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Old 12-03-2009, 08:37 PM #1
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Default The Adventures of Alex Copley- RE-WRITE IN PROGRESS- CHAPTER ONE VOID!

Ok this is still in the early stages. I thought I would try my talents at a bit of creative writing. Release is not until the summer but here's a teaser


Alex Copley is destined to enlist in Galaxy Crusaders like his father before him. But as time goes by is clear that somebody doesn’t want Alex to follow in his father’s footsteps, and will stop at nothing to make sure he fails. What are the mysterious Vloice, what is The Light, and what secrets does the Hall of Crusaders hold?

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I completed the first chapter last week sometime, and have been thinking what exactly I put in it, and to be honest it wasn't enough.
The overall flow of the chapter wasnt quite right for me, so I'm taking it down and reviewing it, adding bits I missed out that really need to be in there, to make the story work
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Has anyone actually read it?
I have, if you want us to answer in this thread

Please don't take this the wrong way, but when I write my material I break the text in to blocks


It make it easier to read if it is in smaller paragraphs

I also craft it in word, to make sure all spelling and grammer is correct, not that I am pointing out any issues here, just that this is what I do
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Originally posted by Glenn
Has anyone actually read it?
I have, if you want us to answer in this thread

Please don't take this the wrong way, but when I write my material I break the text in to blocks


It make it easier to read if it is in smaller paragraphs

I also craft it in word, to make sure all spelling and grammer is correct, not that I am pointing out any issues here, just that this is what I do
Thanks for the pointers
I too use Word for the spell check.
Ive broken down the chapter to make it more readable
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