[Sam!]

Part One

Psychiatry: The medical specialty concerned with the prevention, diagnosis, and treatment of mental illness. Different people with different problems, different visit, ten till four. Every week.


10:00AM – A TALL BLONDE GIRL WALKS INTO THE OFFICE. BRONA – AGE 16.
Right. I feel really uncomfortable coming here, I mean, I used to be popular you know, every guy wanted me, every girl wanted to be me. But then. You Know. That Day...the masked men... -Pause- I, just. It’s hard to talk about, that day… when I can, I just… I just end up in a heap, crying... every student, every teacher – killed. –Pause- I can’t stop thinking about it, I wake up in the middle of the night – screaming. My, my… my friends… dead. Bleeding. It was so long, yet I still feel I’m going crazy. I can’t talk to people. Not now. No friends anymore… and to top it all off I have to come see a psychologist to sort my mess of a life out.


11:00AM – A QUIET DARK HAIRED GIRL KNOCKS POLITELY AT THE DOOR. PRINCESS – AGED 17
Men disgust me: you can never know how angry men can get. Well I know. I met the back of my father’s hand many times and after all this time I can not bring myself to trust any man, years after he was sent away. Mum was smarter than me - she left years before - before… Obviously for her, it was enough. At the time I hadn’t understood. But then… he always came back late – drunk, uncontrollable and looking for an argument. But I never argued back… He still found some reason to make me feel as much pain as possible, be it physically… or emotionally.


12:00PM – A YOUNG LARGE BOY WALKS IN ON ME WHILST I WAS HAVING MY COFFEE. FIREWIRE – AGED 14.
It is getting so bad that I’m putting food before my life. Food fills that empty gap – I have no friends. Everyone knows: especially my mother. But she doesn’t give a s**t about me; she throws food on a plate every night and looks right through me. Just last week we saw my GP and he said he was ‘Very Concerned’ about my weight; my mother said nothing at the time, and later told me there was nothing wrong. Instead she took me to McDonalds… Jack and his mates were there… and they laughed. They called me everything from Tubby to Balloon boy, but mum – she just laughed alongside them. Food is my only sanction.


2:00PM – JUST HAD LUNCH – SH**TY CANTEEN FOOD. A LANKY SPIKY HAIRED BOY FALLS INTO MY OFFICE. WATERS – AGED 17
It’s like why do -******- people think I'm stupid? S**t. The ******ing ignorance of some people, man. It's driving me –******- down. S**t. Yeah I've been - ****** - doing the exercises, man - s**t - but they aint - ****** - working. It got worse - s**t - this week when I saw. when I saw, when I saw - ****** - Angela. I thought I'd got - bo**ocks - over her, you know? S**t. She don't even know who I am, the last time - ****** - I saw her she called me a - s**t- a spastic. It's just - ****** - everything about her, man. When I saw her it made me forget -s**t- everything.


3:00PM – A GINGER BOY IS INTERESTED IN THE FISH TANK – HE MARVELS IN THE LARGE ORANGE ONE. ROSS – AGED 16.
It was 3.54pm in Liverpool Street when I saw my new Rat. He is better than the last one because he has a higher surface area of brown than the last one: The last Rat. I arrived at Bethnal Green 2 minutes later than usual, but it was okay and I didn’t scream as usual, because I had rat. A lady came up to me and said to me “What have you got there?” I did not know what to do – it had been a while since somebody had spoken to me. I showed her Rat, she ran away. Maybe she didn’t like rats. I walked the 780 metres to my house with Rat. No one came near me.


4:00PM – A SHAKY BOY ENTERS THE OFFICE AND IS LOOKING AROUND, NOT SURE WHAT TO DO WITH HIMSELF. BILLY – AGED 16
Yeah. YEAH. I take crack… OK? Itsnotmyfault. I get urges throughout the week but it costs so ******ing much yano? I know that I need to get off it I know I do I know. At least I know. It’s getting really bad y’no? y’no? I start going crazy after taking it. But it makes me feel KING OF THE WORLD! King BILLY! I’m ******ing INVINSABLE man! S**t! Yessss! I like the sound of that! But ****** it man, I need to get off the stuff ‘coz my mumsaidshe’d kick me out and I think she’s proper being serious y’no man? Y’no!? I just can’t do it, man. It’s ******ing awesome man... but it’s ruining me. ******ING ruining me. Look at me man, LOOK at me! What the ****** is gonna happen? I know I’m ******ing addicted but I can’t help myself, man. Y’no? Y’no?

[MarkWaldorf]

[SiaSiaSia]

Originally posted by MarkWaldorf

do you like?

[bronaaaa]

Love it
Ross

[Sam!]

I'm glad someone likes it. It took us till like half 11 last night.

[Palmz87]

this is really original i love it! it's really different.. I knew you were writing something Sia but i didn't think it'd actually be good!!!!!

[Loukas]

Thank You for the comments!

