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....awwww, so will Ruby become more parent to Clara now, I wonder...I think she may do......



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....awwww, so will Ruby become more parent to Clara now, I wonder...I think she may do......



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...hmmmm, in a different vein...there seems a little triangle of romantic emotion with Clara, Dawn and Noah...
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...oh go Clara with the bullies, she’s finally standing up to one of them, go girl......I think that the cremation is going to bring lots of emotion and I wonder which of the friends will be there or will many of them have already passed....

...hmmmm, in a different vein...there seems a little triangle of romantic emotion with Clara, Dawn and Noah...
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Unless Noah and Imogen are mistaken
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...it’s so easy to see why Clara feels so much responsibility of ‘living up to her parents’...not just because she’s the daughter of such incredible legends but also because they both gave up their immortality to have her in their life..but that’s the thing, they would only hope for her to be who she was and to be happy...they wouldn’t have had any higher expectations...oh, Ruby as Hubun......will she still have her fire as a Hubun...?...but wow, what a great twist to add....
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...it’s so easy to see why Clara feels so much responsibility of ‘living up to her parents’...not just because she’s the daughter of such incredible legends but also because they both gave up their immortality to have her in their life..but that’s the thing, they would only hope for her to be who she was and to be happy...they wouldn’t have had any higher expectations...oh, Ruby as Hubun......will she still have her fire as a Hubun...?...but wow, what a great twist to add....
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...I can’t work Dawn out, she can ruthlessly and coldly kill but is she with her father or not with her father....hmmmmmm....
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Somthing small that you might have missed - when she confronted Dawn in on the connecting bridge, she summoned a Crystalla weapon with ease, as she had finally found inner strength, albeit from the anger and hatred she felt in that moment
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