[Sam]

Sounds good

[Nicky.]

I think this is gonna be good!

[Tom]

Its 849 words, I just checked

Anyway sounds good so far but before I write the endings I need to know what the scenarios are

I think we should kill someone off as well, maybe Fom if he gets his record deal

[Nicky.]

Including the little part in italics it's 900

Well, as Andy is out to kill Britney, maybe he could kill Britney, then they find out it's Dezzy in drag, for one ending..

and the other Fom get's his record deal, but the catch is, is that Dezzy and him have to be a pair, and their first single must be womanizer (the Dezzy version )

or something xD

[Tom]

Well I was thinking Britney could be some raging witch who they see attacking the shrine of Christina or Lady Gaga with an umbrella ... she is nothing like they say in the media

[Nicky.]

A raging witch LOL!

Well, the media don't say that, that's very true!

Some random weird maniac HAHA!

It would be funny xD

You can write that one - it sounds randomly cool!

I think Andy should get to kill someone though

[Sam]

I like the idea but Matt said Britney can't be a character.

[Sam]

Dezzy in drag has gotta be a scenario.

[Tom]

Dezzy in drag being Britney?

[Nicky.]

Yea - when they find Britney it's actually Dezzy in drag

[Tom]

Ending 1

Stood before them was a woman with an umbrella, attacking the shrine of Christina. She had her back turned to them.
"She looks like Jade" screeched Andy, followed by a mock laugh.
"No she doesn't, its blatantly Britney and shes going to get me a recording deal" said Fom in a tone of excitement.
"Madonna is so much better looking in the flesh" joked Madonna, which his parrot repeated. "She can still change my username though, I'm sooooo excited I can go and make more polls about pointless things then!!"
She turned round in what felt like them to slow motion. Suddenly the sun went in, and grey clouds quickly moved overhead. Everyone gasped as this horrific, witch like person stood before them.
It wasn't Britney, but an impersonator. Only the parrot realised.
"Oh my god its Britney, ahhhhhhh, I love you, I've got all your singles and ... ahhhhhh its BRITNEY YOU CAN BE MY NEW OBSESSION!!!!!!!!!!!!" screeched Madonna at the top of his lungs in the highest pitch ever.
But as the impersonator was distracted, Andy was creeping closer ... and closer ... and closer ...
"Can you get me a record deal? I've been searching for ages. I'm your biggest fan", Fom said desperately in a bid to secure his future.
"LIAR" roared the impersonator, "I know you're a Kelly Clarkson fan and for that reason, you won't get a contract unless ...."
"Unless what?" cried Fom
".... you realise a Britney Spears tribute album, featuring all her greatest hits including 'I'm not a Girl' and 'Im a Slave 4 U'".
Madonna laughed, but Fom agreed and just as they were shaking on a deal, Andy had picked up the umbrella used by the impersonator to destroy the shrine of Christina and with 3 blows to the head, the impersonator fell to the floor.

307 ............

[Nicky.]

Ooo sounds good!

Might need to be a bit more lengthly! But it's looking good so far!

[Tom]

Oh I know, thats only when they've seen her, its literally 10 seconds on from where you ended

I was thinking both endings could start like that.

Need to add in more conversation, move it along a bit quicker and bring it to an end.

But I don't exactly know how ending one will go ... so suggestions?

As in what 2 scenarios will we say are the options to be able to vote for? Its all a bit vague atm and I need something proper to work towards

[Nicky.]

LOL I was gonna say xD

Yea, if both endings start like that, then stop it there... they can decide :3

I will have a think about the endings proper, been with friends all afternoon.. so I've been posted short and swift xD

[Nicky.]

One ending has to be Dezzy in drag.. so if you write that we can think of the other

Just add some stuff of your own, it's your section

[Tom]

What if ... Andy succeeds in killing Britney (when they realise its Dezzy) so Fom doesn't get his record deal, Madonna doesn't get his name change .....

and

Andy gets killed by Dezzy, Fom gets his record deal but has to record Britney covers, Madonna gets the name change but to something dodgy ............

[Nicky.]

oo now they sound good!

Matt said we might not be allowed both endings.. so don't write them both!

So whichever you like best, so first!

It's up to you, unless you want me to pick

[Sam]

Ooh love the ending previews.

[Tom]

Why aren't we allowed?

[Nicky.]

Not sure, I was just talking to Matt earlier and he was asking if he could read our story so far, so I said yea it's in our thread..

and he said ok, and then I said about our 2 endings, and that not being done yet though, and he was like what do you mean? So I explained and he had to ask James if it's allowed for the task

[Tom]

Well I think it should be, there were no rules saying we couldn't

[Nicky.]

Exactly my point

[Sam]

Yeah, lets have two. If Matt wants to add rules when its too late though we cant stop him

[Nicky.]

Indeed!

Also, I think we should have graphics, but the rule has gone off the start?

[Tom]

Matthew ........ assistance needed!!