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Old 31-05-2010, 03:16 PM #126
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The Votes:

Room A = 7
Room B = 4
Room C = 2

coming up our first part of the story
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Old 31-05-2010, 03:17 PM #127
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The Intro:

All seemed well on the boards today, there had been no bans and very little lockdowns on threads. This was very unusual for the board but it was planned like this. Shaunessy called on his boardmate Karlito to spread the word. The time was now, their plan would finally begin after months of planning. Karlito could easily walk around the boards without looking suspicious, infact the MODS didn't even notice him walk past the Tower.

Karlito gazed through the first room we came to, Orla's. He peered in and all he could see was pictures of Take That. All was not as it seemed though, as he looked closer he could see that Mark Owen's face was blacked out on all of them. "how could you, you bastard" he could hear Orla mumble. He pretended not to see or hear any of this and called for Orla to get ready. She quickly wiped tears from her face and put something in her pocket.

As Karlito gathered all the Members to Shaunessy's room. Shaunessy had a cheeky grin on his face "Orgy time" he thought to himself. He soon remembered why they were doing this and the thought quickly disperesed. "We all know why we're here and what we need to do to get out". "Orla did you throw the MODS off our scent?" "Fat chance of that happening with Emiline in that T-Shirt" Jayshunned shouted. Emiline spun her head around and gave a look to Jayshunned that made him feel cold inside. "Sorry Emiline" he whimpered. "Yes i told them we were having a Glee get together" Orla said proudly. Glancing around the room she realised the others weren't impressed. "That will have to do Orla, next time say we're watching BGT, I think Jamesy watches Glee, WE DON'T NEED MODS HERE K?" scorned Shaunessy.
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Room A posted later tonight.
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LOL. Stupid Orla.
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"how could you, you bastard"

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Okay so not gonna get Room A finished before the things i have to do so will have to be put up after BGT, if i finish before then it'll be up.
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The Asylum: Room A

As the Members walked down the long board remembering not to be too loud they came to the end of the Corridor. Ahead of them were 3 Rooms; A, B and C. They began to argue about which room they should go through with Chooie saying they should think this through logically and the rest agreeing. "Ooops" said Rosstopher in an evil toned voice. He had opened the door to the Mysterious Room A. The members heard a MOD and quickly ushered inside.......it was pitch black but they could hear a noise humming from the far end of the room. Emiline slowly moved to the back of the group clearly not wanting to be the first to find out what it was.

Karlito, sick of waiting walked up to the humming noise, he caught glimpse of a lightswitch infront of him and pressed it. "Oh my God, what the **** is that" exclaimed Shaunessy. "It's me" retorted Youyourself&you. She clearly hadn't put any make up on. Karlito picked up what appeared to be a vibrating didlo. "guess we know what that humming noise was" he laughed. "Oh hai, I've been looking for this everywhere" said a voice from the background. All eyes shot round to a clearly embarassed Rosstopher. "Bahahaha" screeched Shaunessy. "c'mon guys we have to get on with this, we don't know which MOD was outside" said Paddy.

LIFE IN THE FAST LANE, LIFE IN THE FAST LANE bellowed through a speaker.

"It can't be him, it just can't" said a clearly shaken Larry. "It is, I knew we hadn't seen the last of him after the Election, It's Aristobot and he's gonna try to break our group up, we need to stick together" said Lockley

Arisobot was not seen in person, there was a plexi glass box which looked shockingly like an old fashioned 80's hard drive.

I SUCCEEDED IN OUSTING THAT SCOT, NOW IT'S YOUR TURN.

"I can keep him occupied by arguing but not for long" said Jessintha. "Karlito give me your gun" Shaunessy said. He quickly grabbed Karlitos gun, took the water tank off and put an acid bile in it's place. "Where do we aim?" asked Jayshunned. "At the keypad obviously you dipshít" said the charming voice of Lilian. Shaunessy pointed the gun just as Aristobot finished up with with Jessintha.

