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28-09-2017, 09:34 AM | #1 | |||
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Zumi Zimi Zami
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Starring Joseph Mazzello as Tim Murphy Keira Knightley as Lex Murphy BD Wong as Dr Henry Wu Jeff Goldblum as Ian Malcolm James Franco as Andrew Ludlow, son of former ingen ceo Peter Ludlow, and current InGen marketing executive Emmy Rossum as Lolita Evans, Michelle's sister Ian Ziering as Robert Jones Dan Hedaya as game warden Joe Perez Brooke Hogan as Michelle Evans, Lolita's sister Rita Ora as Nina Thorpe, a investor with Nick Cannon as Alphonse Santiago and Daniel Radcliffe as Charlie Murphy/Hammond
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28-09-2017, 09:47 AM | #2 | |||
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Island Coast, Joe Perez and his boss Andrew Ludlow are inspecting the coast for any escaped dinosaur, but what they find worries them
Joe: so i don't see footprints Andrew: doesn't have to mean a thing Joe: oh my god Andrew: what, what's the matter ''one of the power lines is failing to give enough power'' Cruise Ship heading towards Isla Sorna, with some special guests on board Michelle: take a picture sis Lolita: ''takes picture'' feels so lovely going to this dinosaur Island with you Michelle: we're so not scared of a few little dino's Tim: hello and my name is Tim Murphy, i went to the Island Isla Nublar 24 years ago along with my sister Lex: yes and be careful at any time, these dinosaurs are smarter than us Michelle: thanks for the advice Lolita: whatever at Jurassic Park 5.0 HQ Andrew: tell this Nina bitch when she arrives, oh never mind Nina: hello mr ludlow Andrew: call me andrew, and welcome to jurassic park 5.0 Nina: so am i supposed to be excited Andrew: yes, we are now happy to announce our latest dinosaur Nina: and that is Andrew: the Gigantosaurus Rex Nina: a T Rex but then bigger Andrew: and more teeth Nina: sounds exciting, but we are a billion dollar company so we want this to be successful and not that our money is wasted Andrew: of course we are here to make money elevator doors opening Ian: Andrew you sound like your dad so much, and that's not a good thing Andrew: blah blah blah, Nina i want you to meet Ian Malcolm, he's our pessimist Nina: alright happy to see it from 2 perspectives i think Joe's lodge Joe: Alphonse, you cannot just play with power lines, if these dangerous creatures break out Alphonse: sorry i was trying a little upgrade to our fencing systems Joe: upgrades cost the first park almost our business, thanks to Nedry cruise ship arriving Robert: i am robert jones, ur tour for this wonderful day Michelle&Lolita: wow wow, what a beautiful Island Tim: can i go towards the HQ immediately i have business there Robert: yes Tim follow me end of part 1
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28-09-2017, 10:13 AM | #3 | |||
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28-09-2017, 10:35 AM | #4 | |||
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"Andrew: tell this Nina bitch when she arrives"
This casual sexism wont play well with the 18-24 key demographic |
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28-09-2017, 10:36 AM | #5 | |||
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there is more vulgar talk right now with the youth than this i think
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28-09-2017, 10:38 AM | #6 | |||
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I'm lolita rolling her eyes
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28-09-2017, 10:53 AM | #7 | |||
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Andrew preparing himself for the grand opening of the new dinosaur park
Andrew: 24 years ago, we at InGen wanted to create something never seen before, it didn't go as planned, my father wanted Jurassic Park: San Diego, where he lost his life in the san Diego incident, but our dreams have come true, with financial help from our partners and representative here Nina Thorpe, we can introduce dinosaurs to the world Nina: yes we at Global Tech support InGen's dream of building our future and bringing back dinosaurs into the world Tim: my grandfather was a visionary, John Hammond is the true genius behind this scheme of creating dinosaurs a unknown man approaches the stage Charlie: i'm also a grandson to John Hammond, he told me some of his dinosaur ideas, hybrids let's call them Nina: hybrids interesting Charlie: i can make your company from a billion dollar to a trillion dollar company Nina: ooh we have a deal security squad at the G-Rex paddock Joe: *calling with Andrew* i did tell ya, the power lines were going out Andrew: restore the power and investigate what caused the power to go out Joe: on it boss Security Member1: hey Joe, i've found something *G-Rex eating Security Members 2, 3, 4* Joe: crap, retreat everyone pull back Petrov-security member1: let's go to HQ Joe: all units we have a asset out of containment, this is not a drill, i repeat this is not a drill Andrew taking Nina to a secret location Andrew: here it is Nina, a baby G-Rex Nina: it's the adult's offspring and you captured it Andrew: yes we can't introduce the public to a dangerous adult g-rex first we need to show them the smaller infant dinosaurs Nina: ah safety first i like it Ian: Andrew, ur making the same mistakes as your dad Nina: guards escort Ian out of here, we need to stay optimistic and not pessimistic Ian: ur making a mistake Michelle: Ian, i believe you i heard about your experiences on the other Island and san Diego G-Rex approaching westgate tower, outer perimeter of the Island Petrov: no no no, get my machine gun Joe: got it *Petrov fires machine gun, missing the creature but destroying some fences instead* Joe: ffs aim a little better will ya Petrov: out of ammo Joe: no *G-Rex appears and eats Petrov* end of part 2
