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01-01-2016, 10:02 AM | #1 | |||
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Devoted in secrets and lust, Elizabeth finds herself stuck in a relationship that is destined for divorce. As times moves on Elizabeths relationship with James turns dystopian, filled with secrets and lies, only Elizabeth can find out the truth.
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01-01-2016, 10:15 AM | #2 | |||
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Sneak preview (The opening) Elizabeth sips her drink as the sun blazes down on her face, scourging the scars of reality. Her lips firmly press against the cup, as the warm tea soaks into her system like the fire of the universe. Elizabeths hands press against the surface of the kitchen, the cold granite electrifies her veins. Footsteps tapper down the stairs, the feet pound against the floor, Elizabeths turns around as she embraces the face, his hair shines like the golden touch of a Greek God. Liz's face shrinks into a hole of the unknown, Jame's eyes open wide as he smiles at Elizabeth.
She compress her lips, he strokes his golden hair as he looks to the floor. She knows. Last edited by Will.; 01-01-2016 at 10:19 AM. |
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01-01-2016, 05:44 PM | #3 | |||
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how nice
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01-01-2016, 05:44 PM | #4 | |||
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like the boys
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I think Arista wants in
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01-01-2016, 05:45 PM | #5 | |||
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01-01-2016, 08:13 PM | #6 | |||
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I should have the first part up tommrow, I'm home alone in the middle of nowhere at my dads tommrow! Meant to rain all day so will be good to write
I have a really interesting plot twist idea, but it might be a bit cruel as the readers will be reading something that's a lie, but the truth is right in front of you. The reader will be reading something that's not what they think, but there are no lies, you just have to work it out. Last edited by Will.; 01-01-2016 at 08:14 PM. |
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