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Old 29-01-2021, 05:15 PM #751
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...Evermore and Nevermore, two perfect cult linked chapters...Roisin and Keegan......defeating their pasts to move forward to their futures...
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...that wasn’t meant to say perfect cult, it was meant to say perfectly linked ......this iPad keyboard is truly evil....
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...that wasn’t meant to say perfect cult, it was meant to say perfectly linked ......this iPad keyboard is truly evil....
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...that’s such an interesting way to ponder it, Scarlett...to ‘stay within the dream’ and be controlled by the dream ...?...but if it was a ‘kind dream/a good dream’ where none of the people you loved ever died...obviously that wouldn’t be reality but it’s an interesting concept..?.... maybe you’d never have to feel the loss of anyone you loved...
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...that’s such an interesting way to ponder it, Scarlett...to ‘stay within the dream’ and be controlled by the dream ...?...but if it was a ‘kind dream/a good dream’ where none of the people you loved ever died...obviously that wouldn’t be reality but it’s an interesting concept..?.... maybe you’d never have to feel the loss of anyone you loved...
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Indeed, it'd be a nice place to visit, but I think to live in a world like that would end up driving you mad
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...yeah, we often use ‘perfect world’/type expressions as an ideal associate... but in reality..?...it’s ‘imperfection’ that defines our human... and so creates the environment that human often thrives in and finds that ‘meaning of life/self purpose’ in, I feel......
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...yeah, we often use ‘perfect world’/type expressions as an ideal associate... but in reality..?...it’s ‘imperfection’ that defines our human... and so creates the environment that human often thrives in and finds that ‘meaning of life/self purpose’ in, I feel......
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...you’ve written the anticipation for that final day beautifully, Scarlett......as always, you leave us completely not knowing who will survive and who won’t and will any of our friends and heroes...?..I hope so but Ughhhh I fear so much as well...One of the things that I was drawn to is obviously the Crystalla of Dark and Light and how they won’t appear how we would expect them to....such mystery, I’m excited to read on....
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...I’d forgotten about Varla and thought uggggghhhhh...and the elevator hit her and killed her...?...that was like watching it play out in a movie and how sudden/shocking/unexpected it was ...no big build up of fight etc....?...which she didn’t deserve anyway, she deserved to just be hit by the elevator......karma....
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...there’s a sentence/phrase that really stands out, Scarlett in how it associates with our world atm and the pandemic losses of life V the country economy...’nations can be rebuilt so long as people survive”...and that’s so true and how I’ve personally always felt...there will be no economy anyway without life, life is always first...great chapter.....
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