KEEP ON KEEPING ON. NOW TO GET RID OF YOU FROM MY SANCTUARY.

Shaun pulled the trigger and the acid erupted all over the keypad, it slowly began melting. Aristobot was having none of it. SIGN OF THE TIMES, REBELLION AND ANGER. YOU CANNOT ESCAPE, I WILL NOT ALLOW. "We can and we are" shouted Lilian. the group scrambled to the door which was now halfway open, all except for Rosstopher and Lilian who had both seen a message come through on a screen. It was from Marcus and it was slowly coming through like on thos out of date computers. It read "Aristobot, thank you for your information, we are going into full mode LOCKDOWN, they will not escape, they can't escape because" at this stage the first door opened and the 2 Members ran towards where everyone else had gone.

Rosstopher and Lilian quickly exited through the door but to their shock the others had vanished. "This is just like LOST" said Lilian. "Oh you can **** if your gonna start talking about that crap, I hear enough from lockley" As they panned down what seemed like a long corridor they realised they were actually in the MOD RUN. This is how the MODS keep an eye on all the Members they have imprisoned here. "which way now?" said Rosstopher..........



Down to the left of the Corridor is where the Music Boards are.
Down to the right of the Corridor is where the Sports Boards are.

Which way next is up to you guys......VOTE PLEASE, LEFT or RIGHT.
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hahahahahaa.

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Very good lol.

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Omg poor me and Lilian.
Shaunessy you kick ass gurl!

Oh, I'll go Right.
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Okay then will leave this open until after BGT then i'll be doing the rest of this bit..... (which is all still part 1)
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Right. ahah the Emiline t-shirt bit made me laugh. Good stuff Eoin!
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Closing this in 5 mins anymore?
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The Asylum: Room A, Turn Right


Rosstopher and Lilian quickly exited through the door but to their shock the others had vanished. "This is just like LOST" said Lilian. "Oh you can **** if your gonna start talking about that crap, I hear enough from lockley" As they panned down what seemed like a long corridor they realised they were actually in the MOD RUN. This is how the MODS keep an eye on all the Members they have imprisoned here. "which way now?" said Rosstopher..........

"Right of course, thats what my waters are telling me and trust me you don't want to be going against my waters" said Lilian. As the two turned right they finally saw how the MODS could see them, "Oh a two way mirror" said Rosstopher. "It all makes sense now" quipped Lilian. Walking down the corridor Ross looked into one of the rooms, "hey i know him, that's Novice"

Member 14
Novice - A young man who once ruled the boards with an iron fist. He too claims he has left the boards but with no concrete evidence can he be trusted? Novice is obsessed with Football and Rangers in particular. Will the glory of the goal outshine the glory of escape HE WANTS OUT!

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Rosstopher tapped on the glass, "well hello there", Novice wondered where the noise was coming from and called out "Boone". "Right that's it one more LOST reference and im done, seriously" an angered Rosstopher exclaimed. "Oh Rosstopher and Lilian, get me out of here, there's this guy called Reginald and he's been freaking me out lately" he said in an ushered voice.

Lilian flipped a switch and the double mirror began to lower. "Nice balls" Lilian and Rosstopher thought to themselves looking at a shelf with 5 footballs on it. The three heard a cry from around the corner and went to investigate it. Novice now taking the lead. The other two didn't mind becuase they'd rather him go first than them.

As they turned the corner they found a battered Lockley. "Lockley what happened brother?" "There was Black Smoke just like the one from LOS" with that Rosstopher took out his sword and slahed Lockley's neck. "I ****ing warned you all about this LOST shít" he said whilst checking his hair in the mirror. Novice retorted "that may be well and true but he didn't know that and only he knew what happened, well done Jackass" "Bitches listen, I wanna get the hell out of here, you two can play fight later, i'm leaving."

The trio continued on down the corridor, not before Novice grabbed piece of wire from Lockley's backpack, he quickly put it in his pocket before the others noticed. Rosstopher seemed pleased as he had one final look at Lockleys dead body.....
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