The Estate(Last episode posted)

[Jack.]

The estate will be sadly ending. I purely don't have the time anymore to write episodes. There will be one final episode before it's go. The episode will be written by Cal(Who is she?)

[Benjamin]

Madeline (Maddy for short) can be her name. :dazzler:

[Jack.]

Madeline (Maddy for short) can be her name. :dazzler:

Thanks ben :)

[Jack.]

I'm debating on who to have to play Maddy. Who would you have ?

[MeMyselfAndI]

Stephanie Davis :love:
She is perfect & Sinead is one of Hollyoaks best characters atm

[MeMyselfAndI]

Guy Burnet :love:
I loved too hate to love Craig

[Drew.]

You should base characters around certain soaps and then you can describe how each of them would fit in/where they'd work and all of that

[Benjamin]

Rebecca Atkinson

[Jack.]

I Can easily make characters but trying to writing them I'm awful :joker:

[Firewire]

nina simone

[Jack.]

nina simone

Actresses that are alive and not dead :joker:

[Jack.]

You should base characters around certain soaps and then you can describe how each of them would fit in/where they'd work and all of that

That's a good idea. I might do that after I have finished my cast.

[Ammi]

..you have some good characters, Jack...it would be nice to create a storyline around them one day..?...(and I don't think that you need to get a life, it's a nice thing to do with your time and very creative..)...

[Jack.]

The first episode will be up in the next few days :)

[Jack.]

The episode begins with Bianca sitting at the table crying her eyes out. Bianca has just had a phone call to inform her that her son that's been serving Afghanistan had been killed. Bianca sits alone in the kitchen looking at the picture of her son on her phone. Tears dipping on to the screen. She wipes her tears away before shouting the kids to come downstairs. Bianca sits the kids around the table. "I've got some bad news" tears start running down Bianca's face. Joe can tell there is something seriously wrong.

Meanwhile Will Potter is having a shower when he discovers a lump on his testicle. Will quickly gets out of the shower to have a better feel. As he feels the size of the lump he falls to the floor and starts to cry. Will quickly gets dressed. Will is shaken sitting on the floor in his bedroom. Will beings to panic because his uncle died of testicular cancer 3 years ago.

Back at the Spencer house Bianca is in floods of tears as she tells the kids that Callum has been killed. Emily runs out of the room screaming "Your lying". Bianca quickly chases after her. Bianca sits on the stairs with Emily and holds her tight. "Everything is gunna be alright darling" Bianca tells Emily as a tears run down both women's faces.

At the Potters house Will is too scared to go to the doctors incase he has got what his uncle had. When Will has the courage to rings the doctors the receptionist tell him the only doctor available is a female doctor. Will is too embarrassed to go see a female doctor. Will sits on the edge of his bed thinking what he is going to do next. Samantha walks into his bedroom. She looks at Will "Sweetheart have you been crying" Sam says worryingly. Will tells her that he hit his toe on the his bed and it made his eyes water. As Sam leaves the room she knows that something is a matter and that Will is not telling her the true.

At the spenders house. Bianca is about to cook the dinner. "Kids what do you want for your dinner" Bianca shouts to the kids. Joe tells Bianca to forget about the food. "Come in the living room mum we can get a takeaway" Joe says as he sits on the sofa with Bianca and Emily. A tear runs down Bianca's face as she cuddles up to her two kids.

[T*]

:(

[Jack.]

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Any feedback :)

[Jack.]

Added another two paragraphs on :)

[Natalie.]

I like it Jack, a lot of sad things happening though. Like the Bianca character

[Jack.]

I like it Jack, a lot of sad things happening though. Like the Bianca character

Well the next episode will be another sad one but after that it will ok :)

[Jack.]

Episode 2 will focus on Callum's funeral with Alison Steadman will be guest staring for one episode as Bianca's mother Sandra,.

[Jack.]

Episode 2
The episode starts with Bianca sitting in Callum's room holding one of his tops. As a tear runs down her face,she hears a knock on the door. She quickly rushes down the stairs. "Hello sweetheart" says Sandra Bianca's mother. Bianca is so happy to see her mother. The girls walk into the kitchen. As Sandra sits down at the kitchen table she asks Bianca how she is coping. Bianca tells her that's she fine. "Are you really" says Sandra. Bianca shakes her head before breaking down. "No ma I'm not I miss him so much" Sandra gives Bianca a hug before taking her upstairs to get ready for the funeral

Meanwhile on the estate. Heather is opening up the estate agents. Cain walks In the door. "Where the hell have you been,Your 15 minutes late" Say heather. Cain tells her that he had overslept and it won't happen again. As Cain is saying this to heather she sees George walking passed. Heather quickly runs out on to the street "George,Come here I need to speak to you"Shouts heather. George asks heather what she wants. She tells him that she wants him to come to hers tonight to help her with some "Jobs".

Back at the Spencer household. The hurst has arrive. As Emily walks out the front door and see the coffin. Tears run down her face. Sandra give her a tissue before walking her to the funeral cars. On the way to the church Bianca reads the last letter Callum sent to her before he got killed. As the family arrive at the church they are met by Elissa Campbell. Who starts asking questions,She asks Bianca if she feels that it's her fault that her son died because she should of never let him go. "Joe will you please get this girl away from me" Bianca says. Joe tells Elissa that she better leave now or he will call the police.

At the pub. The potters are getting the pub ready for the wake. "It's awful all these young boys getting killed fighting for us"Diana says to Frank. Will walks into the bar with the food. Will is still worrying about the lump that he found the other week. "You alright sweetheart you look worried about something. What to tell nan what's a matter" Diana says to will. Will tells her that there is nothing wrong before going upstairs. Frank tells Diana that it will just be some girl will is worrying about.

