoSuperstar [who I shall henceforth call Doug because I hate typing that out] has got to.
Brona: Come on, they're playing Bee Gees!
Doug: Gemma? She's dead? How? What's my brother got to do with it?
Sia: HE KILLED HER. He had a knife! And blood! Oh the blood...it's everywhere...she's gone! Oh god she's gone! And another man! He's killed two people!
Brona: WHAT?
Doug: That's crazy talk, you're making no sense.
Sia: I can show you! I saw them! He stabbed that man when he found my sister...
Still crying, Sia hails a taxi and screams at Doug to follow. Brona also climbs in.

Scene Five.

At a detached house out of town, Fom knocks on a door. An older man answers, and he hugs Fom.
Tom: Son.

Scene Six.

At Fom's house, Sia shoves money into the driver's hand and runs up to the door.
Sia: Come on!
Doug: Look, this can't be happening.
Brona: I don't want to see this!
Doug unlocks the door and they go in. Sia runs to the living room and the other two follow. They see no bodies.
Doug: Well?
Sia: They were here! She was here, and he was stood there...
She rushes over to the kitchen, looking for the knife. She finds it, but it has been washed.
Brona: There's nothing here...this is ridiculous.
Sia: WHY WOULD I LIE!
Doug: I don't know, but...
Brona: Oh my-
She picks up a sculpture and finds blood stains on the base. She drops it in horror.
Sia: See! Blood!
Doug: That could mean anything.

Scene Seven.

At Tom's house, Fom has explained everything to his father.
Tom: I've been in many a messy situation myself, but this takes the biscuit.
Fom: I couldn't help myself...I just lost it.
Tom: And you killed Linda too?
Fom: Yes. She found your picture.
Tom: Good. She knew too much anyway. Listen, leave the...work to me. I'll get rid of them.
Fom: How?
Tom: I don't want to gross you out with details. You need to sleep, and to get home and act normal. 3 disappearances will have the cops on high alert, and you need to appear normal.
Fom: You're right...dad? Thanks. I'd be lost without you.
Tom: I know. Take care, son.
They hug, and Fom drives off home.

Scene Eight.

Fom's house again, and Sia, Brona and Doug hear a knock on the door. Sia screams, and Doug shushes her. They hear a voice.
Mrluvaluva: It's me. I found a disturbance at the factory.
Sia: Let him in!
Doug goes to the door cautiously and lets him inside.
Mrluvaluva: Thanks. Look, I found your brother's office in a bit of a mess. Someone had been rummaging through his files, and I found this one on the floor. I guess they left it in a rush.
He hands the file to Doug, who looks at the picture and does a double take.
Doug: ...that's my father.

Scene Nine.

At Foxy's, Christina and Annie notice they have been abandoned. They stand in a taxi rank, a little tipsy but able to stand unaided.
Christina: So, what you going to do about Ross and Lauren?
Annie: I dunno...they deserve each other.
Christina: You guys did split up 3 weeks ago.
Annie: No thanks to you.
Christina: I know...did you love him?
Annie: What?
Christina: You know. How serious was it?
Annie: Well I guess it was never going to last forever...
Christina: But what's more important? Your friendship with Lauren, or the undying hatred over an ex?
Annie ponders silently, as they climb into a taxi.

Scene Ten.

We return to Fom's house, where Sia and Brona stare at Doug.
Mrluvaluva: They buried your dad just two days ago...
Doug: No, that wasn't my dad.
Brona: What?
Sia: I'm sorry, but somebody's DIED here!
Mrluvaluva: What?
She shows him the sculpture, and he shudders.
Mrluvaluva: Who? When?!
Brona: She thinks Fom killed her sister and some other bloke.

Scene Eleven

The camera briefly swaps to a scene outside the house, where Fom has arrived home. He sees the front door ajar and decides to look inside the window first. He sees four people stood there who he knows, one of them Sia. His heart sinks and he loses his composure. He suddenly overhears her loudly sobbing.
Sia: He killed her! My sister is dead! And I saw him kill someone else!

Scene Twelve

We are inside again, and Mrluvaluva is consoling Sia.
Mrluvaluva: Are you sure you saw this?
Sia: YES.
Doug: Something weird's going on. Brona, I'll phone Ben and get him to pick you up.
Brona: Thanks love.
He dials a number and it rings. He hears the phone he's dialling, ringing from the kitchen. He goes there and finds Ben's phone in a drawer, along with another phone and some car keys.
Doug: What the f-
Mrluvaluva: I know those keys! They're Lili's!
Brona: What is Ben's phone doing here? Oh god I don't like this one bit.
Fom: And so you shouldn't.
They all jump and turn to see Fom stood at the door. He is holding a gun and pointing it towards their direction.

Scene Thirteen

Tom's garden. He has just filled in a large pit with soil, and walks into his house. He stops at a photograph of lili, and sighs.

Scene Fourteen

Fom's house. Brona is hugging Doug in fear, as Sia and Mrluvaluva step forward.
Fom: Not another step.
Sia: Confess it! Tell us!
Mrluvaluva: Why are lili's keys here?
Brona: And Ben's phone?
Fom: Shut up. All of you. Into the basement, now.
He pulls up a trap-door and forces them, at gunpoint, to walk down. It is dark and the walls are cold stone. A stack of shelves contain books and old trophies and other nostalgic memorabilia. Fom shuts the door behind him as he switches on a dim lightbulb.
Fom: Now, a time for explanation.
Sia cries into Mrluvaluva's shoulders silently, as Brona trembles. Doug is silent, awestruck.
Fom: Two days ago, I proposed to my girlfriend. The timing was perfect and the setting was picturesque. The sun shone brightly as I poured my heart out to the girl I thought loved me. I was wrong.
Sia: This is not MY fault!
Fom: I SAID SHUT UP.
He fires the gun at the ceiling and Brona screams and bursts into tears.
Fom: That night, I arrived at my office, drunk. I found someone had let themselves in, and I walked to my office. There, I saw lili.
Mrluvaluva: No...please don't...
Fom: She'd suspected something for a while now, but I never thought she'd have the nerve to be so devious about it. So I killed her.
Mrluvaluva falls to his knees and Doug lets out a cry.
Sia: How can you say this so calmly? You've killed 3 people now!
He fires at the ceiling again.
Fom: Interrupt me again and the next bullet won't be in stone, it'll be in brain tissue. Anyway, she was a risk to Dad's safety.
Doug: She knew?
Brona: Knew what?
Fom: My Dad didn't die - he faked his own death in order to avoid a life sentence. Quite ironic if you think about it.
Mrluvaluva: Where does...lili come into it?
Fom: She was having an affair with him.
Doug: What? He said he loved mum!
Fom: You can't trust family, Doug. You know that by now. Anyway, today, Gemma comes round and breaks into my house, telling me she loves me.
Sia: Excuse me?
Fom: She attacked me, and I grabbed something and lashed out in self-defense.
Sia: Self-defence! Ha! You'd really stoop that low?
Fom: I'm telling the truth.
Doug: Who's the other man?
Fom: Ah...just as Gemma hit the floor, I heard a knock. He asked me where Brona was an-
Brona: NO!
She lunges at him just as Doug hits the light-switch. The room is suddenly pitch black and we hear a struggle and a gunshot.

TO BE CONTINUED

[30stone]

Wow Great episode

Brona Defending My Honor

[Harry!]

Good episode, Love MarkSpears accusing Conzors of being gay lol.

[GhettoSuperstar]

Favourite episode so far

[xDramatick]

Where did I go?

LMFAO @ Markspears & Conzors.
&&Fom&Tom is so confusing =|