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28-09-2017, 10:59 AM | #8 | |||
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"Joe: ffs aim a little better will ya"
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28-09-2017, 12:52 PM | #9 | |||
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G-Rex is getting close to the location containing the infant G-Rex
Nina: don't make sounds *trying to make the infant g-rex quiet* Andrew: i am leaving through the backdoor, back to HQ Nina: ur leaving me Andrew: it's your company i care about, not you Nina: i must save my company, so this infant g rex is gonna save me Andrew: BYE *G-Rex storms in and finds it's infant* Nina: don't move, don't run, don't hide G-Rex isn't seeing the frightened Nina Nina: *her cellphone rings* no no no G-Rex roars Nina: wait wait wait, get this cellphone off *Nina trips and she is devoured by the G-Rex* back at HQ, Charlie, Tim, Andrew and Ian, Michelle and Lolita are there Lolita: i'm outta here Michelle: sis wait *Raptors appear and Lolita is devoured by one of them* Andrew: easy, easy *and in a instant Andrew locks himself away from the dino's leaving the others to fight for their lives* Ian: you coward Tim: *a raptor notices Tim* what are you looking at, *kicks at the raptor* Charlie: it's Joe i see him over there Ian: really Joe: hey guys i'm coming to save you all *G-Rex and a Raptor tear poor Joe to pieces* Charlie: oh no, Andrew let's talk Andrew: all i wanted was to get super rich with these dinosaurs Charlie: that was your dad's ambition as well Ian: now you're Peter Ludlow everyone gets evacuated, except Michelle, Tim and Ian who want to return the G-Rex and it's infant back to the wild forestal area of the Island Ian: we can lure the g-rex back using it's infant, it worked in san Diego, and it will work here i think Michelle: here we go Andrew: Charlie you hear me shoot the g-rex, that infant is my little goldmine, without it i'm ruined you hear me the infant must be kept alive *hearing the infants cries with Michelle and Ian* Andrew: Michelle this is none of your business and Ian i've expected this from you *Ian and Michelle are running away towards the evacuation ships without the infant* Andrew: where is my infant, i want my precious animal *g-rex cries* Andrew: ah there you are, my company has been saved thanks to you Andrew: come on already will ya G-Rex storms towards the gate, and roars towards Andrew Andrew: huh i thought you were being shot by my guards G-Rex cripples Andrew by breaking his leg Andrew: wait, all i wanted was my infant *Infant G-Rex is allowed to finish Andrew*
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28-09-2017, 01:39 PM | #10 | |||
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28-09-2017, 01:48 PM | #11 | |||
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oh I thought this was TiBB as the cast of Jurassic Park, Josy as the dinosaur who eats the guy sitting on the toilet.
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28-09-2017, 01:50 PM | #12 | |||
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no, my first novel on here
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28-09-2017, 03:08 PM | #13 | |||
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This Witch doesn't burn
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28-09-2017, 03:15 PM | #14 | |||
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Rita Ora
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28-09-2017, 03:47 PM | #15 | |||
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"Ian: we can lure the g-rex back using it's infant, it worked in san Diego, and it will work here i think"
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28-09-2017, 03:50 PM | #16 | |||
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28-09-2017, 03:50 PM | #17 | |||
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playing a good villain yep
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28-09-2017, 04:06 PM | #18 | |||
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Wheres my cameo?
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28-09-2017, 04:08 PM | #19 | |||
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you'll get a cameo in my next novel on here, got some more ideas for novels
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28-09-2017, 04:08 PM | #20 | |||
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wait I want in on it as well
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28-09-2017, 04:11 PM | #21 | |||
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alright, how about my next novel to be Star Trek themed
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28-09-2017, 04:14 PM | #22 | |||
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I want a slasher novel staring tibb members
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28-09-2017, 04:15 PM | #23 | |||
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Zumi Zimi Zami
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deal Jordan
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28-09-2017, 04:15 PM | #24 | |||
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28-09-2017, 04:22 PM | #25 | |||
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I want to be the quiet Christian neighbour with the tidy garden who loves photography. Often seen out driving late at night down near the harbour.
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