Back at the church. The coffin is being lowered into the ground. "we commit his body to the ground; earth to earth; ashes to ashes, dust to dust. The Lord bless him and keep him, the Lord make his face to shine upon him and be gracious unto him and give him peace. Amen." Bianca tells the family she wants a few minutes alone. Bianca stands by the graveside looking up at the sky. "Bye bye Sweetheart, Sleep tight up there" Says Bianca before blowing one kiss up into the sky before a walking back to the family.

[Jack.]

Any feedback :)

[Jack.]

Episode 3
The episode starts with the estate all in darkness. There has been a power cut.
9PM episode

On the estate Elissa is trying to write her next article in the dark. As she struggles to write. She hears a loud noise come from the kitchen. So she gets up and heads into the kitchen. As she gets into there she sees someone running out of the backdoor. She sees that there is a letter on the side that the person has left address to her. Elissa reads the message. The message reads the following "You mess with our lives now it's time to mess with yours" Elissa thinks nothing of it and throws the letter in the bin before heading back into the living room.

Elsewhere on the estate. Heather is sitting in the living room drinking her Vodka when she gets a phone call from the hospital saying that her brother Gavin had fallen down the stairs and broken his ankle and that he needs someone to pick him up. Heather puts the phone down before downing her vodka and getting her coat. As she is about to leave the house. George knocks on the door. "You wanted to see me" Heather let's George in before they start to kiss.

At the West house. Ziggy and Will are in Ziggys bedroom drinking. Ziggy starts telling Will he slept with 2 women the other night. Ziggy goes on to tell will that he was "Off his face". What did you take then? Will says. Ziggy tells him he think it's was Cocaine but he is not sure, he tells Will that he got it off Lay. "I've got a bag here,Wanna try some" Ziggy tells Will. Will feels pressured into taking it. Just as Will gets up for by the table Jackie opens the door. "Alright boys,Pizza downstairs if you want some" Says Jackie. Will tells Ziggy that he is feeling so ****ing good.

Back Howlett house. Heather and George are lying in bed when Heather remembers that she needs to pick her Brother up from the hospital. "George your gunna have to go" Heather says. George asks her why she is in so much of a rush to get rid of him. "George just piss off, I need to go" Heather says as she puts her shoes on before leaving the house and heading to the hospital. Heather leaves George alone in the house. Heather has not told George that she has a lodger staying there with her. George falls to sleep. When he walks up to hear the door go. He quickly goes to the top of the stairs but naked. Only to be greeted by Heathers new lodger Daz. As Daz walks pass George at the top of the stairs he turns around and says "Got a nice Sausage there".

[mizzy25]

Loving it lol thought Heather might have crashed with downing the vodka or something maybe? lol Its a bit like Eastenders that's a compliment by the way. I look forward to the next part.

[mizzy25]

Oh and Elissa surely must have been a little bit disturbed by the letter, cant wait to find out what that's all about.

[Jack.]

Loving it lol thought Heather might have crashed with downing the vodka or something maybe? lol Its a bit like Eastenders that's a compliment by the way. I look forward to the next part.

Thanks :)

[Jack.]

Oh and Elissa surely must have been a little bit disturbed by the letter, cant wait to find out what that's all about.

She is scared but she's putting on a face atm

[Jack.]

Episode four should be up in the next few days

[Jack.]

Episode 4 will be uploaded tomorrow

[Natalie.]

Love it Jack

[Jack.]

Love it Jack

Thanks Nat :)

[Jack.]

Daz will come into some money in episode 4. Quite a bit of money.

[Jack.]

Just to say episode four is set on valentines day :)

[Jack.]

Episode 4

The episode starts with Daz on the phone to the solicitors. Daz recently found out his grandad(Eric) had died. Daz and his grandad felt out when Daz came out as gay. Not long after they fell out Eric found out that he had Alzheimer's. Before they fell out Eric puts in his will that he want to give his house and his lifesaving to Daz. After Eric got Alzheimer's he forgot to change it. Daz is shocked when he finds this out. Daz arranges an appointment with the solicitors for later that day.

Meanwhile on the estate. Bianca is packing the suitcases. Bianca and the kids are heading off to Sandra's Villa in Spain. "Joe you are going to your Nan's villa not Magaluf. You don't need 50 condoms" Bianca tells Joe. Joe just looks at Bianca and smiles. As Bianca is packing the cases she starts too feel weird only packing three suitcases not four. "Emily Where have you put my red heels" Bianca shouts to Emily.

Over at Maya's flat. Maya and Jarrad are getting ready for there night out. "I look fat in this don't i?" Jarrad asks Maya. Maya tells him that he looks beautiful. There's a knock on the door. "Jarrad get the door I'm on the loo". As Jarrad opens the door he sees a saucy looking woman standing in from of him. It's Andrea Maya's mother. "Well are you going to let me in or what?" Jarrad has never met Andrea before. Andrea pushes Jarrad to the side as she walks into the flat. As Maya walks out the loo she is shocked to see her mother standing in front of her.

Back the Howlett household. Heather has been called to business meeting down London. Daz is left alone in the house. There is a knock on the door. It's George. Heather had arranged for George to come to hers for a few bottles. Heather however forgot to tell him that she would have to cancel. George walks in the house. He asks where Heather is "Didn't she tell you she's had to go down London" Daz tells George. Daz hears his phone ringing so he quickly rushes upstairs to get it. Leaving George alone downstairs. While Daz is upstairs George starts looking around the house. He notices a letter on the coffee table addressed to Daz. Just as George is about to pick it up. Daz comes back down the stairs.

