[Scarlett.]

Originally Posted by Ammi

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....hmmmm, they’re not expecting Roisin to fight until she’s back to full strength...?...but I have a feeling that she might come face to face with Treleva before her strength is restored...

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Indeed, and might she and Syl finally reunite?

[Scarlett.]

New chapter!

[Ammi]

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....oh, so the power of the crystals were able to be used to make Roisins’s armour...?...and shows walking unaided......I really think that she’s going to have to face that battle sooner than anyone would have hoped...

[Scarlett.]

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Indeed, she's ready for any eventuality now

[Ammi]

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...yeah, let’s hope it is ‘anything’ ...because Treleva and Keegan are heartless and merciless, I think...

[Scarlett.]

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Yep, and they've been very quiet recently

[Scarlett.]

New chapter!

[Ammi]

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...I’m feeling the tensions all building now, Scarlett...Roisin is obviously going to push herself, we always knew that ...but even before the battles begin, she’s weakened from her injuries still, plus she’s struggling to control the crystal powers with her anger bouts...Rychard is not someone who can be trusted at all to help and Amanda is just sinister and a constant threat, encircling them...and ughhhh, Trevela, just so heartless and Keegan is poisoned against her...we can feel everything building and I hope that it doesn’t lead to the end of Roisin or any of the friends...

[Scarlett.]

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Indeed, things are building up now, hopefully Roisin can contain the power building inside her.

[Scarlett.]

New chapter!

[Ammi]

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...wow, The Power of Dreams might even be able to control the Crystal’s powers....it’s a hugely creepy/scary power.....

[Scarlett.]

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Indeed, it's one of the vital Crystalla powers, which can influence reality itself

[Scarlett.]

New chapter!

[Ammi]

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...Roisin and Syl.....

...’...you didn’t remain ignorant and you took a stand against something you once stood for..’..I love how you make so many things with their world and our world so relatable, you know...and the ‘mutant fiends’ are happening as the result of their ‘Earth destruction..’...such clever writing, Scarlett to create these associations etc.....

[Scarlett.]

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Thank you! I like holding a mirror up to the real world like that, it helps build a realistic idea of what Crystalla is like

[Ammi]

Originally Posted by Scarlett.

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Thank you! I like holding a mirror up to the real world like that, it helps build a realistic idea of what Crystalla is like

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...it’s also a really cute thought that worlds are not so different...(...although there might be some ways that we would like them not to be .....)....but the references and association to our own familiarities etc...really help as well, I think... when it’s such unfamiliar surroundings as with fantasy worlds...you really do those references very perfectly, Scarlett...

[Scarlett.]

Originally Posted by Ammi

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...it’s also a really cute thought that worlds are not so different...(...although there might be some ways that we would like them not to be .....)....but the references and association to our own familiarities etc...really help as well, I think... when it’s such unfamiliar surroundings as with fantasy worlds...you really do those references very perfectly, Scarlett...

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Thank you! It does make it easier to understand Crystalla as a world

[Scarlett.]

New chapter!

[Scarlett.]

Another!

[Ammi]

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.....ughhhh, Keegan...this is not a good start to the week, he’s just so dark in his intentions and in his heart...and is the dream control building and getting stronger...


....I so love this sentence, Scarlett..’the two were stood in the ruins of civilisations that never existed, they saw the end of time and start of the universe...’...I love that......

[Scarlett.]

Originally Posted by Ammi

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.....ughhhh, Keegan...this is not a good start to the week, he’s just so dark in his intentions and in his heart...and is the dream control building and getting stronger...


....I so love this sentence, Scarlett..’the two were stood in the ruins of civilisations that never existed, they saw the end of time and start of the universe...’...I love that......

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I wanted to try and convey how long both of them had lived and how much history had been lost

[Scarlett.]

Final chapter of Promise!

[Scarlett.]

Book seven!
https://www.inkitt.com/stories/scifi/583625

[Ammi]

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...oh my Lord, Dex!!!!...Roisin is learning the power and control of the Crystals...she saved him through their powers...and also, she’s surviving their powers and hadn’t realised how able to control them, she was...and not a battle needed to be fought and no enemies needed to be faced, as such...I loved that ending, Scarlett...you built and kept that threat all of the way through and then the ending was perfect with no more harm coming to Roisin and her being reunited with Dex......another great read, Scarlett......

[Ammi]

....and ooooooo, I’ll begin Sanctuary City of Hope, in the next few days...I’ll look forward to it......