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CaraRawr · 08-04-2010, 05:37 PM

sf amazing.

Shaun · 08-04-2010, 06:09 PM

Jen let's share headphones <3

Jessica. · 08-04-2010, 06:16 PM

Hmm what's with all the msn lately. *pretends to be on msn*

ahh/ That is brilliant!
I wish I was in it though! holly1 tyra/

Tom4784 · 08-04-2010, 10:01 PM

Episode 2
Ana-Shaun-ia

Setanta: Now Class we have a new student starting today, His name's Jack. Be nice.
Jack: Hi!
He waved to an uncaring class. He scanned the room quickly until his eyes rested on Shaun. He stared a moment too long and she raised her gaze and spotted him, He carried on staring intently at her and it was creeping her out. He looked away and sat at a desk at the back of the class, The lesson resumed as normal but Shaun felt Jack stare at her all lesson. When the Bell rang she was relieved to get away from him, hopefully that would be the only lesson they shared.

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Stu had just finished a lesson when Wombai knocked on his classroom door.

Stu: Hey, come in.
He said awkwardly. She stepped in and scanned the room, her lips were pursed with fury. It was taking every bit of her self control to stand in the same room as Stu without screaming at him or worse
Wombai: I've come for the progress reports on the Year 8's.
She said coldly, they avoided each other's gaze as her searched for the reports. A few moments passed before he found what she wanted and with the reports found she swiftly made for the door.

Stu: Listen Wombai.....I-
Wombai: Don't
Stu: But I-
Wombai: Leave it.
Stu: I'm-
Wombai: I SAID SHUT IT! (Sue/)
Stu: I'm Sorry!
Wombai: That doesn't cut it! Nothing you do or say will ever make it okay! I trusted you, I LOVED YOU! But that's all gone now, ever since that day.....Just leave me alone.
She walked out the classroom, leaving Stu in silence.

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Shaun was sat on the steps with Gary and Mark, Shaun's mind was pre-occupied with that new kid Jack. It felt like everywhere she looked he was there, What was his problem? He was like 30Stone with an underaged member and it unnerved her. As Gary and Mark argued over which Britney track was the most fierce, Shaun noticed that Jack was staring at her again. She felt nervous briefly before succumbing to fury, who the hell does he think he is? She stood up and strode over to him.

Shaun: OMG what is your problem? Are you like, obsessed with me?
Jack laughed a little before replying.
Jack: A little bit.
Shaun: Just leave me alone!
She turned away to return to her friends but Jack grabbed her arm and pulled her back.
Jack: I'm onto you. I know 'Shaun'....I know.
She stared at him in shock before regaining her ferocity.
Shaun: Bitch Please! Touch me again and I'll take you to the carpet.
She pulled her arm away from him and strutted away. She winked at Andy who smiled back and returned to her friends. Their argument was over and they had decided that all Twilight Twitty's tracks sh*t all over Britney's any day of the week.

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It was Shaun's last lesson of the day, Biology with Mr Stu. She was lucky enough to avoid Jack since their encounter and it seemed that the only class they had together was Setanta's which was a relief to Shaun. Stu was talking about the formation of Penicillin but Shaun wasn't listening which was unfortunate as Stu announced a new class project that would divide them up into pairs. By the time she snapped out of her trance the only partner left was Patrick. Shaun TANISHA'd before beginning work with him. He was a quiet partner who got on with his work without fuss which Shaun didn't mind. She didn't really want to socialise with him, he was a bit of a freak. As they both wrote up their preliminary Hypotheses Shaun noticed that Patrick had a class photo poking out of his notepad. Under the guise of checking her work against a Textbook she leaned in closer to take a sneaky look and she immediately wished she hadn't. It was a picture of his form class and from what she could tell all but Patrick's face had been scribbled out but one face had been cut out all together. She shivered before deciding to carry on with her work. She already had enough troubles without getting involved with Patrick's.

The bell rang signaling the end of the school day which could not come sooner for for Shaun. Today had been stressful and she just wanted to go home and forget about everything for a while. What she didn't expect to find was a man sitting on her car.

