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Old 13-07-2009, 05:25 PM #1
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Basically, it is a TiBB Version of Waterloo Road, with TiBB members as Characters. It is a bit Different to TiBBenders because it is not Script form. I will post a few paragraphs every night, and it will probably carry on for the summer! So, please leave Feedback with each instalment and... enjoy =]



*Will make this all look nice with Graphics and Stuff later, but CBA now :P Leave Feedback for 1st Instalment please =]"
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Instalment 1

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"Fight, Fight, Fight, Fight!", The School chanted as Shaun and Markus(Markwaldorf) Scrambled around on the floor. They gasped for air as they pulled eachovers hair.
"You Bitch, I hate you!", Markwaldorf Screamed
"All Because I thought Britney was Fat!", Shaun Replied, tearing out chunks of Markwaldorfs hair, "What a Pathetic excuse for a fight, you ******!". Markwaldorf Grabbed the back of Shauns head and tugged as hard as he could, pulling out a big Tuft of hair. Shaun Screamed as he felt the bald patch on the back of his head, "What the Hell are you trying to do? Give me the Britney Look?!". The School was still chanting and the fight carried on!
Twilight Laughed, "God this is amazing! FIGHT FIGHT!"
Suddenly, out of nowhere, the Head master appeared, looking down on them both. Everyone fell silent and examined him. He was wearing the same suit he wore every day. His Hair was a dark colour and he had a very clean face. his shoes were polished and he had a hanky poking out of his suit pocket. He coughed. Markwaldof and Shaun had already stopped fighting. They were sat on the floor, in tears looking up at him, both of them with slap marks on their faces.
"Well, Well, Well.. What is this then?", He Looked down at both of them with a menacing look.
"Is that the new Headmaster?", Ninastar whispered to Harry, looking the man up and down.
"I Guess so!", Harry Answered, "Who else could it be?"
"Ladies and Gentleman, It is a pleasure to meet you. I am you new Headmaster, but you can just call me Mr. LemonJam"
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TiBBenders was rubbish, no offence... so I don't see how this is going to be any different.
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TiBBenders was rubbish, no offence... so I don't see how this is going to be any different.
Appreciate the "Constructive" Critisism. =]

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FAIL.

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Good stuff, Just like reading a script version better x
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id better ****ing be in this one lewis
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id better ****ing be in this one lewis
I will put you in it =]
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"Ladies and Gentleman, It is a pleasure to meet you. I am you new Headmaster, but you can just call me Mr. LemonJam"


Oooer,
Me Deputy Head please?
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Will this end up like everything else you attempt?
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Will this end up like everything else you attempt?
Nope. It is summer now. Free time = Time to kill

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Oooer,
Me Deputy Head please?
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ME U BITCH~
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"Ladies and Gentleman, It is a pleasure to meet you. I am you new Headmaster, but you can just call me Mr. LemonJam"


Oooer,
Me Deputy Head please?
I'm serious.
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"Ladies and Gentleman, It is a pleasure to meet you. I am you new Headmaster, but you can just call me Mr. LemonJam"


Oooer,
Me Deputy Head please?
I'm serious.

Well, not written the next Installment yet, so yeah.. suppose so
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Markwaldorf Grabbed the back of Shauns head and tugged as hard as he could, pulling out a big Tuft of hair. Shaun Screamed as he felt the bald patch on the back of his head, "What the Hell are you trying to do? Give me the Britney Look?!"
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More of this tomorrow =]
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I want to be in.

Can i be head of the hardcore indie gang.
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