Finding the words.

[Shaun]

wut

[Lewis.]

Wow! I Love it :lovedup:

[Magic]

Ohh, I really really like it. I think you have used some good words and metaphors, but to one bit seem a bit predictable?

''I crawl towards the exit, seeking air to breathe,
praying for escape from the tangled webs I weave''

No offense, but I swear similar stuff has featured in alot of poems, and I think to improve it, maybe bits like this good be revised?

Otherwise, I love it! Alot better than what I could do! Well done!

[Harry!]

Good poem!

[Shaun]

jesus