[Ryan.]

I would really appreciate your non trollingy thoughts on this new logo for me? Is it good or do I need to go straight back to the drawing board?

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[Ryan.]

Btw the circular bit is the actual logo

[Josy]

The inside curves on the logo itself look quite untidy did you use the pen tool in AI to do it? and I would possibly try a gradient instead of the solid black background, depending on wether its for web or print obviously.

[Josy]

Also according to the text underneath it stands for toilet fodder? you could try and incorporate a toilet bowl into the logo design

[King Gizzard]

toilet fodder...should be in brown...whey

[Josy]

[Kizzy]

The first one looks like a worm thats swallowed two tic tacs...
The second is good

[Josy]

Originally Posted by kizzy

The first one looks like a worm thats swallowed two tic tacs...
The second is good

I only see one logo?

[Ryan.]

Originally Posted by Josy

Also according to the text underneath it stands for toilet fodder? you could try and incorporate a toilet bowl into the logo design

Thanks Josy! I see what you mean about the untidy lines, but it shouldn't be so bad as the logo is designed to be shown really small :P I will take what you said about the black background into account too

It does incorporate a toilet the T and F form a U-Bend. Subtle eh?

[Kizzy]

Originally Posted by Josy

I only see one logo?

Aah...the second is a BB thingy ...oops

[Josy]

Originally Posted by Ryan.

Thanks Josy! I see what you mean about the untidy lines, but it shouldn't be so bad as the logo is designed to be shown really small :P I will take what you said about the black background into account too

It does incorporate a toilet the T and F form a U-Bend. Subtle eh?

Well I actually thought of a pipe when I first looked at it never even clicked onto the ubend idea though

[Marc]

Originally Posted by Josy

The inside curves on the logo itself look quite untidy did you use the pen tool in AI to do it? and I would possibly try a gradient instead of the solid black background, depending on wether its for web or print obviously.

That exactly what I was going to say.

Literally words taken straight from my mouth

[Ryan.]

Thanks Marc