Meanwhile at Maya's flat. Maya is confused why her mother has just turned up on her doorstep. Maya asks Andrea why she has come to see her. "Is it a crime now to come and visit my daugther" Andrea says. Maya knows that there is something going on. Maya asks Jarrad to go to pub for a while so she can talk to her mother. As soon as Jarrad leaves. Maya asks Andrea why she is actually here. Andrea tells Maya that her and Maya's father have split up and she has nowhere to stay.

[T*]

This is really good!

[Jack.]

This is really good!

Thanks Tom :)

[Jack.]

If anyone would like to suggest a storyline for a character. Just pm me :)

[mizzy25]

very good enjoying it still.

[Jack.]

Thanks mizzy. Glad your enjoying it :)

[mizzy25]

I look forward to the next episode I love me soaps lol

[Jack.]

I look forward to the next episode I love me soaps lol

You got to love them :joker:

[Jack.]

http://i.telegraph.co.uk/multimedia/archive/02348/pills_2348412b.jpg

This April will see one of the estates most loved residents will be die in heartbreaking suicide scenes. The storyline will rock the community and bring them close together at this sad time.

[Jack.]

Episode 5 will be up in the next few hours :)

[MTVN]

Great stuff JackF

[Jack.]

Thanks MTVN :)

[Jack.]

The new website for the estate. It's not finished yet but you can have a look now.

http://theestate.inweby.info/section/7094

[Jack.]

Episode 5

The episode starts with Daz and George sitting on the sofa. Daz asks George if he wants a glass of wine. After Daz pours George a glass of wine they start talking about Heather. George tells Daz that he doesn't want a relationship with Heather, when Daz Asks why George tells him that she is too full on and that he just wants her for a easy ride. Daz tell George that he should tell Heather that he doesn't love her before it's goes to far.

Meanwhile on the estate. Andrea is at the pub drinking her sorrows away. As she looks up to order another drink she sees Thomas Potter in front of her. Andrea try's to chat Tom up. Tom Starts flirting with Andrea. Just as Andrea is about to give Tom her number Samantha walks around the corner. "Hiya Babe, I've missed you" Says Sam. As Tom helps Sam take her bags up the stairs he tells Andrea to leave her number behind the till for him and that he will ring her later.

Meanwhile At Elissa's office. Elissa is busy finishing off one of her articles when she gets a text on her phone saying the following'Think I'm going to let you get away with the **** you have caused my family. You better sleep with one eye open I'm always watching you" Elissa quickly writes down the number it was sent for before quickly ringing. But went she rings the mobile there is no answer. Elissa is starting to worry after what happened the other week. Elissa quickly rushes out of her office and heads to the police station.

Back at Heathers house. Daz and George are enjoying. George doesn't like Daz that much. George is only staying at the house with him because of the free wine that is there. Daz goes to get another bottle of wine. As Daz is walking back to the sofa he falls over Georges feet and falls on top off George. Daz looks into George eyes. Daz kisses George on the lips. George quickly pushes Daz off"What the hell do you think your doing,You queer" says George, Daz tells George that he thinks it's time for him to leave.

Meanwhile at Maya's flat. Andrea is sitting at the kitchen table waiting for a text or phone call from Tom. Maya walks in the kitchen to make a cup of tea. "Do you want a cuppa mum" Maya asks. Andrea leaves her phone on the table while she goes to the loo. Just as Andrea get to the loo Maya here's her mothers phone going off. So she picks up the phone to see who it is. Just as Maya is about to look at the message Andrea walks back in"What the hell do you think your doing with my phone" Andrea asks Maya. Maya tells her that she heard it go off so see went to look who it was.

[Jack.]

Feedback is welcomed :)

[Kate!]

It's great Jack, starting to know the characters a bit, like that you've got different story strands ongoing :)

[Jack.]

It's great Jack, starting to know the characters a bit, like that you've got different story strands ongoing :)

Thanks Kate :)

[mizzy25]

im still loving it, want to know who the weird texts to elissa are off and who has just rang mayas phone and why?? Its great.

[Jack.]

im still loving it, want to know who the weird texts to elissa are off and who has just rang mayas phone and why?? Its great.

Elissa is getting stalked but i'm not going to say who by. you will find out yourself next month!!

[mizzy25]

cant wait lol

[Jack.]

Episode 6

The episode starts with A campervan turning into the estate. There is music blasting out of the van. Jackie west is staying outside having a fag when the van parks up right outside her house. "Tanya get out here now" Shouts Jackie to Tanya. Tanya quickly runs down the stairs to see what is happening. " Who the hell are they" Says Tanya. Jackie says she thinks that they are moving in next door. Jackie takes one more look at them before walking back into the house with Tanya

Meanwhile on the estate. Andrea is sitting in the pub waiting for Maya. As Andrea gets up to go to the toilet. Frank walks over to her table"Why didn't you answer my call the other" Frank asks Andrea quietly. Andrea tells him that Maya had her phone so she couldn't pick up the phonecall. As Maya walks in the pub Frank quickly rushes off back behind the bar. "Hiya sweetheart, No Jarrad with you today." Andrea says. Maya tells her that Jarrad has had to rush up to Leeds because his dad has had a heart attack.

Elsewhere at the solicitors. Daz is nervously waiting for his appointment. As his name is called to go in. Daz's heartbeat goes through the roof. As he goes to stand up he falls to the floor. He starts to struggle to breath. The receptionist quickly runs to the phone to ring for a ambulance. As they are waiting for the ambulance. Daz starts fitting on the floor. No one has no idea what to do. Just as Daz stops fitting the paramedics turn up.


