I very much doubt that is anything other than platitudes from pals but good luck anyway and by the way if you scoff at radio and daytime im afraid you have no idea what you are on about regarding PR.

I haven't scoffed at anything and the platitudes are from people who dont even know us. But again. thank you for the feedback. It is duly noted

Donna was great, Moira as maybe a bit over egged, and it definitely needs more characters, writing is good, the accent needs toning down, I struggled at times, not sure if that is their accent or they are putting it on :worry:

Thank you Cherie

Much appreciate xxx

Moira seems too over the top annoying, but I agree that it needs other characters and customer interactions.

As it's set in St Helens, I'll give you a joke you can use.

There's only two things I love about St Helens, the rugby players and the beautiful women. What position do you play Donna?

I'm not keen on "Don't look back in anger"as the theme tune.

The Royle Family had an Oasis theme tune, it's been done.

What about." We built this city on sausage rolls" or "I love sausage rolls" which is a take on "I love rock n roll" or "If I knew you were coming I'd have baked a cake"

That could be a customers line...an old man with a cap who comes in daily.

Bumped for those that missed it

New Trailer added for MOVIE STAR MOMS

...Kiki and Sandra...Queens :lovedup:....

Okay, Gregory's Girls to be picked up by BBC Three :clap1:

I get Charity Shop Sue vibes - crossover waiting to happen?

Not really my thing, but I congratulate you for getting off your arse and following your dreams.

Thank you so much :) xx

Our latest project has been for Radio. A weekly Viral character called Val from Anfield. Every week she rings into Paul Beesleys show on BBC Radio Merseyside to have a chat and offer advice. This week wants to chat about her favourite tv show Rupauls Drag Race

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oPR1me0xYfM&t

Its a great platform for us during this pandemic as it means we get to keep writing and its being heard on rather a prestigious platform