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Old 29-09-2008, 07:17 PM #26
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I have tried to do it nicely, so Ann is portrayed in a good way.
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pmsl there is an ann conspiricy theory omg what have i missed haha!
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I don't even know who Ann is :S haha.
I think it's the woman who everyone keeps making threads about... never seen a post from her though.

shes a total ledge
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Probably one of the nicest, funniest, and best members we've had on TiBB
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Aww thanks!
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Yeah, she was a bit of a leg end. m8.
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Aww thanks!
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Yeah, she was a bit of a leg end. m8.

aye deffo deffo
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The Box[/b]
It was midnight.
Shaun reloaded the page again, and smiled.

He was there. She typed his name. He reloaded the page again. For the last month or so, Shaun was in heaven. And thats where it all began for Shaun, heaven.
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Shaun despised those threads. Then made him feel unwanted, unloved, uneeded. But she realised that. Ann cared about Shaun. It was the thread which everyone checked again, and again, to see if they were a member that someone 'got to know and really liked'. And Shaun was liked by Ann.

She liked him. Everytime Shaun read his name he felt so happy, and that is where the downward spiral for Ann began. From that day forth, Shaun fell in love with her.

But he had competition. Callum. He was everything Shaun wasn't. He liked music that Ann liked, he like soaps Ann likes, he listened, and in general Ann loved him. And from the day Shaun really began to fanstise over Ann, he realised to win her heart, he would need to elimate Callum from the equation.
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It was 1.00am. Shaun stood up, and for the last time that night, smiled at his name. He turned off the light, and walked upstairs, avoiding the 8th step, which creaked loudly. He brushed his teath, still feeling warm inside. As he walked in to his room, and closed his door, he breathed out.

He was in real Heaven now.

He crouched on his knees, and pulled out a large chest from under his bed. He picked up the items, which were silhouted in the darkness.

"Joe. Joe" he wispered. Joe Pasquale was Anns favourite comedian, and Shaun loved Ann, so he loved Joe. His longer fingers placed the comedians DVD in to the DVD player, and the same happy sounds filled the room. He continued to loom through the box, smiling at photos, texts, CD's and more. His hand pulled out his favourite photo of Ann, and the boy carefully placed it next to his lamp.

He pulled out his phone, and rang the number again.
No answer. He phoned again. And again.

He was angry now. He wanted Ann to himself. And Shaun knew he would get her. It was just a matter of time...


LOL what if Ann returns mid story!
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pmsl joe pasquale eee god forgot how big a fan of him our Ann was
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LOL, I love this story!
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Bravo Magic, this is great
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This is scaring even me.
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I want moar.
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LOL This good.
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I want moar.
gimme gimme more
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What is going on here my dear friend Sam?
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Previously on The Mystery of Ann
April '08: Shaun gets nasty with someone on webcam, but why?
Febuary '08: Ann gets stalked, and we realise how much Shaun loves Ann

What happend to love?

The wind tickled the leaves, and the rain beat against the window frame. The loud voices from the TV were in battle with the 'High School Musical' soundtrack, but the boy just stood on the spot, looking like someone from a new, unseen world.

The blank face remained emotionless, staring at the computer screen infront of him. He loved her, her loved her so much, yet the feeling wasn't mutual.
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He had tried so much to be Ann's number one, but no matter how many times he phoned, emailed or texted her, Callum remained untouchable.

First he tried to impress her. He researched humour online, and tried out so many jokes and gags, but none worked. Then he tried to share similar interests, music, fashion, neices, celebritys, TiBB... but that failed. And then he came up with his master plan, if he couldn't beat number one, he had to remove him.

First of all, he framed him. He hacked in to Anns account, and set her a rather 'nude' avatar, and framed Callum. But, despite pleeding with Ann not to forgive him, Ann went back to Callum and left Shaun again. He then talked to Callum, and eventually managed to manipulate him in to getting Ann in to trouble, when the both 'bullied' another member. After this plan worked, Shaun realised Callum needed to leave TiBB, forever.

And, eventually Callum did leave. Shaun used his skills to turn the whole of TiBB against him, and, told Callum if were ever to return, Ann would hate him forever.

So he left. But, after pleeding with him to return on the phone, Ann made Callum return.
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And that is where things changed.

Shaun says:
Heya Ann

Ann says:
Now ThEn I Never WaNt To Hear fRom You Again After What You Did TO My Deer Calumm

Shaun says:
But Ann, please. He is lying, I love you.

Ann says:
You Are NotHing But A Fake And A Foneey AnD i Wish I Never Met You

Shaun says:
Ann, you dont mean that, you are my one.

Shaun says:
Please Ann

Shaun says:
Ann, dont do this to me.

Shaun says:
Please pick up.

He felt betrayed, confused and unloved. He couldn't move, his mind and limps were frozen. And it was from this night onwards, Shaun realised he needed to have Ann all to himself...
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It's all true... ever since she first used this I couldn't take my eyes off of her.
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Previously on TiBB Tales:The Mystery of Ann
Shaun finally cracked, and says he will do anything to get Ann.

- The thoughts of innocence
The tears fell down the boys face, like a dolphin swimming through the waves. All he wanted in life was to be liked, to be loved, and to be noticed. But he wasn't.

It all started a few months ago, when Shaun asked him to take part in his online big brother. When he entered, he felt so happy. Shaun wanted him, he needed him, and for the first time in his life, Darenn felt part of something.

He stayed for 3 weeks, and those three weeks were the happiest of his life. But, as all things in Darenns life, it came to a crashing hault. He was evicted, and hated.

But Shaun was there for him. He cared. Shaun said he was so hated by his housemates and the viewers, that Shaun had to delete all of the mass hate, as he didn't want Darenn to become more upset.

He would often open up his heart to Shaun, and tell him how he felt about everything. And the best thing was, recently Shaun showed real interest and compassion for Darenn. He was a friend. Darenns first friend ever.

Shaun was such a kind person, he was going through hards times as it was, Ann had been constantly phoning him and messing him around, yet Shaun still cared for Darenn. Darenn would do anything for Shaun.

He sat on his bed, and looked over to his laptop.

Shaun says:
Please show me Darenn, I wont show anyone.

Darenn says:
I dont know... I am sorry Shaun.

Shaun says:
I understand. Its just I thought we trusted each other

Darenn says:
We do x

Darenn says:
Here >

The boy wiped away his tears, and turned on his webcam.
His trousers slid to the floor.





So, that was a Ann free story, but dont worry, it will soon be more Ann and less Shaun



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