Meanwhile at Maya's flat. Jarrad is sat alone in the kitchen with a glass of whiskey in his hand. As he sits there's tears drop into his whiskey. Jarrad can not believe that he has lost his father. Just as he is about the drink the whiskey the front door opens. Andrea and Frank stumble in. As they start passionately kissing and starting to take each other's clothes off. Jarrad walks into the hall"What the hell are you doing" Jarrad says to Andrea. Andrea and Frank suddenly stop when they hear Jarred's voice. "Frank I think you should go" says Andrea. As Frank walks out the door. Andrea begs Jarrad to not tell anyone about what he just seen.

At the student house. Izzie, Ollie and dan are having a house warming party. Ziggy and Will walk in. "Sorry do I know you" Izzie asks. Dan tells Izzie that will is his cousin and that Ziggy is his friend. "So Ziggy where's your girlfriend" ask Izzie. Ziggy tells her that he doesn't have a girlfriend. Dan goes outside to have a fag. As he is looking around he sees Frank coming out of the flats doing his shirt up. "Uncle frank,Uncle Frank over here" shouts Dan. Frank crosses the road to see Dan. "You alright dan what are you doing around here" Ask Frank. Dan tells him that him and his mates have just moved in.

[Jack.]

Feedback welcomed :)

[mizzy25]

jack cud u do me a favour and send me a pm when u put a new episode up please? I just happened to be browsing tonight and found a new episode I didn't even know it was up. so id really appreciate a pm as id hate to miss any.

[Jack.]

jack cud u do me a favour and send me a pm when u put a new episode up please? I just happened to be browsing tonight and found a new episode I didn't even know it was up. so id really appreciate a pm as id hate to miss any.

Yeah sure mizzy :)

[mizzy25]

thanks jack and im still enjoying it, I love me soaps lol

[Jack.]

thanks jack and im still enjoying it, I love me soaps lol

Thanks :) yeah me too :joker: I'll be doing an episode an day for a week at the end of June :)

[mizzy25]

Il look forward to that jack, your very talented, I wish I could think of a storyline, but I cant lol

[Jack.]

Il look forward to that jack, your very talented, I wish I could think of a storyline, but I cant lol

Thanks Mizzy glad your enjoying reading it :)

[Jack.]

No episode this week guys. But there will be two episodes posted next week

[mizzy25]

awww I thought u had put one up and not pm,ed me lol

[Jack.]

awww I thought u had put one up and not pm,ed me lol

Lol not had enough time this weekend to write the episode :)

[Jack.]

Episode 7 and 8 will be up later tonight :)

[Jack.]

Episode 7

The episode starts with Diana sitting in the bedroom window looking over at the estate. She quickly gets up as she hears the postman. As she walks into the kitchen with the post. She sees Frank sitting at the table. As she looks at what Mail there is. She sees a letter with "Urgent warning" Diana quickly put the letter in her back pocket before Frank seen it. "Morning darling, Anything there for me?" Frank asked. Diana tells him that there is two letters for him. She puts the letters on the table before walking out.

Meanwhile on the estate Andrea and Jarred are talking about what happened last week "He is a married man, you have to end it now or I will have to tell Maya and Diana what you and Frank have been up to together" Jarred say to Andrea. Andrea begs him not to say anything to anyone and that she will end it but in her own time. Jarred gets his coat before heading out to work.

Over at lays house. Lay and Ziggy are sitting listening to music full blast. Lay treats Ziggy like he is her little brother that she never had. Lay doesn't know that Ziggy fancies her like hell. "Zig do you want another drink" Lay asks. Ziggy tells her that he will have another beer. As Lay starts walking into the kitchen Ziggy plans in his head what he is going to do next.

Over at the student house. Izzie answers the door "Hi I heard you have a room to rent" Ask Cain as he looked at the floor. Izzie shouts Ollie to come to the door. "Cain is interested in renting that spare room of ours" Izzie tells Ollie. Ollie looks at Izzie and then looks at Cain. " Ok he can have the room but there is one condition he has to put £10 each week into the Drinks fund." Cain smiles and say thanks for giving him the room.

Back at the pub. Diana is sitting at the kitchen table with the letter in front of her. Diana opens the letter. Inside the letter it say that if she doesn't find £25,000 in the next month they will take the pub from her and Frank. Diana knows that she will never going to find that sort of money in just a month. She is too scared to tell Frank because he doesn't know about the loans that she has had and has not payed back.

[mizzy25]

well done once again jack im gripped already, what did she take the loans out for? will ziggy tell lay how he feels? will she laugh @ him?????

[Jack.]

well done once again jack im gripped already, what did she take the loans out for? will ziggy tell lay how he feels? will she laugh @ him?????

Well if I told you that I would to kill you :laugh:

[Jack.]

Episode 8&9 have been written and just need posting, I've also started episode 10

[Jack.]

Episode 8

The episode starts with Bianca unpacking her case. Just as she is about to take it upstairs. The phone rings "Hiya Bianca it's Di, I've got a massive problem, Can we meet up in the Cafe at one" Says Diana. Bianca tells her that's fine and will see her then. "Mum there is someone at the door for you" Shouts Emily. When Bianca gets to the door she is shocked to see Lee her holiday fling standing at the door. "What are you doing here?" Asks Bianca,

Meanwhile at Elissa's house. Elissa is sitting in the living room when she hears the front door come flying open. Elissa gets up to go close it. When she gets to the front door she sees that someone has written "Die bitch your not wanted on this estate" Elissa looks around to see if she can see anyone. She quickly closes the door before rushing to get her phone to phone the police.

