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02-10-2008, 08:49 PM | #51 | |||
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ROFL.
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02-10-2008, 09:05 PM | #52 | ||
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Is everyone following it so far?
I dont know if I wrote it clear enough... Basically, it begins with Shaun taking pictures of someones bits, who we later find out to be Darenns. Then we go two months back in time, and find out how much Shaun loves Ann. Then, eventually Ann 'dumps' Shaun as a friend. Shaun then realises he must have Ann all to himself, and begins a plan. And then, we are back to the Start, and Darenn become the victim of Shaun. But why does Shaun want Darenn? Next Time: Ann gets a suprise, and why does Shaun want Darenn? |
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03-10-2008, 06:30 PM | #53 | |||
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06-10-2008, 08:36 PM | #54 | ||
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Last Time: Ann doesn't want anything to do with Shaun, who is busy manipulating Darenn, but why?
It was ringing, yet again. Christopher was really fed up with this, and he knew that Ann was getting annoyed to, but she wouldn't phone the police. For the last month or so, Ann's phone had been ringing non stop, and when she answered, the caller put the phone down. Sometimes they would stay on the line, but all you could here was panting and heavy breathing, and other times there would be a long silence, but nine out of ten times, they would hang up. At it wasn't just phone calls, Ann's postbox was full everyday. She would get about ten letters, all from the same person. Some where empty, and some were far from it. Blackmails and threats would fill about two of these letters, and others would be filed with images, black wirey hair, tone nail clippings, DVDs.... everyday brought new goods. The lady sat down, and turned on her TV. Her favourite show, The Price is Right, was about to start, and that always made her feel much happier. Suddenly, there was a knock at the door. It was little Destiny. "Aunty Ann!" the small girl exlaimed, hugging her Aunt. Ann reached down, leaving her cigarette on the side, and picked up her little neice. "Oh my dear little Destiny! Now then my dear girl, how are you? Dont you look pretty today!" She smiler contently, as she enhaled on her cigarette, filling the room with a musty scent. They both chatted, and watched the TV for an hour or so, when the door rang again. Three young girls stood outside, gigglying outside merryly. One of the girls, the dark haired one, Ann recongined, but where from, she didnt know. "Heya, are you Ann Hayden?" "Yes my dears" she replied, cautiously. "You phoned us last night, booking a Ann Summers party! And we are here to make your fantasy a reality!" Ann slammed the door, and covered Destinys ears. This had now gone to far. |
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06-10-2008, 09:04 PM | #55 | |||
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Awh your well good at these Magic x |
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06-10-2008, 09:11 PM | #56 | |||
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HAHA. Thats hillarious, good job Magic.
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06-10-2008, 10:26 PM | #57 | |||
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-doesn't like the bitch hogging my limelight.-
-won't be feeding her tonight- |
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06-10-2008, 10:27 PM | #58 | ||
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Does anyone want me to continue?
If so... How will Billy21be involved, what will Darenn do for Shaun, and Ann has someone very close to her.... on TiBB! |
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06-10-2008, 10:28 PM | #59 | |||
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ME ME ME
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07-10-2008, 08:36 PM | #60 | ||
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He could here the engine from outide, and he knew that it was time. He picked up his two bags, and walked down the stairs. The boy breathed it a long breath, and closed the door behind him.
As the Taxi drove off, he questioned just how, and why, he was going to do this. And it all went back to his foolish antics. If he never showed his vital organ to Shaun, then he wouldn't feel so forced in to commiting this 'duty'. He had been driving about three hours, and each minute felt more painfull that the last. Why was he doing this? Why? - She typed away on her computer, and smiled. No matter how much Shaun was getting to her, TiBB would always cheer her up. She clicked 'Post Topic' (About TiBBs funniest member) when she heard a loud knocking on her door. She stood up, sighing. This was the 5th person today. As her arm swang the door open, she gasped. It was Darenn! But he was crying... and was soaking wet... why was he here... he lived in London... Ann was shocked, scared and confused. "Darenn, my dear, come in, come in". The boy slowly walked in, refusing to make eye contact. "Now then, my dear friend, what has brought you here? And why are you crying?". The lady was so confused, and nothing seemed to make sense anymore. About 10 minutes passed, and the boy finally began to talk. Ann sat, and listened, her cofeee in hand. "It was... my.... um.... my teacher. Mr.. Hill... He... He touches me Ann. He does things..I dont know what to do... I am scared...Nobody believes me...You.... Kind...I need somewhere safe...I am so confused Ann...." Ann reached over and hugged Darenn, her arms embracing him in a shield of love and protection. Darenns hand touched her back, and he smoothed her. He slid his free hand in to his pocket, and pulled out three white tablets. He remembered what Shaun said, and dropped all three in to her cofee. He had done it. They both returned to their seats, and Darenn continued to talk. About an hour later, and Ann tried to keep her mind working, but everything was begining to turn in to a blur. She knew Christopher wasn't home, and for some reason a boy was at her house...and Chris wasn't home... and someone was speaking... Her body slid off the sofa, and hit the floor. All was black. |
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07-10-2008, 08:43 PM | #61 | |||
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07-10-2008, 08:45 PM | #62 | |||
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ooooh i wonder who it may be hmmmm?
