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mizzy25 13-02-2014 03:52 PM

Oh and Elissa surely must have been a little bit disturbed by the letter, cant wait to find out what that's all about.

Jack. 13-02-2014 06:23 PM

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Originally Posted by mizzy25 (Post 6708506)
Loving it lol thought Heather might have crashed with downing the vodka or something maybe? lol Its a bit like Eastenders that's a compliment by the way. I look forward to the next part.

Thanks :)

Jack. 13-02-2014 06:27 PM

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Originally Posted by mizzy25 (Post 6708507)
Oh and Elissa surely must have been a little bit disturbed by the letter, cant wait to find out what that's all about.

She is scared but she's putting on a face atm

Jack. 13-02-2014 10:11 PM

Episode four should be up in the next few days

Jack. 15-02-2014 09:49 PM

Episode 4 will be uploaded tomorrow

Natalie. 15-02-2014 10:06 PM

Love it Jack

Jack. 15-02-2014 10:06 PM

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Originally Posted by Morrissey (Post 6712998)
Love it Jack

Thanks Nat :)

Jack. 15-02-2014 10:15 PM

Daz will come into some money in episode 4. Quite a bit of money.

Jack. 15-02-2014 11:45 PM

Just to say episode four is set on valentines day :)

Jack. 16-02-2014 09:41 AM

Episode 4

The episode starts with Daz on the phone to the solicitors. Daz recently found out his grandad(Eric) had died. Daz and his grandad felt out when Daz came out as gay. Not long after they fell out Eric found out that he had Alzheimer's. Before they fell out Eric puts in his will that he want to give his house and his lifesaving to Daz. After Eric got Alzheimer's he forgot to change it. Daz is shocked when he finds this out. Daz arranges an appointment with the solicitors for later that day.

Meanwhile on the estate. Bianca is packing the suitcases. Bianca and the kids are heading off to Sandra's Villa in Spain. "Joe you are going to your Nan's villa not Magaluf. You don't need 50 condoms" Bianca tells Joe. Joe just looks at Bianca and smiles. As Bianca is packing the cases she starts too feel weird only packing three suitcases not four. "Emily Where have you put my red heels" Bianca shouts to Emily.

Over at Maya's flat. Maya and Jarrad are getting ready for there night out. "I look fat in this don't i?" Jarrad asks Maya. Maya tells him that he looks beautiful. There's a knock on the door. "Jarrad get the door I'm on the loo". As Jarrad opens the door he sees a saucy looking woman standing in from of him. It's Andrea Maya's mother. "Well are you going to let me in or what?" Jarrad has never met Andrea before. Andrea pushes Jarrad to the side as she walks into the flat. As Maya walks out the loo she is shocked to see her mother standing in front of her.

Back the Howlett household. Heather has been called to business meeting down London. Daz is left alone in the house. There is a knock on the door. It's George. Heather had arranged for George to come to hers for a few bottles. Heather however forgot to tell him that she would have to cancel. George walks in the house. He asks where Heather is "Didn't she tell you she's had to go down London" Daz tells George. Daz hears his phone ringing so he quickly rushes upstairs to get it. Leaving George alone downstairs. While Daz is upstairs George starts looking around the house. He notices a letter on the coffee table addressed to Daz. Just as George is about to pick it up. Daz comes back down the stairs.

Meanwhile at Maya's flat. Maya is confused why her mother has just turned up on her doorstep. Maya asks Andrea why she has come to see her. "Is it a crime now to come and visit my daugther" Andrea says. Maya knows that there is something going on. Maya asks Jarrad to go to pub for a while so she can talk to her mother. As soon as Jarrad leaves. Maya asks Andrea why she is actually here. Andrea tells Maya that her and Maya's father have split up and she has nowhere to stay.

T* 16-02-2014 09:52 AM

This is really good!

Jack. 16-02-2014 09:55 AM

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Originally Posted by Cuda (Post 6713478)
This is really good!

Thanks Tom :)

Jack. 16-02-2014 06:48 PM

If anyone would like to suggest a storyline for a character. Just pm me :)

mizzy25 16-02-2014 07:19 PM

very good enjoying it still.

Jack. 16-02-2014 07:26 PM

Thanks mizzy. Glad your enjoying it :)

mizzy25 16-02-2014 08:59 PM

I look forward to the next episode I love me soaps lol

Jack. 16-02-2014 10:41 PM

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Originally Posted by mizzy25 (Post 6714595)
I look forward to the next episode I love me soaps lol

You got to love them :joker:

Jack. 21-02-2014 06:36 PM


This April will see one of the estates most loved residents will be die in heartbreaking suicide scenes. The storyline will rock the community and bring them close together at this sad time.

Jack. 22-02-2014 11:43 AM

Episode 5 will be up in the next few hours :)

MTVN 22-02-2014 11:45 AM

Great stuff JackF

Jack. 22-02-2014 01:36 PM

Thanks MTVN :)

Jack. 22-02-2014 05:08 PM

The new website for the estate. It's not finished yet but you can have a look now.

http://theestate.inweby.info/section/7094

Jack. 22-02-2014 11:49 PM

Episode 5

The episode starts with Daz and George sitting on the sofa. Daz asks George if he wants a glass of wine. After Daz pours George a glass of wine they start talking about Heather. George tells Daz that he doesn't want a relationship with Heather, when Daz Asks why George tells him that she is too full on and that he just wants her for a easy ride. Daz tell George that he should tell Heather that he doesn't love her before it's goes to far.

Meanwhile on the estate. Andrea is at the pub drinking her sorrows away. As she looks up to order another drink she sees Thomas Potter in front of her. Andrea try's to chat Tom up. Tom Starts flirting with Andrea. Just as Andrea is about to give Tom her number Samantha walks around the corner. "Hiya Babe, I've missed you" Says Sam. As Tom helps Sam take her bags up the stairs he tells Andrea to leave her number behind the till for him and that he will ring her later.

Meanwhile At Elissa's office. Elissa is busy finishing off one of her articles when she gets a text on her phone saying the following'Think I'm going to let you get away with the **** you have caused my family. You better sleep with one eye open I'm always watching you" Elissa quickly writes down the number it was sent for before quickly ringing. But went she rings the mobile there is no answer. Elissa is starting to worry after what happened the other week. Elissa quickly rushes out of her office and heads to the police station.

Back at Heathers house. Daz and George are enjoying. George doesn't like Daz that much. George is only staying at the house with him because of the free wine that is there. Daz goes to get another bottle of wine. As Daz is walking back to the sofa he falls over Georges feet and falls on top off George. Daz looks into George eyes. Daz kisses George on the lips. George quickly pushes Daz off"What the hell do you think your doing,You queer" says George, Daz tells George that he thinks it's time for him to leave.

Meanwhile at Maya's flat. Andrea is sitting at the kitchen table waiting for a text or phone call from Tom. Maya walks in the kitchen to make a cup of tea. "Do you want a cuppa mum" Maya asks. Andrea leaves her phone on the table while she goes to the loo. Just as Andrea get to the loo Maya here's her mothers phone going off. So she picks up the phone to see who it is. Just as Maya is about to look at the message Andrea walks back in"What the hell do you think your doing with my phone" Andrea asks Maya. Maya tells her that she heard it go off so see went to look who it was.

Jack. 23-02-2014 10:07 AM

Feedback is welcomed :)

Kate! 23-02-2014 11:38 AM

It's great Jack, starting to know the characters a bit, like that you've got different story strands ongoing :)


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