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14-05-2009, 07:21 PM
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Tibbenders, Coming BackSeptember
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14-05-2009, 07:21 PM
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This is the first pilot episode, and there wil be four of these throughout the week, leading up to the first official episode on Tuesday! A Normal episode will be 10 times this, so don't worry if you think it is too short! Enjoy, and plase comment!
 The Square It is midnight. Brona is sitting on the bench alone, with a bin bag beside her. She is holding an empty vodka bottle in one hand and a cigarette in the other. She is clearly very drunk. She is wearing a very revealing top and a mini skirt. She shouts loudly into the air Brona: WHO WANTS A PEICE OF ME! C,MON! YOU KNOW YOU WANT ME! She Laughs and twirls around in a circle. Sticks is inside his house and opens up the window to see what is happening. He see's Brona spinning around in the square Sticks: Look Who it is! Go find a street to sleep on! Brona hears him shouting, and turns to him. She starts shouting Brona: EW! NOT YOU YOU DIRTY OLD MAN! OI! YOU WANNA TOUCH? Brona Bends over, showing her bare bum to Sticks. A Shocked look comes to his face as he quickly closes the window Sticks: Oh my! |
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14-05-2009, 07:34 PM
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I personally have no idea why you've completley rejuvinated for Series2 but good luck with it.
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14-05-2009, 08:02 PM
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 My hairs not greasy betch *snaps fingers*  Looks good so far x] |
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14-05-2009, 08:28 PM
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Thanks Guys. And Sam!, series 1 was very unplanned and there were storylines going on everywhere. A Fresh start, for Newer mebers to read aswell, without getting mixed up, is the easiest thing to do
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14-05-2009, 08:33 PM
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Well, i like it so far.
 Because im a pervert. |
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15-05-2009, 03:04 PM
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15-05-2009, 03:14 PM
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Brona you slag!
Looks good Lewis, AM I IN IT STILL!? 
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15-05-2009, 03:19 PM
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15-05-2009, 03:59 PM
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15-05-2009, 05:15 PM
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I'm not 61
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17-05-2009, 06:32 PM
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Only a few days until episode 1!
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21-05-2009, 09:10 PM
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Bump =p
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21-05-2009, 09:13 PM
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Yes its been a few days lol.
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25-05-2009, 04:14 PM
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Why have you put on a delay?
I also noticed that you have edited your first pilot piece. |
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25-05-2009, 04:17 PM
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And i don't think i did edit it?
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25-05-2009, 04:38 PM
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I remember in the original version you had described my character as being 61, hence my later comment saying I was not 61, which is why it looked like you had edited that out. |
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25-05-2009, 06:55 PM
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Oh no
I had character profiles, but deleted them
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25-05-2009, 07:00 PM
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TiBBenders::Series 2 - Cancelled until when I can be bothered to bring it back. Lmao
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