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Tibbenders, Coming BackSeptember
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This is the first pilot episode, and there wil be four of these throughout the week, leading up to the first official episode on Tuesday! A Normal episode will be 10 times this, so don't worry if you think it is too short! Enjoy, and plase comment!
![]() The Square It is midnight. Brona is sitting on the bench alone, with a bin bag beside her. She is holding an empty vodka bottle in one hand and a cigarette in the other. She is clearly very drunk. She is wearing a very revealing top and a mini skirt. She shouts loudly into the air Brona: WHO WANTS A PEICE OF ME! C,MON! YOU KNOW YOU WANT ME! She Laughs and twirls around in a circle. Sticks is inside his house and opens up the window to see what is happening. He see's Brona spinning around in the square Sticks: Look Who it is! Go find a street to sleep on! Brona hears him shouting, and turns to him. She starts shouting Brona: EW! NOT YOU YOU DIRTY OLD MAN! OI! YOU WANNA TOUCH? Brona Bends over, showing her bare bum to Sticks. A Shocked look comes to his face as he quickly closes the window Sticks: Oh my! |
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Ohh, This looks good!
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I personally have no idea why you've completley rejuvinated for Series2 but good luck with it.
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![]() My hairs not greasy betch *snaps fingers* ![]() Looks good so far x] |
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Thanks Guys. And Sam!, series 1 was very unplanned and there were storylines going on everywhere. A Fresh start, for Newer mebers to read aswell, without getting mixed up, is the easiest thing to do
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Well, i like it so far.
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Brona you slag!
![]() Looks good Lewis, AM I IN IT STILL!? ![]() |
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Am I in it?
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I'm not 61
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Only a few days until episode 1!
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Bump =p
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Yes its been a few days lol.
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Why have you put on a delay?
I also noticed that you have edited your first pilot piece. |
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I remember in the original version you had described my character as being 61, hence my later comment saying I was not 61, which is why it looked like you had edited that out. |
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Oh no
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