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Old 01-08-2020, 02:37 PM #176
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Forgot to post here, but more chapters have been added
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...with the Time Crystal, we can feel the power of the crystals building..but people are often not what they seem, so......
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...with the Time Crystal, we can feel the power of the crystals building..but people are often not what they seem, so......
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Indeed, Araneia and Hiran don't know enough about this Kingdom yet
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...Roisin’s heart......


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...it’s a little worrying that Roisin seems to be struggling to harness/control her crystal powers in their balancing of each other...it feels as though she may cause something that she didn’t intend to...
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Indeed, and because of her mood, it seems to be worsening the balance
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...OMG, Keegan Luna...?..so this is Roisin’s brother...?...and with the blink of an eye, he killed the woman who had been mother/carer to him all of his life...he brutally killed her so easily...WHAT is Keegan, what is he capable of...
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Many books ago, his existance was subtly hinted at, but now he is here at last and Treleva has gotten to him first
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I read the first few chapters Scarlett, its really good
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Thank you! This series came off me not writing for over a decade, so the earlier books are little rough around the edges, compared to where I am now

I've done another chapter
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On the sixth 'book', the first and third are shorter than the rest, but the others arent too long
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....wow, this is really getting quite dark with the back stories...so from Roisin and Keegan’s birth, Rychard Pyre was implicated...and if only the nurse was killed, how was Keegan’s disappearance covered up/explained...?...‘the descendants of the moon‘...so what powers will Keegan have as a descendant and how will those powers be used...totally separated in personality also..?..
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The thug that took Keegan from the nurse was also killed too, in the petrol station explosion, the kidnapping is yet another dark deed of Rychard, he's not the shining beacon he made out to be
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...Treleva is the definition of evil/of darkness...poor Keegan but now he is darkness as well, I think...he is lost to Roisin forever as she will have to destroy her own brother....
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...Syl is a Luna also, I’d forgotten about that...so him also being a descendant of the moon will relevant with his powers ..and how all of the descendants will defeat the darkness together, maybe....
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...not an alliance between Rychard and Arranthian...that feels quite uneasy, Rychard can’t be trusted at all...
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