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07-10-2008, 08:51 PM | #63 | |||
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can't nobody hold us down
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Omg
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08-10-2008, 09:08 AM | #64 | |||
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Oooh. Why has he drugged her? What's he gonna do?
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09-10-2008, 09:27 PM | #65 | ||
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New bit coming soon!
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09-10-2008, 09:48 PM | #66 | |||
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Hurry up!
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14-10-2008, 09:51 PM | #67 | ||
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Previously [/i] - Shaun stalks Ann, and Darenn drugs her - but why?
The boy looked at the body, she was out of it. He checked her pulse, and turned her over, so her eyes weren't looking at him. He couldn't believe what he had done, not in the slightest way. He looked at his watch, and picked up his mobile phone. He pressed the keypad, and waited in anticipation as the phone rang. "Shaun.... I... I did it" "Good, stay there, dont move. I have phoned them up, they'll be here tommorow. Christopher is sorted" Shaun hung up, and Darenn waited with a baited breath. He was coming. They would see each other, the first time yet, face to face. He sat down, and stroked Ann's hair. The Door banged. A sniggering voice filled the room. "Hello Ann. Ann. Hello Ann. How are you Ann? My dear Ann, are you ignoring me? Well you have to ignore me now Ann, as your nothing... your mine" "Shaun... I dont want to do this... I cant... I want to tell someone" the other boy stuttered, backing towards the door Shaun walked through. "Tell a soul, and you will be nothing. I have rewards for you boy, you will be loved. I will treat you good." The boy remained silence, and stared down at Ann's still body. "Help me move her, I want her in the car. Grap her legs, and I want her in my boot, she will be fine in there." Darenn was unsure, his mind was full of nothing but loud voices. He couldn't think, move, feel. He felt lifeless. - Bang. The boy jumped, and looked around him. He was surrounded by a never ending block of flats, and a long terraced house road, directly infront of him lay a black car, and Shaun. He looked again, and realised Shaun had his belongings. His mobile, his wallet, his clothes. "This will do. You are going to have to make your own way back to London. We are off. Next stop Blackpool!" Shaun slapped the car roof, and drove off. Darenn was alone. And Ann, was gone. |
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14-10-2008, 10:07 PM | #68 | ||
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[spoil]
Coming Soon - Chewy has a shock suprise..... Darenn meets a real lover... supernoodles is set for a BIG suprise... largeandincharge, Shaun, Ann, and Billy all cross paths... but how... and why? [/spoil] TiBB Tales:New Topic The next tale is set on a much more serious note... what is the global effect of one topic? Expect big things! |
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14-10-2008, 10:29 PM | #69 | |||
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Oooooooh! Can't wait!
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15-10-2008, 06:44 PM | #70 | ||
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Previously - Shaun kidnaps Ann, and leaves Darenn deserted miles away from his home.
The harsh high pitched alarm tone filled the room, stirring the lady laying in the bed. Five minutes later, and she slowly awoke. Her feet contrasted against the ghost white matt, and she slowly walked in to her bathroom. 'This is the last morning I will be in my own home again' she thought, whilst looking at her reflection in the mirror. How she was going to pull this off, she didn't know, but she did know, she would become one rich lady for living her new life. It was 10am, and her stomach was turning, she couldn't compose herself, she felt so nervous, as if she were hanging from a cliff, being supported by nothing but a thread of cotton. Her black hands reached in to the wooden drawer, and pulled out... a face. White, slighyly aged looking rubber lay in her hands, as she knew that soon, she would become Ann. She had already had major cosmetic surgery performed on her hands, chests and legs, which transformed her jet black skin in to a chalk-board white. And she had dieted well, to fit her new 'cuddly' personnal. Angie was saying goodbye to her old life, her friends, her family, and she would welcome a whole new life. The life of Ann. She collected a small bag, and closed the door behind her. The wind brushed against her face, but she felt nothing in her new mask. She held her head up high, and walked onwards through the town centre, heading to her new home. |
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15-10-2008, 06:53 PM | #71 | |||
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15-10-2008, 06:56 PM | #72 | |||
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I knew there was something about Ange I couldn't quite put my finger on. (cue pun).
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15-10-2008, 09:28 PM | #73 | ||
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pussy Mrluvaluva?
why dont you say what you mean My solicitors are reading this with care mr Magic |
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15-10-2008, 09:29 PM | #74 | |||
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Angie! I never knew
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15-10-2008, 09:30 PM | #75 | ||
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