Over at Lay's. Lay and Ziggy are having a few drinks together. Lay doesn't seem to notice that Ziggy is coming on to her. As Lay looks at Ziggy as she is just about to ask him if he wants another beer. Ziggy looks at before he starts to kiss her. Lay pushes Ziggy away "Ziggy I can't do this" Lay tells Ziggy. He doesn't listen to her. As he starts kissing her again but this time she doesn't stop him.

Back at the Spencer's house Bianca goes in the kitchen to get the phone"Hiya Di it's Bianca can't make it later sorry" As Bianca puts the phone and walks into the front room. She starts asking Lee why he has just turned up on her doorstep without even telling her he was coming. Lee tells Bianca that he has nowhere else to go. He tells her that his ex wife has kicked him out of their old house. "Well I suppose you can stay for a few nights" Bianca says to Lee.

Over at the hospital. Daz is lying in bed. He slowly sits up as he sees the doctor coming towards him "Mr Miles I've got some bad news, The results of your CT scan have shown that you have a small brain tumour. It is treatable but we will need to operate as soon as possible" Says the doctor. Daz is in a state of shock as the doctor walks. Just as the doctor lefts the room he sees Emily walk in. "Hey Daz what did the doctor want" Emily asked Daz. Daz tells Emily that he has a brain tumour but it's ok because it's treatable. Emily give Daz a hug. While Emily is hugging him Daz is holding back the tears

[Jack.]

Episode 9 will be posted later today. With episodes 10&11 being posted later in the week.

[Jack.]

Storylines that are happening in the next few months

Pregnancy
Stalker revealed
Wallis family arrive
A resident commits suicide
New club opens
Coming out storyline
A miscarriage(Not related to the pregnancy storyline)
Shock murder
A fire
7 Characters exits
Drugs storyline
Engagement
Two new characters

[Benjamin]

Storylines that are happening in the next few months

Pregnancy - Shaun
Stalker revealed - Greg
Wallis family arrive - Saph, Reece and Germ
A resident commits suicide - CharlieO
New club opens - Orangu For You
Coming out storyline - Most of TiBB
A miscarriage(Not related to the pregnancy storyline) - Marc
Shock murder - Arista kills Salman over love affair
A fire - In Nailsworth Natter
7 Characters exits - Josy, Novo, Locke, Drew (in nailsworth fire), Salman killed, Niamh and thetruth run off to start a new life together in Benidorm
Drugs storyline - Karl gets Gypsygoth into smack
Engagement - Joe and his imaginary wife
Two new characters - bwoty and thesocialgroup guy

[Jack.]

Storylines that are happening in the next few months

Pregnancy - Shaun
Stalker revealed - Greg
Wallis family arrive - Saph, Reece and Germ
A resident commits suicide - CharlieO
New club opens - Orangu For You
Coming out storyline - Most of TiBB
A miscarriage(Not related to the pregnancy storyline) - Marc
Shock murder - Arista kills Salman over love affair
A fire - In Nailsworth Natter
7 Characters exits - Josy, Novo, Locke, Drew (in nailsworth fire), Salman killed, Niamh and thetruth run off to start a new life together in Benidorm
Drugs storyline - Karl gets Gypsygoth into smack
Engagement - Joe and his imaginary wife
Two new characters - bwoty and thesocialgroup guy

:shocked: how did you know :joker:

[mizzy25]

Storylines that are happening in the next few months

Pregnancy - Shaun
Stalker revealed - Greg
Wallis family arrive - Saph, Reece and Germ
A resident commits suicide - CharlieO
New club opens - Orangu For You
Coming out storyline - Most of TiBB
A miscarriage(Not related to the pregnancy storyline) - Marc
Shock murder - Arista kills Salman over love affair
A fire - In Nailsworth Natter
7 Characters exits - Josy, Novo, Locke, Drew (in nailsworth fire), Salman killed, Niamh and thetruth run off to start a new life together in Benidorm
Drugs storyline - Karl gets Gypsygoth into smack
Engagement - Joe and his imaginary wife
Two new characters - bwoty and thesocialgroup guy

Im slightly gripped by these storylines lol

[Natalie.]

Storylines that are happening in the next few months

Pregnancy - Shaun
Stalker revealed - Greg
Wallis family arrive - Saph, Reece and Germ
A resident commits suicide - CharlieO
New club opens - Orangu For You
Coming out storyline - Most of TiBB
A miscarriage(Not related to the pregnancy storyline) - Marc
Shock murder - Arista kills Salman over love affair
A fire - In Nailsworth Natter
7 Characters exits - Josy, Novo, Locke, Drew (in nailsworth fire), Salman killed, Niamh and thetruth run off to start a new life together in Benidorm
Drugs storyline - Karl gets Gypsygoth into smack
Engagement - Joe and his imaginary wife
Two new characters - bwoty and thesocialgroup guy

:laugh:

[Jack.]

I can reveal that two of the characters leaving are the West sisters

[Pete.]

gonna get into this

[Pete.]

read through it - amazing and the website is flawless

[Jack.]

read through it - amazing and the website is flawless

Thanks :) I've still not finished the website :joker:

[mizzy25]

whens the next episode please?

[Jack.]

I'll be posting a few episodes next week. I have written them. But there at my house and I'm at my sisters until next Tuesday :)

[Jack.]

Episode 9

The episode starts with Diana sitting at the kitchen table waiting for Frank to come home. Diana knows that Frank will go mad when he finds out what she has spent the loan money on. Diana hears the door go "Is that you Frank" Shouts Diana. "No it's me mum" says Thomas as he walks into the kitchen. Thomas asks Diana what is a matter as he can see the worry on her face "Nothing son I'm fine" Says Diana. Thomas knows that she is lying about something.