Shaun: Erm, excuse me but what the hell? Get off my car!
The man turned around and Shaun's mouth dropped open in shock. It couldn't be.....he was dead and Shaun didn't believe in ghosts.
??????: That's no way to greet an old friend.
Shaun: You.....
??????: Mother Russia never forgets, Natalya

Tom4784 · 08-04-2010, 10:02 PM

Thanks for your comments guys. The next part will be up in a few days.

Raph · 08-04-2010, 10:06 PM

fantastic!

Tom4784 · 08-04-2010, 10:23 PM

Thanks Samy

LemonJam · 08-04-2010, 11:20 PM

i love. <3

Tom4784 · 08-04-2010, 11:25 PM

Thanks James.

Billy · 08-04-2010, 11:25 PM

Amaaaazing.

MrGaryy · 08-04-2010, 11:26 PM

rofl this is getting better!

Twilight · 09-04-2010, 01:08 AM

I love this <3

Patrick · 09-04-2010, 01:44 AM

I cant belive I didnt click on this thread before, I thought it was some American Reality Show and wanted to avoid it but OMG.
Its brilliant Dezzy!

I loved my obsession with killing Butterflies in Episode 1 and drawing over faces in Episode 2.

Cant wait for Episode 3!

Well done tbh.

Tom4784 · 09-04-2010, 02:27 AM

Thanks guys, I'm glad you're enjoying it. I've had a burst of creativity so I think I might have the next part done later today.

Patrick · 09-04-2010, 02:32 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Dezzy

Thanks guys, I'm glad you're enjoying it. I've had a burst of creativity so I think I might have the next part done later today.

Good to hear

Shaun · 09-04-2010, 11:14 AM

b/ew

Tom4784 · 09-04-2010, 12:06 PM

s0b.

Shaun · 09-04-2010, 12:13 PM

i'm sorry sad/

I just don't like how I'm portrayed in these stories. s0b

It's bad enough being the generic black singing gurl, without turning out to be some Russian woman. Though I'm intrigued. *grabs popcorn*

Tom4784 · 09-04-2010, 12:16 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Shaun

i'm sorry sad/

I just don't like how I'm portrayed in these stories. s0b

It's bad enough being the generic black singing gurl, without turning out to be some Russian woman. Though I'm intrigued. *grabs popcorn*

Rofl I only made you russian because you said you were bored of being the black singing girl. Your story gets quite interesting though.

Tom4784 · 09-04-2010, 05:14 PM

Episode 3
MILF

Shaun was sitting in a Diner with the mystery man, she had been quiet since they arrived. She seemed more pre-occupied with staring at her tea then talking to him. She looked up at him and it finally sunk in, he was alive.....WHY DID NO ONE TELL HER!

Shaun: You've been alive all this time! I wept for you! I left Moscow because of you, why the hell did you never make contact before Darenn!
Darenn: It's complicated, matters with my father have grown worse and everything is beginning to erupt into chaos over there but that's not what I'm here about. They're onto you.
Shaun: Who?
Darenn: The government, they think you know where she is but they aren't sure of your identity yet so you gotta lay low for a while keep off the radar and keep up the pretense.
Shaun nodded subtly, she was dazed by the fact that her past had come to haunt her. Her mind flashed to the incident two years ago which resulted in her leaving her home and coming to the T.C to live with a father she'd never known. She had to hide her Russian heritage under a boisterous American personality, it was hard but she adapted and now the past was gonna blow everything apart.
Darenn: I've got to go Natalya, be careful and remember I'll be looking out for you.
Shaun watched Darenn Pritcharov walk away, once again her best friend was leaving her life.

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Lili had just finished getting ready, she looked at herself in the mirror and smiled she looked amazing and she knew it. It was only Parent's Evening but she believed in looking hot at all times and plus, HE will probably be there. She met Gary in the entrance hall who was looking a little bit too happy at the prospect of going to the Parent's Evening, Gary was planning something but Lili had no clue what.

On the drive to the school Gary recounted her brilliant idea in her head. She wanted an A in Biology but sucked at it but Mr Stu was single and so was Lili... If she got them together it'd be easy A's forever. 'Two birds with one stone' She thought in her head.