As Sam said everyone in the team worked ultra hard! Part 2 coming soon!

[Sam!]

[Sam!]

Part Two; A Week Later

10:00AM – A TALL BLONDE GIRL WALKS INTO THE OFFICE, MORE CONTENT THAN PREVIOUS WEEK. BRONA – AGE 16
They aren't with me: but the men are. They are dead, The men are not. I want them back. Nothing I can do will bring them back... There's been a lead. In the case... they HAVE to find him. They can't get away from what they did. The memories are still there and they're haunting me but I know I have to move on, like my friends would want to. It's going to be tough. Life. ******ing life. It can be ended sooner then we think.


11:00AM – A DARK HAIRED GIRL KNOCKS RAPIDLY AT THE DOOR. PRINCESS – AGED 17
I can’t ******ing believe it! I just you know... I just can’t! They released dad! Ok, he has a restraining order but they don’t know my dad... he will find any way to harm us, I know it. I don't want to talk about it. He... it just SHOULDN'T have happened. Lily has been trying to comfort me, but it's impossible. I can't feel safe knowing he's been released. Her touch is so different but so similar. I need to be alone, I'm sorry.


12:00PM – A LARGE, DEFIANT BOY WALKS IN. FIREWIRE – AGED 14.
Yesterday when I entered the kitchen, mum was sitting there, after finishing her cigarette. She asked if I was hungry, but when I shook my head she looked at me and laughed. I didn’t get the joke. I told her it wasn't a joke. For the first time in my life I had spoken up. I said to her, Mum: "Look at me. ******ing LOOK at me." I pointed at my body. "I need help.". She stayed silent and lit another cigarette but that look in her eye: it showed me she cared. I turned around to leave when she said 2 words I would never thought she would say, I’m Sorry.


3:00PM – A PASSIVE BOY KNOCKS ON THE DOOR AND ENTERS WITH LITTLE SOUND. IS STILL INTERESTED IN FISH TANK, BUT MAKES NO COMMENT. ROSS – AGED 16.
The new rat died 5 days 3 hours and 2 minutes ago. I had another rage, mother said. I do not remember, and this worries me because I don’t like not remembering things. I buried Rat in the garden, next to the shed and lying next to the old Rat. I don’t think I’ll get another new one.


2:00PM – JUST HAD LUNCH – CHICKEN TIKKA SANDWICHES. WAS GOOD. A BOY WITH A TWITCH RUNS INTO OFFICE, WITH BARELY A KNOCK. WATERS – AGED 17
So I –******- I talked to her man –******-. Angela. At the –******- at the bus stop. She was –s**t- alone. And we –******- we talked, man. And I –******- couldn’t stop ******ing stutter –s**t- stuttering. But it was okay, man, cos –mother ******- I got over it, man. And I think it worked – s**t – man! She’s meeting me – ****** – tonight, man. I’m ******ing ecstatic right now, man. She’s special.


4:00PM – HYSTERICAL BOY ENTERS, MORE RUGGED AND BRUISED THAN PREVIOUS WEEK. BILLY – AGED 16
******sake. Therewasthis. There was this dealer.. Paul. Heneedsmoney. HE NEEDS MONEY. but where the ****** am i gonna get it from? I've been properlytrying, honest... I know I need to stop – I really do. I'mgoingtodieI'mgoingtodie. I owe Paul five hundred quid and I’m gonna ******ing die. Life is mother ******ing SWA-HEET.


Psychiatry: The medical specialty concerned with the prevention, diagnosis, and treatment of mental illness. Different people with different problems, different visit, ten till four. Every week. And my work is never done.

[Sam!]

Read but don't comment then

[bronaaaa]

Better win this task

[Billy]

lol this is so good!!

[Sam!]

Thanks Brona. Depends if the judges think it's better I suspose. [edit: Thanks Billy too!]

[Ninastar]

OMG! I lovve it! xxx

[Novo]

I think you deserve to win this week

You have put more effort in then Oinks

[Billy]

OH THATS WHAT THESE ARE ABOUT.

[Sam!]

Cheers guys. And Andy, we put in so much effort its crazy.

[Tom]

Originally posted by .Andy.
I think you deserve to win this week

You have put more effort in then Oinks

bitter?

[Novo]

Originally posted by Tom

bitter?

No. The Oinks Story seemed to more PG's rated

A Parrot, **** zu Etc,

First part from you was Great then Second Part was just Crazy

[Loukas]

Thank You Everyone!

[Tom]

Originally posted by .Andy.

No. The Oinks Story seemed to more PG's rated

A Parrot, **** zu Etc,

First part from you was Great then Second Part was just Crazy

that parrot and dog are in the first part

you'd change your mind if you seen the other ending

[Tom4784]

Wow this one's really good! I like how different and original it is and the pictures which I thought added a lot to the story. I thought Ross' character was delightful and I really wanted to know more about all of 'em.

Well done!