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Post TiBBandoned: EPISODE 2.2 IS UP!

-A few TiBBers find a creepy; abandoned Sub-forum. Can they get out?-

"Did you see that?" Shaun worringly said. Niall raised his eyebrow and asked: "See what?" "I'm sure I just saw flashing from under the floorboards." Shaun said. Niall laughed. "Dude, it's probably just your imagination. Come on, lets see what's happening in the Chat thread." As they tried to exit the Serious Debates sub-forum, Niall tripped. "AHH! F#%KING C#%$YBALLS!" As Niall looked at his freshly bruised leg, Shaun was staring at the floorboard Niall tripped on. "L-Look" Shaun whimpered. A hole looking down to a room with a lightbulb flickering inside. "WTF" they said together. They lightbulb in the room went out suddenly. Zee came in, scratching his legs furiously. "Guys, whats up?" Zee asked. Shaun and Niall scurried to put the floorboard back in its place, and ran off out the room. "Huh. Weird." Zee said, now scratching his private parts.
"We cannot tell anyone. yet." Niall said quickly. Shaun agreed.

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Shaun and Niall retrieved a Sledgehammer, and went into the room. They hit the floor until a generously sized hole was formed. Cuda strolled into the room. "Haven't been to the Serious debates bit in ages!" Cuda said. "Oh hi guys, What are you do.. WHAT THE **** ARE YOU DOING TO THE FLOOR?!" Cuda shouted. Niall and Shaun screamed in shock and stood up. "NOTHING!" They said. Cuda didn't believe them. He went up to the hole and looked down. Shaun and Niall took this opportunity to cover the evidence of what they were doing, And gave Cuda a strong push. Cuda reflexed and grabbed both of their t-shirts to not fall, but ended up taking them with him. "Ow!" "Argh!" "****e!" They all whimpered. They all looked about, but it was hopeless. It was too dark. "Hey! I've got my phone!" Cuda said. "I can use my torch app!" Cuda grabbed his phone out his pocket to discover it had been crushed on impact.

Ep2- Coming tommorow, with new characters, and more!

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Ep 2.1: Drunken Mistakes.

TiBB Off-Season Party
-SO WAKE ME UP WHEN IT'S ALL OVER, WHEN IM WISER AND IM OLDER,-
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"Can't they knock it off? I'm getting a banging headache" Shaun moaned. " Moaning isn't going to help us get out, is it?" Niall questioned. "The least we could do is explore the place." Shaun got up and tripped over something. He went head first into a solid object. Object clicked and suddenly light filled the room. The 3 covered their eyes. "At least we found the lights switch" Cuda said, putting his eyes in his hands.
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"this is a great party"' Scott said. Smithy ran to him, dropping his Grey Goose bottle, and bear hugged him. "Scott, I thought you were banned!"bannedbanned
Smithy suddenly woke up in the Serious Debates Sub-Forum. The party was still going strong at 6am. Dazed and confused, and also still slightly drunk, smithy wandered around and suddenly fell down the hole.

"Smithy?Smiiiithy?SMITHY!" "Whaat? I.I.Is that yoou Scottt?" Smithy slurred. "No, it's Shaun. You've pissed yourself". "Oh welll can u gimme a helpp Up plzzZ." Smithy slurred again. "You're bleeding also. badly." Niall said.

James was watching all this from the hole, with a blank, pale look on his face.

He ran to the moderators. "EMERGENCY MEETING. NOW."


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TiBBandoned- Episode 2.2: The Plan.

"They know." James Said. "Knooow whaaaat?" A drunken Marc uttered. "You know." James said, pointing down. A drunken Marc suddenly became a very sober one. He mimed the words "Abandoned Sub" to James, who then nodded his head. "Who's down there and how?" Josy asked. "Well I found this sledgehammer, they must of made a hole" James Said, while holding up the tool. "I saw Cuda, Shaun, Niall and Smithy. We need to cover this up, so no one ever finds out, And I've got a damn good idea how." The mods raised an eyebrow. "We cover the hole with stone, but before we do that, we put a really powerful hose in the abandoned subforum. We'll have to put a hose sized hole in the stone, obviously."

The mods carried a giant circular stone into the Serious Debates Sub-Forum. It had a small circle knocked out of it for the hose. They put the hose in and turned the tap on.


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