Meanwhile on the estate Jarred is walking back from the shops. Jarred has finished work early today. As Jarred walks into the flat he hears noises coming from the living room. As he open the door he sees Andrea and Frank Naked on the sofa. "What the hell, do you think you're doing, Get out of my flat Now!!!" Shouts Jarred. Frank quickly gets his clothes on before rushing out of the door. "I told you to end it, but no you don't listen do you" Jarred says to Andrea.

Over at the hospital Daz is sitting on the bed waiting for the doctor to come and tell him when he will be having his operation. Daz is shocked as he sees George walk in through the door. "Hi what are you doing here, I haven't seen you since great night" says Daz. George tells Daz that they were both drunk and that he didn't want a stupid kiss ruining their friendship. "I'm really happy that we can still be friends" Says Daz before giving George an awkward hug.

Back at the pub. Frank walks into the kitchen " Frank sit down I have something to you " says Diana. Frank sits down at the table to listen to what Diana has to tell him. Diana passes the letter over to Frank and tells him to read it. Frank reads the letter before throwing it on the floor"What the hell have you spent £25,000 on" just as Diana is about to tell Frank there is a knock on the door.

Meanwhile at heathers house. Heather is having her lunch when George walks in"He has fallen for it, He thinks that me and him are now best mates" George tells Heather with a smile on his face. Heather asks George if Daz mentioned anything about his money. "No he didn't say anything about it" George says to Heather. "Remember you do whatever you have to do to get that money" Heather tells George. George looks and smiles at Heather before heading into the kitchen.

Back at the pub. Diana answers the door. "Where is he" Jarred shouts as he pushes Diana out of the way. "Who" ask Diana. Frank walks out of the kitchen. Jarred look at Frank before saying "Diana, Frank has something to tell. Don't you Frank. Frank tells Diana that he doesn't know what Jarred is on about. "Oh yes you, Diana, Frank has been having an affair with my mother in law" Says Jarred. Diana looks at Frank before slapping him " How could you do this to me again Frank, I can't even look at you, just get out now" shouts Diana

[Cal.]

Hi, this is Cal, Jack.

I really do disagree with the axing of the West sisters, having created them and then have you axe them after they've been in about 3 scenes is obviously offensive to me, especially considering you've already changed my other 2 characters Ziggy and George beyond belief.

[Jack.]

Cal I've pm'd you.

[Cal.]

Where is the announcement? So happy with the turn out. :)

[Jack.]

Where is the announcement? So happy with the turn out. :)

I'm just going to finish my college work and then will write up announcement :)

[Cal.]

I'm just going to finish my college work and then will write up announcement :)

Sounds good. :spin:

[Jack.]

Episode 10 will be up tonight :)

[mizzy25]

still waiting patiently for ep 10

[mizzy25]

thanks jack I look forward to the next bit.

[Jack.]

thanks jack I look forward to the next bit.
I've been out most of the weekend so that's why I've not written up the rest yet :laugh:

[Jack.]

Episode 10

The episode starts with Jarred downing half a bottle of vodka. Maya walks in the Door. "Maya come in here I have something I need to tell you" shouts Jarred from the kitchen. As Maya walks into the kitchen she sees Jarred sat at the table with an empty bottle of vodka. "Your mum has been sleeping with Frank Potter" Jarred says. Maya just ignores Jarred as she knows he's drunk. "You don't believe me do you,I'm telling you the truth" Says Jarred as he stumbles to the bedroom. Maya looks at Jarred before closing the bedroom door.

Meanwhile over at the student house. Cain is moving his stuff into the house. "Hey sexy want a hand moving your stuff in" Izzie asks Cain. He quickly shakes his head before going to get more boxes. "The things I would do to him" Izzie says to herself while watching Cain. Ollie walks In the front door. "Alright Izzie love, I'm making myself a cuppa, Do you want one?" Ollie asks Izzie. She follows Ollie Into the kitchen,"I'll just go see if Cain wants a cuppa" Izzies says. She's goes upstairs to find Cain, As she approaches Cain's room is sees him siting on the bed crying holding a picture in his hand. Izzie Knocks on the door "Cain do you want a cup of tea?" Izzie asks Cain while she try's to see who the picture is of. "I'm fine thanks Izzie,Please don't tell anyone about me crying just then" Cain says to Izzie. Izzie smiles at Cain before leaving the room.

Meanwhile at Heathers house. "Daz is out of hospital today I've told him he can stay here" Heather says to George. George smiles at Heather. "Remember we do whatever he wants get it him" George Tells Heather. She looks at George before walking out of the living room. As Heather walks up the stairs she shouts "Are you coming upstairs or not big boy" George quickly jumps up of the sofa before running upstairs.

Over at the pub. Thomas shouts Diana to come into the living room. As Diana walks into the living she sees Thomas,Samantha and Will siting there. "Mum we have got something to tell you, I've been offered a manager job in posh bar down London." Thomas tells Diana. Di looks at Thomas full shock. "And I've decided to take it, We moving down there on Thursday" Thomas says to Diana as she walks out of the room.

Meanwhile on the estate. Cain is sitting on the bench when he gets a text. As he picks up his phone he sees that the text says"I need to meet you tonight, Meet me at the back of the pub In 15 minutes xx" Cain puts the phone in his pocket before walking towards the pub. "So have you got my stuff?" Cain asks, As the shadow appears from the alleyway "You think I'm just going to give to you, You have to do something for me"

[Nick.]

I'm loving the estate JJ! :):)

[Jack.]

I'm loving the estate JJ! :):)

Thanks nick :)

[Jack.]

The estate will be back in the autumn. I'm having a revamp of the show atm.

[Jack.]

Announcement in OP

[Jack.]