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Jen sat at the front desk of the school, she was roped into volunteering and had to sign in Parents and Students. It was utterly boring and the person who was meant to help her was late. 'What did I do to deserve this?' She thought.

Lemonjam: Hi Jen.
Jen snapped back to reality and realised that Lemonjam and his parents wanted to sign in.
Jen: oh hey LJ. Just sign here please.
She smiled and blushed, they signed the book and moved on.
Nathan: Hey, Sorry I'm late.
Her help had arrived, she death stared him for being late but offered him a seat as she returned to her thoughts.

Nathan: You're not very talkative.
Jen: You're not very punctual.
Nathan: Geez I'm sorry about that.
He turned on his iPod.
Nathan: Say, do you like Lionel Ritchie?
She rolled her eyes, it was going to be a long night.

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The chairs in the school hall had been cleared out and replaced with a circle of desks with a teacher at each one. Lili had seen all of Gary's teachers save for Stu and was waiting for him to be free when Zee zipped past in his wheelchair.

Gary: Oww!
Zee ran over her foot causing her to hop around a bit and massage her foot.
Zee: I'm sorry! Are you okay? Is anything broken.
Gary: I'm hopping about on the spot Zee, the only thing that's broken is my dignity (glare/)
He looked at her with an apologetic look in his eyes.
Zee: Hi Ms Cooper
Lili: Hi Zee, How's your mother? I'm surprised I haven't seen her.
Zee: She's good, she's around here somewhere, I should really go find her. Bye!
He sped off in his wheelchair as Lili and Gary spoke to Stu.

Gary thought it was going well, Lili didn't seem repulsed by Stu and they were chatting away quite happily. She looked around to see Shaun waiting by the door on her own, deciding that it was best to give Stu and Lili some time to chat Gary went to speak to her.

Gary: Hey what's up?
Shaun: Ohai gurl! It's all good mhmm.
She said a little too enthusiastically.
Gary: Spill it.
She saw right through Shaun, she always upped the ghetto-ness when something was wrong.
Shaun: I've had a lot on my mind, I just feel a bit worn out.
Gary: Why don't you stay at mine tonight? We'll have some fun, take your mind off things.
Shaun: Umm, yeah okay why not?
At that moment Lili joined them and they left for home.

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Shaun and Gary had been working their way through a collection of chick flicks when they ran out of popcorn, Shaun offered to make a new batch and walked downstairs to the kitchen. As she was setting up the popcorn she heard Lili speaking in the room, giving in to curiosity she decided to listen in a little although she couldn't hear that well from the kitchen.

Lili: Can't wait to see you........I had so much fun.....

Shaun couldn't hear much more but it was obvious Lili was talking to a man, she knew of Gary's plan to get Lili and Stu together and it was obviously working. She moved up the stairs to tell Gary of recent developments. Gary grinned as they carried on watching the film, she loved it when a plan came together and the best part was that she barely had to raise a finger to get them together.

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Jen: I don't believe it.....
Jen had just finished at the school and walked into the car park to find her bike broken (she's all eco-friendly and sh*t like that). It was the perfect end to a terrible evening and now she had to walk home.As she headed for the school gates a car beeped it's horn at her and stopped.

Nathan: Hey Jen! Do you want a ride home?
Jen: No thanks.
Nathan: Are you sure? It doesn't feel right to let you walk home alone?
Jen: I'm fine thanks.
He drove right next to her and opened his door.
Nathan: You literally live in the next street to mine, get in.
He said with that grin on his face, Jen sighed and relented and got into the car. She didn't act like it but she was glad of the lift.

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Lili could not wait for Gary to leave the house for School and the second she saw her daughter drive away she was on the phone.

Lili: She's gone, it's safe.
A few minutes later there was a knock at the door. She opened it quickly and dragged him in.

Zee: You'd think you were ashamed of me or something.
He said smiling, turning to face Lili.
Lili: Not at all.
She leaped into his lap and kissed him.
Lili: Take me to my chambers loverboy. We haven't got long.
Zee: So charming....
Zee wheeled them over to the spare bedroom as quickly as possible.
Lili: Oooooh, someone's pleased to see me....