The Estate(Final Episode) Written by Cal(Who is she?)


The episode begins with the stranger and Cain standing around the back of the pub as the stranger looks threatening towards Cain. “Well, what do you want me to do?” Cain nervously asks, as the stranger points towards the pub. “The woman who owes this…Diana, she owes me money. A lot of money. And I know how desperate you for this smack, so if you want it, you get me my revenge and you torch this place. I want to see her suffer. She’s refused to pay up, and now it’s payback time.” The stranger says, waving the drugs in Cain’s face before walking down the alley way. Cain begins scratching at his hands, it’s now apparent he’s hooked on the drugs and is desperate to do whatever it takes. Inside the pub, Diana serves behind the counter as Frank is upstairs, packing his things after Diana discovered his affair with Andrea. Andrea suddenly appears behind Frank, startling him. “What the hell are you doing here?” Frank demands, as Andrea kisses him playfully. “Have you clearing out has she? Well I think, since she’s downstairs, we could get our last bit of revenge on the old hag.” Andrea says, wrapping her hands around Frank and kissing him. He smiles and looks down on her cheekily. “And what would that be?” Frank flirts, before Andrea shoves the suitcase off of the kings sized bed which Frank and Diana shared as a married couple. “Having sex in her bed!” Andrea says, and Frank laughs, kicking the door closed as giggling is heard.

Downstairs in the pub, Ollie, Izzy, and Lee all enter and sit next to Thomas, Samantha and Will. “What’s up with you?” Izzy asks, as Samantha sighs. “Thomas has got a job down in London, we’re all moving with him but mum doesn’t look too impressed!” Will exclaims, before checking his phone, a reminder flashes up ‘Doctor’s Appointment’. “Look guys, I better get going.” Will says quickly, packing up his things and leaving the pub. “Of course I’m not impressed, we belong here!” Diana urges, having over heard the conversation as Thomas and Samantha scowl at her. “I agree with Diana, you shouldn’t leave!” Ollie says, as Izzy checks her phone as well. “Cain promised he’d meet us here, oh where’s he got to?” Izzy sighs, as Lee smiles briefly and walks to the counter to order drinks. “Haven’t seen you around these parts.” Diana says, as Lee smirks. “I’m staying with Bianca and her lot, we kind of had a holiday romance!” Lee reveals, as Diana smiles and takes his order of drinks cheekily.

As Daz sits on the sofa in the living room of Heather’s house, Heather sits in the kitchen nervously tapping her foot as George enters with a brown bag. “What’s up with you?” George asks, producing the tape and the gun from the bag. “I’m nervous, do you not realize what we’re about to do?” Heather says, as George gestures for her to keep her voice down. “George, I don’t think I can do this.” Heather says, as George produces the tape and quickly wraps it around her mouth and then tapes her hands together firm with them behind her back. “You can and you will!” George urges, before loading his gun and grabbing Heather, kicking the living room door open and throwing her to the floor. Daz quickly jumps in fright and George produces the gun on him as Daz puts his hands up. “Woah, George, what the ****?” Daz shouts, as George grabs him and points the gun at his head. “Listen, gay boy, you do what I said and you and her survive this, understood?” George says, as Daz gulps nervously and looks at a terrified Heather who is lying on the ground tied up.

At Elissa’s house, she sits on the bottom step reading the threatening letter she received, before another letter is posted through the letter box. She quickly grabs it, revealing another threatening message, before tearing open the front door as someone tears down the path. Elissa chases after them and grabs the figure by their hair, pulling them back into the house. “Who the hell are you?” Elissa demands, spinning the figure around to reveal…Bianca. “You!” Elissa shouts, as Bianca looks at her shocked before smiling. “Surprised?” Bianca taunts, as Elissa looks at her in shock. Back at the pub, Diana continues to serve behind the bar as Jarred and Maya enter the pub. “We’re still welcome here, aren’t we?” Maya asks worriedly, as Diana smiles. “As long as your skank of a mother isn’t in my pub I’m fine.” Diana says, as Maya looks awkward. Upstairs, Frank and Andrea continue to roll around under the duvet, laughing.

Outside, Cain sighs and kicks the back door of the pub, before it suddenly caves in and falls down, allowing him access to the cellar. He looks shocked, before rubbing the back of his neck and he begins to receive withdrawal symptoms. He looks back at the stranger, who dangles the drugs in front of him, before Cain looks back at the cellar and enters quickly, kicking over the barrels and letting the alcohol spill out onto the floor. He grabs a newspaper from the stack, before producing his cigarette lighter, holding him close to the newspaper for a few moments, gulping nervously, before setting the newspaper on fire and dropping it onto the alcohol, watching it go up in flames quickly before he rushes back out of the door. The stranger smiles at the orange glows as Cain makes his way toward him and then hands Cain the packet of drugs, walking off into the night.

Inside Heather’s house, Heather cries are muffled from the tape on her mouth as Daz looks at George scared. Daz sits on the sofa as George holds the gun to his head. “You heard me loud and clear, you either sign the cheque of all your inheritance over to me…or SHE DIES.” George shouts, aiming the gun at Heather as she cries on the floor. Daz gulps, before frantically retrieving a cheque book from the drawer in the coffee table. George hands him a pen, as Daz shakily writes the cheque out for twenty give grand. George smiles, before Daz slowly rips the cheque out of the book and hands it George with shaking hands. “It’s been a pleasure Daz…but you should probably know something. Your dearest friend Heather has been in on this scam the whole time, we set this up, she knew I was going to do this because she wanted the money. And you know what else? She isn’t having one penny!” George says, before kicking Daz in the stomach to prevent him from giving chase and running out of the house. Heather shouts at George, screaming and kicking as he has set her up.

“Why have you been doing this?” Elissa demands to Bianca, who stares at her with slight worry. “Because you, you know what you did!” Bianca exclaims, as Elissa gulps. “What have I done?” Elissa demands as Bianca rolls her eyes. “You said those horrible things at my Callum’s funeral! Blaming me, you bitch!” Bianca shouts, launching herself at Elissa who darts out the way and kicks her, rushing to the phone in the hallway and hurriedly calling 999. “Police please, yes, I’d like to report a stalking incident-27 The Estate!” Elissa explains over the phone as Bianca suddenly grabs her and knocks her to the floor. “You bitch!” Bianca shouts, slapping Elissa who screams and pushes her off, rushing out of the front door and out onto the front lawn as sirens arise in the distance. Bianca looks at her in shock on the doorstep, as Joe and Emily Spencer appear over the road, glaring at Bianca. “Mum, what have you done?” Emily says, before the police show up in front of the home.
Inside the pub, the fire slowly spreads through the cellar door, as in the pub Diana smiles as the party is in full swing. Thomas moves towards the bar, drunkenly smiling at Diana. “You ain’t half bad mum, but you need to let me go.” Thomas says, as Diana smiles. “I know, I know, I’m sorry. It’s just, I don’t want to admit that you 3 are growing up, I love you all too much!” Diana says, just as suddenly a huge explosion flies through the cellar and fire roars into the bar. Screams and shouts echo through the pub as Diana is knocked to the floor and Thomas is propelled back into the wall by the explosion. “THOMAS!” Samantha screeches, shaking Thomas on the floor as tables smash through the windows and fly out onto the estate. Izzie and Ollie lay on the floor unconscious, as the fire roars through the bar area and up the stairs. The camera pans to Lee, who is already crushed by tables and he is most definitely dead.

At the doctors, Will walks out of the room after speaking to the doctor. “Yes thank you, Dr. Kalid, so there’s definitely nothing to worry about?” Will asks, as Dr. Kalid smiles. “I can understood why you are worried, especially due to the history of testicular cancer in your family but like I said, the lump is just what it is and is nothing to be of concern at this point.” The doctor explains, as Will smiles and thanks him, walking out of the doctors surgery and smiling, a huge weight lifted off his shoulders. At the estate, Cain walks around the streets, out of it, before looking down at his phone. He notices a text of Izzie explaining they are at the pub, as he looks in shock and looks back at the burning pub. Inside the pub, Samantha shakes Thomas violently, crying as he refuses to wake-up. Dave Anderson, Jarred and Maya hurry to Samantha and pull her away. “NO!” Savannah shouts, but they hurry her out the doors as the fire rages and the fire engines pulls up with sirens blazing. “You’ll die in there!” Maya shouts, hugging Samantha as Jarred rushes back into the pub.

He jumps over the bar and finds Diana on the floor, pulling her up and over the bar and out of the doors. She’s unconscious and he lays her out on the floor as Samantha rushes over to her and cries. Cain suddenly rushes towards the pub, bursting in through the doors and trying to desperately locate Izzie and Ollie. He is unable to find them, as the fire finally reaches the heated liquor battles and a second huge explosion tears through the pub. It bursts through the structure of the pub with debris flying everywhere. The camera pans into the remainders of upstairs with everywhere covered with fire…Frank and Andrea are definitely dead, and so are Cain, Thomas, Izzie and Ollie. Outside, Diana stirs and Samantha cries. “Where’s Thomas?” Diana shouts, as Samantha looks up at the boring pub in horror. “Mum!” Will shouts, rushing towards them as the fire fighters attempt to put the fire in the pub out.

Across the estate, the police officers put Bianca in a car as Elissa watches in horror. Joe and Emily cry at the door to their house, and Bianca puts her hand on the window, crying, before the police car drives off. Joe and Emily break down, as Elissa sits on the wall with a blanket behind her, staring at them evilly and talking to a police officer at the same time. Outside The West House, George pulls up in a brand new sports car as Tanya, Jackie and Ziggy get out. “Woah!” Ziggy explains as George smiles. “I got lucky, now get in!” George says, and they do, before the whole family speed off in the sports car. Inside Heather’s house, Daz and Heather stare at each other in silence with Daz having released Heather from her bounds. She breaks down crying, as he looks at her disgusted. The screen fades to black.

[Jack.]

Thank you so much cal for writing such a great episode :)

[Cal.]

It's no problem Jack:)

[Nick.]

Wonderful last episode Cal :spin: An exciting and gripping conclusion! It's a shame to see The Estate ending. :( The fire in the pub was a tense way to end things and left the soap on a cliffhanger! Superb work Cal and great work throughout The Estate's run Jack. :cheer2:

[Jack.]

Wonderful last episode Cal :spin: An exciting and gripping conclusion! It's a shame to see The Estate ending. :( The fire in the pub was a tense way to end things and left the soap on a cliffhanger! Superb work Cal and great work throughout The Estate's run Jack. :cheer2:

:hug: Thanks nick :) Cal's episode was amazing :)

[Daniel-X]

Read the first few episodes really like this :)

[Jack.]

Read the first few episodes really like this :)

Thanks :)

[Cal.]

Read the first few episodes really like this :)

Read the last one ;)

The others aren't worthy of your time;)

[Daniel-X]

Read the last one ;)

The others aren't worthy of your time;)

:laugh:

I'm guessing the last one is written by you ;)

[Jack.]

:laugh:

I'm guessing the last one is written by you ;)

Yeah the last one was written by who is she :laugh:

[Jack.]

I really miss writing this now :bawling: